The Loser in the White-Haired Sword Girl's Arms Has Long Been Invincible.

The author of this book should be a newcomer and his voice is immature. Although there are many problems, it is at least better than those stones with more than 8 points. This book feels like writing it for yourself. The author needs to work hard.

It may be based on the sword girl of the God of Thieves family. It is very similar, but it also has its own writing style. It just feels a bit fragmented. Come on, the author.

🌈💭 Hello, I am an ordinary migrant worker. I accidentally saw your photo and I like you very much. But I am just an ordinary migrant worker. I have no money. Can you give yourself to me? I hope you will not be ignorant of praise.

From what I have read so far, the writing style may be a little lacking, but it is good for a novice author. Although the male protagonist hides his strength, he is not aggrieved or deliberately. The whole text is interspersed with daily life, and the daily life is sweet. Although the emotional line is a bit fast at the beginning, the yandere has become a little more reasonable and not too poisonous. In summary, it is a good book. It has the blood of battle and the sweetness of daily life. Don't ask for too much. It is already very good for newcomers. The above are all my personal thoughts. If you don't like it, don't criticize it. Thank you [laugh] [laugh] [laugh] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss]

666, This newly written book does not look like a new book. If it doesn't collapse later, the score will definitely be high. Although it is not as good as other people's nine-point writing style, and it still has a little childish feel, it is still acceptable as a sweet article. I can recommend it.

Good-looking, good-looking, you are such a good citizen

It's okay, it's pretty good. I like watching this type of sweet love.

Not bad, pretty good-looking, I like it. [Sinister smile]

I'll give you 5 days and 15 chapters of rewards [laughing evilly]

Not bad, but the sweetness is a little better, a bit like industrial saccharin

It's okay, but the connection is not very good. It looks a little fragmented. Just add some transitions.

It looks good. I like it. I like it.

Come on, author, it's beautiful.

This time I won't divide it into batches, I will clear it directly. The author is very friendly and chatting in the group. [Sending Hearts] This book is also my favorite.

The writing style needs to be improved, the heroine is very cute, it's a very interesting article

I really like little lolita (I am not a lolita fan!!!)

It's nice but the author is too short at the moment. ... Damn it, I made a mistake. There are still 45 chapters that I can't watch anymore. Although I picked a few that I could read, I still can't do it. It took me a day to finally finish it. I was so disappointed. I watched (⋟⋞)

Good luck to the author!

It looks good, I love watching it, the highlight is the white hair

Not bad, although there are some minor problems, I can still read it.

There is indeed a sense of fragmentation

I can't wait to see it now.

It looks good. I like to watch pretending to be a pig and eating a tiger [shy][shy]

The characters are well drawn.

Still looks good

An Hongdou, hehe, hehe🤤🤤

Have a look, the author keeps up the good work!

This heroine gives me a sense of déjà vu in Anchorage

The heroine is dumbfounded, she likes her so much and loves me so much

It's purely a monster with excessive numerical values. Don't pay too much attention to how they met. Just watch their daily interactions. The author's writing is a bit green, but it can be seen that he is still thoughtful.