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This book is very complicated for me personally. If there are friends who are as sensitive to the basic combat power setting of the original work as I am, then they will feel the same as me. Let me first tell you how this book is. Putting aside the basic setting of the original work, this is a good fanfic. Then some friends will ask, why don't you give it five stars? Good question! At the beginning, I mentioned that I was sensitive to the settings of the original work, but the author did not give the original combat power settings such as secret methods, power generation methods, and superposition. So why is this book so good? Hey👆! The author cleverly transformed his reasonable understanding of the original work into a way that the public can see that there is no problem at all, and the flaws are not concealed for us to read. The common saying is that the author pulled us into his dimension and performed UFO on us, hahaha. In short, as long as you don't doubt whether the skills passed down are secret techniques, whether they are secret techniques and how many times the power is superimposed, this book is very good.

The content is well written. Just when to add a female protagonist. The kind that the original work has.

The level of this book is so high that it doesn't look like a tomato. In the early stage, concise language was used to speed up the plots that appeared in the original work. In the later stage, the original plot was developed very well, and the writing style was acceptable.

The Hunting Star God is revenge. There is no perception. Only light is

I still love it. I hope the author will work hard and the logic must be appropriate. I also hope that Luo Feng's role will not be missing. Can there be two protagonists? It doesn't matter if the heroine has it or not, as long as it's not a poisonous point.

Why not just call the protagonist Lan? Is the surname Luo because Luo Feng's surname is Luo?

Good looking, a masterpiece from Devouring Starry Sky fandom

Hunting, hunting, hunting [crazy]

That being said, it's pretty good.

Okay, it's still pretty good-looking. Of course, since all plug-ins are provided, why not add a little more? There are so many Mi homes, just move them around [Like][Like]

Support, type is rare come on!

I think the writing is quite good. Why is the score so low? I came early. [What] it's rare to see a good Devouring fanfic on Tomato.

It's nice to look at, but it's a pity that the hunting in Bengtieli, at least as far as I'm concerned, has nothing to do with hunting, it's just a little bit about the ability.

It looks good. Tomato doesn't have many Devouring Star fandoms.

This book is very interesting and has its own characteristics. I recommend it to those who like Iron Breaking and Swallowing.

Why not buy a smart life? It will make shopping much easier and it is also an important assistant.

Why is it being punished? Is it because the platform has no copyright?

Perfect, the score is too low, it looks like there should be no female protagonist, the battle is very well written, and it doesn't follow the original plot, and it doesn't lick the protagonist, in short it's great