Konoha: Starting with the Gaining Proficiency System

This is a well-written novel. The portrayal of the protagonist and the description of the original characters are very consistent with the original work. I can only say that it is worth reading. I can only say that it is amazing [smile]. I have high requirements for reading novels. This novel suits my taste. Four stars is a very high rating in my book review. I have rarely given such a high rating to a Naruto novel. I hope the author can continue to work hard and not let me down. The author has recently become useless. I am detoxing these days. I take back what I said before. I will update my daily routine every day in the past two days. It is recommended to change the tags of female videos, love, harem competition, daily routine. Just get out of my bookshelf and waste my time to catch up on updates. I wrote very well at the beginning, but recently I have exhausted my talents. I can't write and I want to stop updating for a few days because of other authors. I want to think about so many daily chapters. It is a waste of my time and consumes my life. Watch the video

It's pretty good. But what about the harem? I really like the treatment of Hinata, but I don't know if I'll accept it or not. But this kind of moisturizing is very good, and it has emotional foreshadowing and you won't fall in love with it out of nowhere.

This subject is very good. If you keep writing it, you can write hundreds or thousands of chapters. You can travel to the world of the Book of the Vermillion Moon with Naruto, get the Nine-faced Sahaha, and transform the entire elemental chakra model. Combine the Earthly Resentment and the Nine-faced Sahaha, and make an elemental mask, or a bloodstained mask, and they are all bloodstained mask clones. It is best to make Otsutsuki out of it. It is best to use the parallel universe theory for dragon veins. It is okay. Collect the Blood Sequence Limits, Kiara Buds, Hashirama Cells, Mangekyou Sharingan, the reincarnated eyes on the moon, Corpse Veins, Uzumaki Blood Veins, and Blood Dragon Eyes, Red Eyes, Night Eyes, and Black Eyes. Collect them and embed them on the right arm. Be ruthless. Don't embed them in a row like Danzo, but look weird, irregular, and irregular. They are everywhere on your right arm. That's cool. Finally, make a gensei snare. Isn't there a seal space in the abdomen? Get a Death God, a Zero Tail and a Young God Tree to create your own power. Later, go to Pirates and eat the tree that can create Devil Fruit. This way you gain another ability. Then, go to Bengtie or Genshin. Don't do anything about cultivating immortals, because there are too many people cultivating immortals.

In fact, I rarely write book reviews, but I felt that the author seemed to care more about ratings, so I decided to leave some thoughts. First of all, the pace of this book is quite good. It is close to the main plot of "Shippuden" around the sixtyth chapter. For me personally, this progress is a little faster, but the author has arranged many warm daily subplots in the front, which just makes up for the rush in pace. These clips make people feel as if they are really spending time with the characters, and the passage of time seems natural and not abrupt. I personally like this feeling of slowly advancing time like flowing water. Secondly, as mentioned above, the overall style of this book tends to be warm and peaceful. Therefore, if the reader prefers exciting combat and fast-paced plots, this work may not meet expectations. Generally speaking, among the Naruto fanfics, the warm style of this work is handled relatively well, without letting the protagonists such as Naruto and Sasuke take over the focus, and the balance is very good. It is highly recommended for readers who like this style to read it. At the same time, I would also like to say to the author that the current low ratings are normal. As the number of words increases and the story unfolds, the ratings should gradually rise. Please keep up the good work!

The daily writing is really good. It depicts the bonds and inheritance of the ninja world very well, and the character descriptions are also very vivid. I get full marks for the writing style. The plot also follows the direction of Shuangwen. At the same time, the combat power has not collapsed. It is neither too serious nor too explosive. I like it very much. Of course, this is the icing on the cake, mainly because the author's character portrayal is very good, especially the friendship between the protagonist and his companions.

It's okay, the plot has its own ideas, and the pace is relatively comfortable to watch. Although the combat power is somewhat broken, the golden finger that can be effective with any practice is not too exaggerated. Naruto's worldview itself is ridiculous, with its fatalistic bloodline theory, especially Boruto's various fights between aliens and gods... Some of the protagonist's own thoughts and life add a sense of reality and dilute the absurdity of traveling through an extraordinary world, but the main story is there. Whether it is a small or major change, the freshness is relatively limited. The author's touch is very good, there are no intrigues and conspiracy theories; the emotional line in the harem is not too complicated; the protagonist's combat power is not too broken, but he can blend into the crowd like a genius, bringing a sense of reality, but at the same time, there are not too many pretense things. Gorgeous and complex settings are subject to different opinions, but there's nothing wrong with keeping them simple. The protagonist's appearance as a saint basically depends on the author's creation of coincidences, such as the hero saving the beauties and so on, but it will be awkward if not done well. There is nothing bad about it overall. It looks very cool. I look forward to the update.

Not bad, no poisonous points. The overall storyline is also more logical. I came back to comment after reading it. Looking at the comment section, there are indeed many negative reviews. This is a matter of benevolence and wisdom.

I have read Chapter 55 so far, and there is no particularly outstanding setting. It is the same year as Naruto, and it is a main story. The plot is smooth, but there is not much description of the improvement of strength. The strength should increase simultaneously with the plot. There are good and bad. It is currently available for follow-up reading.

Let's see if the author gives a poor rating. In fact, what can I say about this book... It's neither good nor bad. You can call it a cool novel, but it has nothing to do with it. You might call it a brainless text, but in fact the author worked very hard to maintain logic. Although there are many shortcomings, it is generally not brainless. To sum up, it should be a "relaxing article", but the writing is not relaxing at all. A good light-hearted novel will not let readers skip the daily content. A reader of over 30,000 people like me has skipped too much content, which only shows that the author did not grasp the degree well. But then again, overall, although some irrelevant content has been skipped, it can be regarded as a watchable work. Of course, I am very picky. People who have spent less than 10,000 hours should not use me as a standard.

I've read Chapter 50, please give me a little comment. 1. In terms of plot, the progress is okay. Chapter 50 is already the Chuunin exam, and it is definitely very detailed. I have carefully referenced the comics. 2. The coolness is quite average, maybe because the combat power is not strong yet, and the protagonist basically doesn't have any fancy skills, just sword skills + water escape + illusion skills, which may be strengthened in the later stage. 3. As for the system, some people say it is mandatory. In fact, it is not bad. It can be similar to "God rewards those who work hard". Hard work will be rewarded. In the past, the protagonist did not work hard when there was no system. He really had no talent. After having the system, he became very conscious. I really didn't see what was mandatory. 4. There are four female protagonists now. Tenten (who lives in Ome?), Ino (my roommate), Hinata (who poached a corner), and Koso (who was saved from the Chuunin exams, based on the comic Infinite Tsukuyomi), they get along pretty well. The protagonist is also very happy among the new generation. 5. The proportion of daily life and plot, I feel that some daily life can be reduced, such as: werewolf killing, of course, appropriate interaction must be written To sum up, it's almost 4 stars.

A good fanfic about Naruto, but the system participation is not highly praised. The writing is average, and the description of various details is too rough, a bit like a running account. The protagonist's character is too pretentious, or there are too many pretentious plots to fit the plot. However, the plot development is reasonable, not too invincible, and there seems to be no AI. Overall four stars, improve the score.

Come on, rice cake, I quite like watching this type of show. Generally speaking, it is not too procrastinating. The daily routine and the main plot advance each other. You will not feel bored after reading it for a long time. The interaction with the readers is also quite good. You can also ask the readers for their opinions if you have any questions. You can still see that the author is very careful about individual details. But there are still some shortcomings Personally, I think the shortcomings are as follows: 1. Ambiguous relationship with girls 2. The system is very clear except for the first few pictures, and the rest is almost abbreviated. 3. Some details are not explained very clearly. The logical relationship could be made clearer. To sum up, apart from these shortcomings, I still enjoyed reading this book.

Overall, it looks very good. It is a rare masterpiece. The last one that was so good was "Baiyun Qingye who doesn't want to be hacked". Then let me talk about it, this is my second brush, and I will briefly talk about the heroine, Hinata, Tenten, Ino and Xianglan. Tsunade doesn't know, but she personally hopes to accept it. Temari and her first wife Shikamaru, Terumi Mei and Konan have little hope, the leg shadow Kurotsuchi doesn't have much intersection, and Samui and Azabui haven't shown up, so they should be gone. (There should be no leaks) Summary of advantages: The plot is smooth, the rhythm is clear, some characters are OC but have a plot basis for reasonable development, and the protagonist is not blindly obedient or brainless. The emotional line is obvious and there are no major flaws. Overall personal rating: 5 stars Let me say it again, I personally like Tsunade and I hope she can accept her

Gee, the harem is a bit lacking, and the plot behind it is a bit stretched, but this is unavoidable and understandable. Of course, the most important thing is that the harem is a bit lacking, and I don't have my favorite big car.

Beautiful, can't get enough of it I like the writing style and rhythm very much. Other Naruto fans are too cool, too urgent, and too dark. However, the writing style of this one suits my taste. It's just too little. Please repent, author.

It's a good read. I've read less than 100 chapters so far and I haven't seen any poisonous points. The daily content is very high and less than the main plot. The emotional changes of the characters are very natural. It's fun to watch. I came to comment without reading too much. I mainly read what the author has written before and I feel a little unsure. I feel it is necessary to give him 5 stars early to help him feel more confident. I wish you a 9.0 As soon as possible. I will come back to review after reading more)

The writing is good, surprisingly smooth, and the system presence is not that high. It would be better if it were lower. The most important thing about this book is that the daily life and emotional lines are smooth. Many women in the Tomato fandom feel a little awkward about the relationship with the male protagonist. This one is the kind of person who has a good impression, and the source of the good impression is reasonable. Moreover, the book I have read so far does not overly describe the emotional drama and overwhelm the focus, so my impression is pretty good so far.

It's okay. It's neither a stupid and invincible start, nor too weak. At the beginning, I saw that the protagonist was a little brainless when he first started to make a training plan. After this chapter, the perception will be much better. The protagonist himself is a hidden cultivator, and with system assistance, his practice has steadily improved. During the chuunin exam, there is a range of strength from special jounin to ordinary jounin, which is in a relatively appropriate range of strength. It wouldn't be too outrageous to pretend to be cool.

It looks very smooth, but many plots are really unnecessary. They can be adjusted in other ways or slowly improved in the main plot. We are not in a hurry. The plot needs to be polished. Other aspects are still relatively good.

It should be my fault. I feel like after about a hundred chapters, the protagonists are ready to take a bite of everything, some are proficient, and some are just planning to transition the plot? To be honest, I feel that sometimes the emotional drama is really good, and sometimes it doesn't have much flavor. It may be because of me. To be honest, it is not as attractive to me as it was at the beginning. But to be honest, it does look good in the early stage. The author is really hard-working, so four stars is not excessive [laughs]

This book has a good portrayal of emotions, but it is a little delayed by the title. The system does not have a particularly strong presence at the end, and there are no conspiracy theories. It is very friendly to people who watch ordinary daily life and interspersed with some battles. I feel it is not toxic at the moment. Since you are reading a fan, don't think too much about the original work. It is just a reference, as long as it does not break the logic.

It's very good. It's a rare masterpiece in fan fiction. It's characterized by being more everyday. If you like it, you can read more.

It's not a cool novel, it's an upgrade. In fact, most of it is okay, but sometimes there are a lot of unnecessary plots. For example, the Werewolf story has several chapters. After all, it's all about foreign persimmons. It's not too dramatic and the plot and poisonous points are actually okay [laughs]

This book is very good-looking. When I saw the title, I thought it was about the same assembly line as before, and the introduction was not very impressive. Although there are some products similar to those of the assembly line, it is more of the author's imagination. The proportion of assembly line products is small, and the author also has his own creativity, which is not limited to other Naruto novels, such as the seventh edition of Four People

A very nice Naruto fanfic

The writing is very good, the daily life is very warm, and the battles are not awkward. I personally feel that there is nothing poisonous about it. It is a very interesting novel. But there are some things to pay attention to when it comes to the heroine. Currently, I see Tenten, Ino, Hinata and Xianglin. Those who are concerned about official matches or but not the heroine can think about it.

It's well written, and there's nothing poisonous about it. It's just that after I accumulate ninjutsu, I can try to improve it.

Very interesting, I like this type of Naruto novels very much

The writing is quite good, it's not a running account, it's original and not just a plot.

It looks good, especially when he plays the role of a pig and eats the tiger every day, the protagonist's behavior [like][like][like] makes me very touched [send heart][send heart][send heart]