Reborn in Investiture of the Gods: Tongtian Slays Yuanshi Tianzun from the Start

From Chapter 17, when the leader of the Tongtian cult kills his second brother, 20 pictures are almost enough to finish it. Hongjun and the others actually let him go and wait for him to become stronger to kill you. Alas, I originally wanted to read it before commenting, but he has already killed the saint. So, first of all, it seems that I am the first person to see 17 pictures from the first chapter after reading this novel for so long. When it comes to not being happy, it seems that there is only anger or..., Let alone the seventeen pictures, maybe it is like this in chapter 52 now. Secondly, I feel that except for him, everyone else in Tongtian is an old yin..., He is like this, Tongtian thinks that his eldest brother, second brother, especially the eldest brother have stolen something. But since he killed his second brother, only Patriarch Hongjun said that this thing originally belonged to me. Now what, you are talking about your brother, but why don't they have that scene? If you have written it, why do you do it? The third point is that I feel that there is something missing in this book. What do you say? Tongtian said hello, then I said hello, Nuwa Empress asked where it was, Hongjun Patriarch said eating, Duobao said where is this, it should be Is this the case? If you ask about gentleness and embarrassment, add a name in front and then talk about it, so I feel there is something wrong with it. The fourth point is that Tongtian is actually with Xuanming and Houtu Empress. It is okay to be together, but in this novel, it feels not very good. The writing is not happy, it is just ordinary. Why, for example, I read a Maoshan novel written like this. That Maoshan has lived hundreds of years. It seems that he went to Ashan or Qingyun Mountain and forgot, or there are other things. He beat me like this 90 years ago, and he still beats me now. I can't bear it, etc. , There are lively laughs, etc. The fifth point of the list of gods can be written, but it can be finished after finishing it. There is no need to write it in Journey to the West. They are all torn apart. Why don't Hongjun ancestor Tongtian and the others take action? It just depends on the enemy getting stronger slowly. What are they still doing in this world? The sixth point is that I feel that I am very smart and others are so stupid. When I wrote about Yuanshi Tianzun, I had just killed him for his younger brother. Since I said this later, it probably means don't blame me. Wait, your cultivation level has retreated. Even if you don't retreat to the ninth level, you are only at the fourth or fifth level. The seventh point is that saints don't just kill when they say it. If you kill this person with too high combat power, what will you do if people from outside the world attack you? There is a novel written like this. In the transformation stage, some insects or other planes are sealed at the entrance of the cave. If they are allowed to come out, there will be world disasters and so on. The eighth point is the first time I read the novel Tongtian killed his own two brothers. Most of the others are about severing ties or not separating families or being normal, etc., But they are not so extreme. That's it, my personal opinion and suggestion Forgot, there are a few more. The first Tongtian leader said these two sentences are quite good. The first sentence is that Junior Brother Haotian came to visit Senior Brother Tongtian and asked for some manpower. Tongtian agreed, which is good. The second sentence was that Patriarch Hongjun asked the saints to come to a meeting to arrange the list of gods. Tongtian said one sentence, saying that Master, I have already given more than 100 to Junior Brother Haotian. Why should I give more to Junior Brother Haotian? This is what it means. It's good to take the initiative to serve in heaven, otherwise. The second Zhao Gongming asked them to serve in heaven, why did they have merit and virtue? Then Yuanshi Tianzun knew it and forced Haotian to give some positions to his disciples. At this point, those great emperors Zhao Gongming and others did not help his majesty. One or two is enough. Why does it seem that there are three more? You can ask Zhao Gongming and others to go to heaven to serve as emperors, marshals, etc. It seems that there are three Jiejiao and then there are three Chanjiao. Why is it that he is the only one who knows, why don't Nuwa and the others know, so they don't block it when they should. Moreover, Yuanshi Tianzun saw that Zhao Gongming had meritorious deeds in going to heaven. Why didn't Tongtian continue to send more people? Tongtian might have been invincible before Chapter 60, and the invincible could be finished.

Messy

It's very well written, I hope it doesn't end badly.

Well written and satisfying to read

Very beautiful and invincible