The Undead Writer Just Wants a Good Ending

Well written, rewards the author for falling down the rabbit hole

An incredible country dedicated to you, my beloved To this stage of despair, I offer a curtain call called love

It's a very good book. The previous book was originally chaotic, but now the author has added some supplements. The original characters have been added in descriptions without breaking through the personality of the original characters. There are very few or almost no sticking points. On the contrary, there are unexpected surprises. Although this book has changed the skin of the original protagonist of the previous work, and replaced the previously chaotic protagonist with a more real and vivid person, it has given the NPCs in the original work a clear direction in their relationship. They really fell in love with Green from a certain aspect, and various experiences have allowed us to understand them better as NPCs. This book is no less than the original work. If the author had changed the name and the cover, it would have been a brand new story, an adventure unique to the author.

It's beautiful! The chaotic and disorderly plot of the original work becomes clear through the author's description, clearly showing the chaotic and crazy darkness in front of you. The characters have very distinct personalities and there is no OOC. I really cried watching Billion Old Grimm, an incredible country dedicated to you, my beloved.

Wow ~ Green's new story! Kuhehehe

One of the few Dark Souls fan works. Not bad, there are no opportunities for chaos in the original work.

It's a very good book. There are additional introductions to the character's experiences in the book. Even those who have never played it will still be motivated to read it. The suspense setting is just right, the writing is also very good, and there are not too many flaws (come to see more of what we like to read 😍). That is, if you want to read it, try not to read it. This type of book is not very good, and if you read it, it will easily lead to death. Among the BS books I have read, it can be considered a five-star level.

Very good novel, made me Mary. Su Xuan

Blacksouls is a special monument built in the digital realm. It's not for everyone, or even most people. Its strong psychological stimulation is enough to constitute a reminder. But for those players seeking thought experiments, eager to experience the ultimate narrative in a virtual world, and brave enough to face profound dilemmas, what it offers is a unique and unforgettable journey. It does not give an answer, but only allows people to see where they choose to gaze at the intersection of human nature and nothingness. And all the souls who think about it have become its most vivid footnotes. What it reflects is that real growth is not about avoiding difficulties, but about being able to think in the midst of complexity. No matter how heavy that experience is, what it leaves you is ultimately your own answer. And being able to move forward with this answer is already proof that you have walked through that land [grass has been planted]

Yes, the writing is very good, and it also shows the personality of the bs2 characters very well, as well as the description of the bs2 map. Of course, the author will be rewarded with a good life (the power of the green bug scepter~) [laughing]

It's good to read, and the bs plot is very complete. I just don't know what identities Green Worm and Lake will enter. There shouldn't be any intersection between Green and Green Worm in this book, otherwise Green would give his blessing [laughter]

Needless to say, I'm a bs fan, and the story is very good. I successfully changed the game into a novel, and the change was very good. I hope it can be done, but it's a pity. Thank you, the change is good, I regard you as real sushi [laughs]

Only real BS players will realize how good this book is. The characters have a sense of reality and the plot in the original work is also explained.

Very good work, makes my dodo spin … I really want to play BS and BS2, but I have always been afraid that it will be too dark or scary. My ability to withstand knives is too low. I am willing to be scolded by cloud players because knives are scarier. Looking at the current direction, it's pretty happy. I hope it ends well. But I feel like the classic words of the original work, such as the emotion that I will never forget even after three turns... Maybe there will be more emotional plots in the future when I look back and express them? Anyway, keep going [crying]

It's very well written, but... The author hasn't updated it in three days. I don't know if I should continue reading, maybe I won't get a tangible ending in the end... But... Maybe, the author will see my message. How about continuing to complete this work? Anyway, keep going... White Bear: Our Norden is monopolized by that man... God... Please do something!

Currently 71 chapters. Looking at it now, I feel that this book has no shortcomings worth complaining about. (Actually, it's just too short and I don't have much of an impression. By the way, three chapters were posted today. I'll probably be able to read it after another month.) The setting in the book is a combination of reality and games. Compared with the game, there will be an extra memory line of the main personality in the "real world". I don't know how to set this point? I'm a little bit looking forward to the plot when it's revealed.

I haven't seen such a pure BS article in a long time. Author, you must keep writing! Otherwise, I can only play five games😭😭😭

Conclusion: It's very immersive and very good-looking, but you can't enjoy watching it all at once. I always felt that Green lacked the feeling of being desperate for his own safety. I originally thought that the strength of the second round would be stronger, but the perception was not as good as the first round. However, it may be that the current intensity cannot push Green to the limit. Green lacks the feeling of a male protagonist. Compared with before, it feels too bland now, and the author is too slow [face covering]

Beautiful writing power, almost perfect design and adaptation, delicate characterization and self-consistent combat logic. Thank you for bringing a more complete, rich and vivid BS2 to me.

It seems that the score is low, but in fact all the Greens are here [face covering] [face covering]

I've only read Chapter 10 so far, and I'm a little curious as to how the author will write the plot of Green's choice of QF. After all, this is how the Easter egg of Chromospermosaurus is triggered.

Let me summarize first: a bs fanfic that is definitely worth reading (it's a pity that I haven't finished bs1 yet, but this book starts with the plot of bs2) First of all, as a fanfic, the same design is definitely there. The world view and overall style, as well as the overall atmosphere creation are actually no different from the style of BS. In terms of plot, due to the reading time and the confusing narrative of the bs itself, I won't comment too much (although I haven't received many negative reviews, but I don't know why the rating of this book just can't go up) The writing is actually very good, and at least the overall coherence seems okay. I hope the author will continue to work hard! Chapter 300 unfolds the plot of bs2 in great detail. Volumes 1 and 2 are well connected, and the atmosphere is stronger. It's beautiful.

... Hiss, what should I say? The overall plot of the work follows the original work, and some new characters (such as the Puss in Boots) and plots (such as fighting the Cheshire Cat and being detoxified by Xisha) are added to the original work. The writing style is generally above average, with no obvious traces of AI. The sequence of finding the crazy bird is a bit unexpected. Anyway, I'll start with these first, and I'll talk about the rest later (after all, I've only read more than 40 chapters, and I can't tell much about the plot framework)

At dusk in July, The setting sun reflects the sunset, The boat ripples forward like a dream. Three children cuddled together, eager eyes, expectant ears, Listen to the simple story. The clear sky has already turned pale, Echoes and memories fade away, Autumn frost replaces July. Alice's phantom still lingers, Although I can't see it, But she still dances in the sky. The children are still leaning together, eager eyes, expectant ears, Fascinated by beloved stories. They are in a wonderland, The years pass by in dreams, The sunset sets in the west in a dream. Floating down the creek, Ripples under the golden afterglow, Is life just a dream?

Maybe it's because of different understandings. Cheshire Cat Quotes: Everyone just wants to act like an adult, nya♡ No matter which one is clumsy in love, they will jump directly to stage AB and enter stage C at once, meow hee hee♡ But this is natural♡ Even if you put on the outer skin, an outsider will never be able to understand the human heart, nya♡ I should be aware of this kind of thing, so I'm a coward who won't take action no matter how long it takes, nya♡ Meow haha♡ Haah♡ That thing is really piled up too much♡ I am so scared of the coming collapse that I can't stand it meow♡ Yeah♡ That's why I've been stagnant, nya♡ Obviously you have exposed that emptiness, and you should have understood that some things need time♡ After reading this paragraph, you will know what kind of psychology Nailisi is. In fact, she is really a "girl in love" The defeat of CG also shows that Nyalis just loves Green.

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The writing is very delicate and can be regarded as a rare masterpiece. The only shortcoming is that the plot of the novel must be based on the background of Dark Souls 2. For readers who have not been exposed to the game, the plot may be a bit confusing, but overall it is still a very good BS fanfic👍

In the atmosphere of tomato novels, it is already considered top-notch. It's a pity that niche themes are not popular. There isn't much of a problem with the writing. It's top-notch in every aspect. The only thing that is not top-notch is the niche subject matter.

Author, you are so diligent! Diligence! So diligent! ! ! Why! Why! Why! Why why! I have never found such a diligent and hard-working author before! My dereliction of duty! My dereliction of duty! My dereliction of duty! How lazy I am! Lazy! Lazy! Lazy! Sloth! Please forgive my laziness! ——The brain is shaking! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

It is very consistent with the original work but also adds some extra plot, so people who have never played it can also understand it.