As a Gal Who Traveled Through Time, I Am Also Trying to Survive in the Cracks Today.

Having finished writing, this is the author's final comfort to himself. When I reach the middle of writing, I think about the ending. I must finish it and give myself a five-star review with peace of mind. This belief is like a carrot tied in front of the horse, supporting me forward. I have to say that the process of writing a book is really not easy, and I understand the difficulty of every author through my own experience. It's funny to say that nowadays, when reading novels, one can no longer maintain a pure reader's mind. I unconsciously pay attention to the choice of words, sentences, and rhythm of writing. I was originally slow in reading books, but now I am even slower hahaha. Originally, the reason for this article was to complain about the vinegar-wrapped dumplings, but as I was writing about it, I suddenly felt like, huh? It seems that I can produce my own food in a sense, and judging from everyone's comments, I should write that it's pretty good. I can't help but think of some gals who are extremely torturous to play with, so that I won't be so embarrassed in the future. Thank you to every friend who clicked in to watch. Regardless of whether you have finished watching or not, the moment you clicked in, we became friends.

Nice. The world view setting is a bonus. Bugs, hackers, and people who are constantly unlocking have a sense of accomplishment as they are gradually completed. However, the progress of the main line is relatively slow. It is not yet obvious that there are many things that have been slowly increasing the popularity. But in terms of daily scenes, it is excellent. The character interactions are not awkward or forced, and the heroine's behavior is also smooth and consistent. She does what she should do, but it becomes weird when the system is involved. The dialogue is a bit artificial, and the use of props feels very forceful, as if the system is chosen to be a tool in order to complete a specific plot. In addition, due to personal preferences, the interaction between the protagonist and the heroine is excellent. The protagonist is not in a completely weak and passive position like the common weak loli, but has room for initiative. The distance between the protagonist and the heroine is currently comfortable, not too oppressive, but there is also a good interaction. To put it clearly, both sides will blush. At least I hope that I can maintain the gentleness and attentiveness in interactions in the future.

As a fan of Lily and galgame, I am very happy to find such a dual-element novel. I stayed up for five hours to read the full text. Whether it is the plot arrangement, the rhythm of the writing, or the recycling of foreshadowing, it really impressed me. I hope the author can also achieve a happy ending like a novel in the line of life, and then continue writing the novel Jie Jie Jie [Flowing Kiss]

It's great. There are very few stories that I can read from beginning to end without getting bored. It's delicate and gentle. Everyone has their own story and character. They won't be distorted to rationalize certain plots. The writing style is also very soft. It's not a God's perspective. Around Xiaobai, the daily life with a slight warmth is clearly revealed. The tenderness, firmness, and friendship of the girl are all beautiful. It makes my heart warm, and I have a sense of satisfaction that is about to be burned by the light of love and beauty into ashes that dissipate along with the wails (Serenity. Jpg

I saw the exam, and there are too few in the back. I have to enter the main story. I really love the slow pace. When I first entered the main story, it was a bit slow, but it was okay. Emotional accumulation and foreshadowing are very important. If it is not enough, it is nothing. At the moment, I am eating sweets, and I am going to have diabetes if I eat them, but I guess I will have to work hard on the main plot in the future, starting from the exam. The sugar in Chapter 140 will determine whether the knife is sharp or not. Of course, before that, feel free to eat it. This book is definitely qualified as a text about eating sugar and relaxing. I will make a detailed evaluation when it reaches its climax.

It's very good. If the author is writing it for the first time, I think he is really a genius. The subject matter is also very good. All the content of about 180 chapters has been covered. It condenses the essence and avoids visual fatigue and poisonous points caused by too long length. The rhythm of the plot is very well controlled, but it is a pity that it is not popular. I think the most suitable length of Lily article is 200. Chapters or so or less, too long to write anything. In fact, everyone's daily life is extremely repetitive when writing about daily life. Some authors can't think of what to write the next day and just skip to time. However, just skipping does not push the plot or the main line. The rhythm is not well controlled, resulting in 200 chapters, 300 hugs, kiss me, 400 chapters, 500 chapters, sure. The relationship is too long and I lost interest after halfway through it. There is also a scam in the introduction. I read a book about a gender-transformed beautiful girl Cthulhu a few days ago. The introduction is about the protagonist and the official power beautiful girl and the villain beautiful girl pulling back and forth. The text becomes a royal upgrade flow, the heroine becomes a pendant, a lot of nonsense, a medium amount of fighting and a small amount of posts. I can only say that this kind of is invincible, and there are some The introduction is summarized in paragraphs. I like to put the content in the middle and later parts of the whole book. I can't forget what I was attracted by the introduction. The author jumps over and over again and always writes some content that is irrelevant to the introduction. When it comes to the actual content, it is no longer interesting. These are some of my views on this platform Baihewen. Alas, I am also a god when I write such words. I don't have much opinion about the author of this book. To me, it's excellent. I think you are a genius.

The emotional description between the two heroines is really great, especially Wen Yun's tangled psychology in the middle period. Moreover, the whole article has a feeling that no character is superfluous. In the author's words, it is like a stage play. The foreshadowing has been eliminated, the whole article is written smoothly, and the great echoes between the beginning and the end make this article seem to form a perfect closed loop. The world view is very novel, and the description of Xiao Hei is very unique. After I finished watching it at three o'clock in the evening, I was really unsatisfied, as if I had deleted my memory and watched it again. The only pity is that there are too few people and the author is no longer updated [crying]. This is truly the only book I have read to the end among the hundreds of books I have read.

In the past, every time I finished reading a book, I would feel a sense of loss, but after reading Tomato, I felt less and less. This is one of the few times. This book is really full of details. The first part is about cute daily life, which is very interesting and eye-catching in itself. And at the end, there was a divine twist, which made me suddenly melancholy. Interesting setting, interesting plot, and god-like conception. After reading it, I feel that it needs to be imprinted in my mind to feel worthy of this experience and Mo Xiaobai's life.

It's very well written, and I personally think it's very sweet, the kind of daily sweetness. In the early stages, it may be a little boring, but it's okay. The more you connect the previous clues in the later stages, the better it becomes. This kind of book in which everyone has a role is my favorite type. It's really beautiful [laughs]

From the beginning to the end, I was left with it when I first started watching it. Among the bunch of buggy black guys, Xiaofenmao was the only special screen heroine, and then developed step by step. The interaction between the system and Xiaobai was also very interesting. It was really beautiful to watch the end. It was a very innocent and romantic development. The emoticon Xiaobai infected Xiaowen, and there were a bunch of strategy partners. It must be top-notch.

A rare piece of pure writing, beautifully written

It's so beautiful,,,,,,, the interaction between the little ones is so cute (๑• . •๑)

The writing is pretty good

It looks good. I was attracted by the setting at first, and thought it was a pseudo-harem 1V1 with divided timelines, but no, the other heroine has always been Wen Yun. The initial relationship was quite interesting, and the youthful feeling of secret love in the later part was also beautifully described. Overall, it is a very good lily novel.

It's nice to see the emotional development of the two protagonists. The female protagonist is stronger but insensitive in her outlook on love. Although the protagonist is weaker, she is proactive in her outlook on love. Overall, this book is very good.

It's awesome, the pace is really good, there's really a desire to keep watching, and the emotional development is very smooth. It's just that it's a bit tiring to watch too much at once, but it's always fresh every time you open it again.

This book is really good to read, but I don't know why the rating is so low. It's pure 1v1, the plot is mostly about candy and only a small part about knives, and there is even a battle of wits (fog?). You can watch it.

It looks good, and all the pitfalls have been filled in later. It's good, but it's too short and not enough to watch at all. The ending part feels a little fast-paced. I hope there can be more sweet everyday stories.

Nice! I don't know why the popularity is so low and there are so few comments. All the characters are portrayed very tastefully, and there are no weird and unreal characters. And the overall atmosphere is very warm. Daily life is ordinary but not boring, I can read it in one sitting! In other books, I generally lose interest in the middle. The author writes so well [crying] It's really hard not to like this kind of beautiful little daily life I have read Chapter 140 so far. I guess that Xiaobai was confused by the wood demon because of playing in the corner, thinking that he is not from this world, but in fact he is. Okay, I guessed wrong, it was indeed time travel... In the end, it felt a little too confusing. It was obviously written in a daily light style throughout the book, but in the end, I went to a parallel world and then returned to the future. To be honest, I didn't understand it. If you download it, I hope you can stop confusing all these things and make the settings simpler. 🥺

It's a pity that we can't have a family reunion together.

Very nice, five stars! Grain, good-looking

It looks good, and the interaction is very well written.

It's quite good. I didn't think I would finish it after looking at the ratings, but I still clicked on it with the small expectation of giving it a try. Generally speaking, the first and middle stages are sweet stories with a little bit of a main line. Although the later stages have a different atmosphere from the previous ones, the ending is good. In summary, it's good to watch!

It's interesting, come on, author

Quite interesting

Interesting setting, please give me some encouragement first

10 Or even 9 out of 10 looks good.

Very nice, the subject matter is also good

Sweet, beautiful and well-written

Treasure novel, worth reading It's over. Thank you for accompanying me all the way. I still hope that Xiaobai and Wen Yun can be happy [Sparrow Food Masterpiece]