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Make an objective evaluation and give me some suggestions. First of all, in terms of plot, because she is a nanny, the heroine may be kind-hearted, which is acceptable, but I hope it can be written more reasonably. After all, in the dungeon, it is better not to be a brainless virgin. For example, the first world was handled very well, because the parents of the original owner did make the heroine feel loved, so it is normal and reasonable for the heroine to worry about them. However, the heroine and her friend in the story about the Human Skin Inn have actually just met. Faced with her tragic experience, you can feel worried and sympathetic, or you can try your best to change it, at least you will not have a conscience, but there is no need to put yourself in trouble for an unfamiliar script NPC, and readers will feel aggrieved. In terms of relationships, although he is a heartthrob, there is no need to arrange a plot where a man with a girlfriend likes the heroine, because the girls in this article are all very good and like the heroine very much. Arranging such a plot is really unfriendly to the girls. Although they may not care, it is really not good! ! ! And don't arrange intimate scenes with the heroine for this kind of guy! She looks a bit alienated, and everyone is fascinated by her. My daughter is so beautiful, so I just need to use less crooked melons and cracked dates to get my hands on her. It feels like she doesn't match her. Men can be bad (after all, they are all so beautiful), but they can't be so low. The above are some suggestions. I think it will be much better if I change them, because except for these relatively ridiculous ones, the rest of the writing is very good. I really like it. This is the first time I write a book review so seriously. I hope you can read it [Blow kiss] The author is really listening to the suggestions, and his writing is getting better and better. I asked some questions before, but I forgot to praise the author. First of all, I think the plot of other anchors playing the boss is relatively novel, and it really poked me. There will definitely be a lot of Shura fields in the end, I'm really looking forward to it. Although she is a female grandmother, the author's writing style does not make people feel awkward. I feel that my sister is also growing up. My previous comments touched on some red flags and may dissuade everyone, but I can really go for it because I am really changing it! Don't let go of this beloved author! [Blowing kiss]

It's great to watch. The plot speed is well controlled. It's a pleasure to watch! ! I have read many other books of the same type. The rhythm of this one is the most to my liking. Why are you a newbie, madam? Why is this article so short now? I can't read the others. The female protagonist is cute and never feels wronged, and the male protagonists are also very intelligent. The plot is also very refreshing. Although in some places it feels like the heroine relies on her body to get through, the meat is delicious, and from a subjective point of view, being able to serve so many handsome guys for free is not considered selling meat.

Good-looking, still good-looking. But maybe the heroine in the script of Human Skin Inn was too worried about NPCs, but if your life is in danger, you have to stay. Who in the right mind doesn't want to run away quickly?

(｡•̀ᴗ-)Nice The writing is great. The plot is very coherent and the emotional lines are rich. I like the heroine's baby. She will not be inferior in the emotional lines with men. She has her own opinion. It's not the kind of mindless love. Super cute heartthrob Meow Meow Meow. The subject matter is also relatively new. It is a system-type American horror series. I enjoyed watching it. Of course, it would be better if it had more meat. I want to know if the boss in Big Eyes has an ID [Sending Hearts] All in all, it's just not enough to watch. I want to support Yangwen but I'm afraid I'll die. Meow Meow Meow [Love]

Nice! Super pretty! The heroine design is definitely not a drag like the Virgin White Lotus. There are some plots that really reflect the behavior of foreign young people seeking death [face covering] [face covering] [face covering] and also how it felt like it ended suddenly! ! ! What happens next? What about the extra story? After the heroine returns home, what will happen to the men in the system? Everything else was very good and well written, but the ending was not satisfying [crying][crying][crying][crying]

I love watching it. I don't know if anyone understands me. I just like to see the cute and confused girl surrounded by wolves in the system space. Hehehe, it's so twisted and perverted. I like it so much. ੭ ᐕ)੭*⁾⁾

It looks good. It has the same style as other beauty novels. I like this kind of girl-girl heartthrob. Come on, goddess, I will keep following the updates.

Help! It ended too quickly, I haven't seen the heroine having sex with them yet! Some of the murderers in it are aborigines, some are characters played by players. All the men and women who are fans of the heart-throb attribute dote on the heroine, but they don't see any stories between the player and the heroine in the game lobby. The main content is the copy plot, and there is a lot of broth.

I can't find anything about the theme, style and author of American Horror. The writing is superb! ! ! ! ! Super attractive attractive

After reading the first copy, I can only say, author, your name, if I usually don't read it, is there any chance to change the title of the book? [Pause face] [Pause face] This is the first time I have seen this type of American horror movie. So far, I feel it is okay. If you like the heroine type, you can check it out. In addition, I feel that the decryption of the copy is a bit sloppy and simple. I don't know what will happen next [Cheagua] Well, a while ago, another American horror novel was recommended to me on the home page, and I was blown away after reading it. In comparison, the bosses in each copy of this book are gentle and refreshing. After all, they are all clean and handsome guys who will pamper the heroine and hold it in the palm of their hands [face covering]

It's good-looking and fits my personality perfectly. It's also my favorite horror movie, but I can't accept kissing a girl. It's annoying to me [staring]

I haven't finished reading it yet, so I can't help but comment first. It's a very sweet and beautiful article about a female grandmother, full of sexual tension! It's too over the top, but I feel that there is too little content about the heroine staying in the system space. It's only one chapter or even half a chapter. There is almost no transition before starting the next script. I really want to see the reaction of the boss players when they meet the heroine in the system space. I want to see the Shura field of men! Also, does the author's setting actually mean that the script will continue after the heroine clears the level? It feels quite novel. Those aboriginal bosses are so miserable. From their perspective, the heroine disappears for no reason and may never be seen again. I immediately sympathize with them.

A very delicious article about a female grandmother💋💋Blessed are those who love to eat this. There are no surprises at all. The extreme heroine can't find anything wrong with it.

It's very, very good-looking, hurry up, the heroine is so cute, and the author's writing is getting better and better, the plot length is also good, and it's also very content, it's not embarrassing at all, it's very good-looking, the heroine can be rushed, the heroine is a heartthrob, but she's not brainless, she's very cute. [Adoration][Adoration]

It's very beautiful, exciting, don't stop [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [love] [heart] [love] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss]

It's really beautiful! ! Although she is a bit scared, the heroine is not particularly stupid, she is really cute! ! ! ! ! It seems that I have fallen deeply in love with Xixi's wife! ! Those who love watching this kind of stuff will really stop by! ! Very cool! !

It's good to watch, but there is too little food for American horror themes. Please keep writing [crying]

It's nice to read. More and more authors are writing this kind of books recently. I'm happy hehe.

Good-looking, so good-looking, big, hungry, hungry, ah ah ah ah ah [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss] [blowing kiss]

The writing is beautiful and the story is very good. It's a pity that the author couldn't continue and finished it quickly. In fact, I feel that if I continue writing, more people will definitely read it. It's a pity. It's a wonderful book.

I like to watch horror movies, but there are too few of them. This article is undoubtedly a masterpiece. It has both horror and romance. The wife is a god.

It looks good, the taste is just right, the rice is so fragrant 😋

It's good-looking, a very typical American horror series bg. Very good-looking.

With my sincerity and enthusiasm, I run towards youʕ•̫͡•ʔ❤ʕ•̫͡•ʔ

Mainly because it's so good that I want to read the second book. Does the host really not consider publishing a second book?

It's a very good American horror novel. I like this genre very much, but it's a bit too short. I hope the author will continue to work hard to update it. Come on [sending my heart][sending my heart]

Very nice, I like it very much. It's just a bit lacking, I hope the author will work harder to update it.

Nice! ! ! It just ended too early and was not enough to watch.

This book is so good, I can't stop reading it. It's so good. I recommend everyone to read it. The heroine is very smart and thoughtful.

It looks good, it looks good, this nanny is so cool. It would be better if she was in the flower market [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]