Female Dom Alert! Handsome American Horror Story Psychopaths All Want Me for Themselves

Make an objective evaluation and give me some suggestions. First of all, in terms of plot, because she is a nanny, the heroine may be kind-hearted, which is acceptable, but I hope it can be written more reasonably. After all, in the dungeon, it is better not to be a brainless virgin. For example, the first world was handled very well, because the parents of the original owner did make the heroine feel loved, so it is normal and reasonable for the heroine to worry about them. However, the heroine and her friend in the story about the Human Skin Inn have actually just met. Faced with her tragic experience, you can feel worried and sympathetic, or you can try your best to change it, at least you will not have a conscience, but there is no need to put yourself in trouble for an unfamiliar script NPC, and readers will feel aggrieved. In terms of relationships, although he is a heartthrob, there is no need to arrange a plot where a man with a girlfriend likes the heroine, because the girls in this article are all very good and like the heroine very much. Arranging such a plot is really unfriendly to the girls. Although they may not care, it is really not good!!! And don't arrange intimate scenes with the heroine for this kind of guy! She looks a bit alienated, and everyone is fascinated by her. My daughter is so beautiful, so I just need to use less crooked melons and cracked dates to get my hands on her. It feels like she doesn't match her. Men can be bad (after all, they are all so beautiful), but they can't be so low. The above are some suggestions. I think it will be much better if I change them, because except for these relatively ridiculous ones, the rest of the writing is very good. I really like it. This is the first time I write a book review so seriously. I hope you can read it [Blow kiss] The author is really listening to the suggestions, and his writing is getting better and better. I asked some questions before, but I forgot to praise the author. First of all, I think the plot of other anchors playing the boss is relatively novel, and it really poked me. There will definitely be a lot of Shura fields in the end, I'm really looking forward to it. Although she is a female grandmother, the author's writing style does not make people feel awkward. I feel that my sister is also growing up. My previous comments touched on some red flags and may dissuade everyone, but I can really go for it because I am really changing it! Don't let go of this beloved author! 😘

It's great to watch. The plot speed is well controlled. It's a pleasure to watch!! I have read many other books of the same type. The rhythm of this one is the most to my liking. Why are you a newbie, madam? Why is this article so short now? I can't read the others. The female protagonist is cute and never feels wronged, and the male protagonists are also very intelligent. The plot is also very refreshing. Although in some places it feels like the heroine relies on her body to get through, the meat is delicious, and from a subjective point of view, being able to serve so many handsome guys for free is not considered selling meat.

Good-looking, still good-looking. But maybe the heroine in the script of Human Skin Inn was too worried about NPCs, but if your life is in danger, you have to stay. Who in the right mind doesn't want to run away quickly?

(｡•̀ᴗ-)Nice The writing is great. The plot is very coherent and the emotional lines are rich. I like the heroine's baby. She will not be inferior in the emotional lines with men. She has her own opinion. It's not the kind of mindless love. Super cute heartthrob Meow Meow Meow. The subject matter is also relatively new. It is a system-type American horror series. I enjoyed watching it. Of course, it would be better if it had more meat. I want to know if the boss in Big Eyes has an ID 💕 All in all, it's just not enough to watch. I want to support Yangwen but I'm afraid I'll die. Meow Meow Meow [Love]

Nice! Super pretty! The heroine design is definitely not a drag like the Virgin White Lotus. There are some plots that really reflect the behavior of foreign young people seeking death 🤦 🤦 🤦 and also how it felt like it ended suddenly!!! What happens next? What about the extra story? After the heroine returns home, what will happen to the men in the system? Everything else was very good and well written, but the ending was not satisfying 😢😢😢😢

I love watching it. I don't know if anyone understands me. I just like to see the cute and confused girl surrounded by wolves in the system space. Hehehe, it's so twisted and perverted. I like it so much. ੭ ᐕ)੭*⁾⁾

It looks good. It has the same style as other beauty novels. I like this kind of girl-girl heartthrob. Come on, goddess, I will keep following the updates.

Help! It ended too quickly, I haven't seen the heroine having sex with them yet! Some of the murderers in it are aborigines, some are characters played by players. All the men and women who are fans of the heart-throb attribute dote on the heroine, but they don't see any stories between the player and the heroine in the game lobby. The main content is the copy plot, and there is a lot of broth.

I can't find anything about the theme, style and author of American Horror. The writing is superb!!!!! Super attractive attractive

After reading the first copy, I can only say, author, your name, if I usually don't read it, is there any chance to change the title of the book? [Pause face] [Pause face] This is the first time I have seen this type of American horror movie. So far, I feel it is okay. If you like the heroine type, you can check it out. In addition, I feel that the decryption of the copy is a bit sloppy and simple. I don't know what will happen next [Cheagua] Well, a while ago, another American horror novel was recommended to me on the home page, and I was blown away after reading it. In comparison, the bosses in each copy of this book are gentle and refreshing. After all, they are all clean and handsome guys who will pamper the heroine and hold it in the palm of their hands 🤦