Ice Age: My Primitive Tribe

At present, the plot recommendations seem to be very logical, and at the same time there is no fantasy, such as orcs, super successors and other settings. If I don't collapse in the later stages of writing, I will keep chasing this book. The new book is well received. Come on, author [like]

It's very good, but it's too short. It seems to be an above-average level among foreign persimmons at the moment. There is a sense of survival in the wilderness at the beginning, but it is also because there are too few characters at the beginning, resulting in too many third-person voices, which affects the reading experience. It gets better later on.

So well written! First of all, there is no forced elevation. There is no section where cement is made in three days and iron ore is smelted in five days. Everything feels natural. In addition, always maintain a high-spirited and persevering spirit. The writing is also very fluent, with many golden sentences and little humor.

Come on, author, you want this kind of pure primitive era, no fantasy, no power different from ordinary people, what you want is the power close to normal human beings, pure survival

It's good-looking, doesn't have any superpowers, is comfortable to watch, and is palatable

At present, the writing is step-by-step, and it is worth reading. However, the protagonist has gray hair, which makes people feel a sense of urgency. Under the torrent of time, the new generation grows up, and the older generation gradually passes away. There is an uncontrollable feeling of powerlessness. The people behind will become impure and fight for power. After the death of the protagonist, it is estimated that There is nothing I can do. I hope the author can optimize the development direction in the later period. For example, after the death of the protagonist, he will be resurrected in his own bloodline in a later period of time, leading people through difficulties time and time again. Elements such as magic, bloodline, and immortality can be added. This book is the one I most hope to serialize after Gu Zhenren [shy].

It's good to watch, but I hope the protagonist can live forever. Although the plot transition is very short and there are not many words, 30 years old is still a bit old.

The plot is quite reasonable and interesting, except for the fact that the author has never done physical labor [please take a closer look]

As the reading progressed, I seemed to be led into a poetic spring, with emotions flowing naturally between the lines like a stream. However, near the end of the article, a sense of impatience arises spontaneously, which makes people feel a little bit regretful.

The pace is slow and the writing is smooth, but there are some contradictions. Revenge in the early stage, language communication barriers, and performance problems. The description of literacy training in the later stage is a bit sparse, and there are no pictures. Well, it was uncomfortable to watch in the early stage. It would be nice to have more books with potential. You should add longevity or stronger memory, similar abilities, or a golden finger

I finally found an Ice Age novel that has a clearer logic and stands alone! ! I was really speechless after reading several books before, just for the sake of refreshing... How can you build a wooden house in a day or two from the beginning, and look for food without considering the environment at all... To be honest, this novel is really good! !

It's very well written, and I have a lot to say, but I'm very lazy, so I can only say that it's very good and beautiful. There is no exaggeration like other books, it is like what really happened, and it deserves a review of five stars or more.

Very good, although there are still some subtle aspects that are not true, but you can't expect the author to be a supercomputer, right? Moreover, I read novels partly for the sake of truth, and partly for pleasure. I suffer in reality, and I also suffer when reading novels. Am I M?

In Tomato, it is considered a very good original text. After all, other original stories in Tomato can only be said to be not very good, or even non-existent. On average, every original text will turn into a dynasty development text in the later or middle period. But the most interesting part of the original text is the development in the early and mid-term. I will see if I can write it in very detail. However, after seeing more than 100 pictures, I found that the author started to press the accelerator button. I don't know if it will become a dynasty development and hegemony text in the future.

A very serious book that should meet the preferences of many people. Give the author a thumbs up. It's pretty good in the early stages, but the pace is a little slow in some places, and it feels a little too fast later on. Very beautiful, I love watching it haha.

It's very beautiful and very detailed. It's like following the protagonist as he works hard for survival.

Compared with other novels about traveling through the wilderness, the writing is very detailed and rigorous. Every invention is relatively difficult to obtain and is not achieved in one go. Although the time jumps too fast in the later period, it is already a relatively high-quality novel that I have read. I don't know why the rating is not as good as other novels. It would be nice to write more emotional scenes with Yun [Adoration]

I swear I'm not a bastard! I really like this type! ! ! It's just too short

Original + time travel text. Convert the cheat-system into human-primitive people… The logic is okay... "What primitive humans have is the survival code about this land accumulated through countless generations of life."

Pure original text❤️The IQ is online, the protagonist also knows a lot, there is no messy totem power or fantasy plot

This is the only wilderness novel that I think is good. It has no poisonous points and is very good! You must have a career! Why is the rating so low? I prefer reading this type of novels. Many people write poorly and have no experience in life. It is rare to find a book that is good and reasonable. Many people in the comment area said it was unreasonable. How come no one said it in the same type of comment area? Good books should be seen by more people! The author knows how to write in primitive times, and the most important thing is about communication language. Others write just to rely on modern language. Hope there will be more updates! Collected!

In the future, the protagonist should be the super ancestor who pioneered house building, bows and arrows, traps, writing, language, clothing, animal husbandry, farming, water control, bronze ware, shipbuilding, etc.

It didn't take long to read, but this book is like a home-cooked stir-fry that suddenly appeared among a bunch of cheap snacks. This writing style has surpassed 99% of Tomato authors.

It looks pretty good so far, keep going.

Update quickly, update quickly, 6 updates a day, the writing is very good, the pace is slower, you can write longer, author, don't be impatient

Very well written, very detailed and very touching

I like this kind of journey from scratch to something through my own efforts. The description of this book is delicate and the plot is ups and downs. It is very attractive.

It's really easy to explain in the early stages. But in the middle and later stages, I don't know if the author was very busy or something. There's a sloppy feeling that the outline process needs to be completed as soon as possible, but you can take a look.

It's good, but it's just too short. It's a novel article. It's my first time reading it anyway. It's pretty good, but there are a few minor flaws, but nothing major.

It's very nice to look at. It's very comfortable to look at as the tribe develops little by little. The disadvantage is that the mentality change is relatively average at the beginning. Overall, it is good to watch. My evaluation is that it is worth staying up late to watch.