Broken Iron************

I really like the story of the train crew redeeming each other😭, which makes up for the regret that Xiaobai can't get on the train in the plot. At present, it seems that the time-travel setting will not affect the plot at all, so feel free to invest. The following is a personal feeling. The little white person's design is not OOC at all. In the original work, he didn't care about his own feelings at all. The author wrote it very well and it's really heartbreaking. He is still the same as him😭. Moreover, the author's writing skills are very solid, and the plot and foreshadowing as well as the understanding of the original work are very wonderful, and the setting of the weak but capable game is good for me. (I won't spoil it), the possibility of being backstabbed later is also relatively small. The most important thing is that there is no ambiguity about the harem CP, and there is no such thing as Long Aotian, who transforms into a god of evil, and looks down on people. In short, it is very satisfying! ! All in all, feel free to invest in it, I like it so much, please give it a thumbs up from the author! If you keep going, I will always follow your boss. I won't say any more and will become a shareholder!

The teacher is really good at writing about beauty, strength and misery 😇😇 I felt so happy while reading it. This beauty, strength and misery are so refreshing! ! ! Xiaobai who has ptsd is so delicious. Xiaobai who has a ptsd attack and is cared about by everyone is so warm. Anyway, it really makes XP crazy and the big head and the small head keep fighting each other. The boss must continue to write. He is really good at writing.

It looks good, don't let go of this slightly broken Samoyed Kouga of the King of Extinction😋 I'll give it some pressure too, don't do it to foreign persimmons (hold your head)

This Bimihayou can also shoot swords, and it's a game for Xiao Bai. It's so miserable. The descriptions of the scenes are very vivid, and the writing is very good. Bai E doesn't have OOC either. It's so distressing to watch. When I read the posts between Train Crew and Xiao Bai, my corpse felt warm.

Teacher! What a great book! Teacher, keep writing, I don't want to lose such a beautiful book! [Cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]

It's great that he is Xiao Bai who was saved by the train crew😭😭 Let's learn more about the daily life of Xiao Bai and the golden descendant😋 I'm curious about what it's like for Xiao Bai and Da Bai (the protagonist) in this world to meet each other Xiaobai: Partner, become a hero with me! Wait wait, buddy, where is your partner? What's wrong with you, partner? Partner, are you okay? (Samoyed spins in circles)

It's not OOC at all, every character has an online IQ, and it's very good-looking. It was when I was reading this book that I suddenly had such an inspiration. I remember that after Bai E woke up, he called up the running record of the scepter... It should be called the running record, but that is not important. What is important is that all the golden descendants in it have escaped, right? So I think they are not dead yet, maybe they all came to this main universe [Thinking] Can the author write this? I don't want to eat the knife anymore, I want something sweet! ! !

It's really cool. According to my understanding, he traveled from the third dimension to the second dimension and became Bai E, but the whole experience was exactly the same as Bai E. Since his soul was still in the third dimension, he endured up to 8 billion reincarnations before he fainted and was forced to merge with the Iron Tomb to become the Iron Tomb. After the branch universe was destroyed, I made a deal with the End and Mystery, and went to the main universe with a script (that is, the Iron Tomb story we played). We, the novice, can be considered uncut. It is purely because my body cannot bear such a large amount of energy. If I use too much energy, it will break. I can use the power of the Iron Tomb.

It's very well written, I give it 8.6 Points, because 1.4 Of Xiaobai's readings have passed [I'm about to cry], but everyone on the train crew is really great, I hope Xiaobai can rely on everyone on the train crew, Hajixing, Xiaoyue, Teacher Egg Yolk is relying on you [crying] and Dada, when will Xiaobai's scepter follow him? This Satsuma is always broken, the body of the scepter should be combined with Xiaobai to support Xiaobai and use strength to stop it from breaking [I'm about to cry]

Good news, I found another good book. I really thought about this joke before, a novice who knows the ending of reincarnation but can't wait for the Trail Blazers. Bad news: Thin

First of all, I think the author's overall writing of this book is very good. As an old bookworm, I think this is an excellent work by a Bengtie fan. But I think you can optimize it a little more. For example, throughout the book you mentioned that Bai E might catch a cold if he was soaked in cold sweat, and that he couldn't see clearly due to cataracts and was afraid of accidentally injuring his teammates. I don't think it's very reasonable. Because Bai E not only has four lives, but also has many blessings from the Destruction Star God. Therefore, he at least has the basic ability to sense local units (a common example: mind's eye), as well as precise control of his own power (physical fitness enhancement + combat experience), and even if he does not enter the order form, Bai E will never feel distressed by the possibility of catching a cold, because his body cannot be so fragile. I think the author could do some more optimization in details like this.

A teacher who is very good at writing about beauty, strength and misery. I feel so sorry for this little white guy who made me almost suffer from PTSD. The little white guy blends into the train crew in such a way that it is not abrupt at all. Four awesome little ones! Teacher, please update more! Don't tire yourself too much, and don't idle yourself too much [please update]!

It's so beautiful. Although there aren't many updates, I've got 1.4 From watching it.

Love this article. . There is no stiff hair, the character design is also very good, there is no OOC to the horizon, and I can accept it well after watching the plot. The plot development logic is also very smooth, and the writing style is also very good. The interaction between Train Crew and Xiao Bai is heartwarming to watch. . The little daily memories in my memories are also very warm. . I want to know where the final destination of "Player Xiaobai" is. Maybe it's not necessarily possible to return to the present day with golden companions. . Be sure to make dumplings! !

What a book, what a book! Seeing my corpse makes me feel warm [sending my heart]

It's really great to read, and the extras are heart-warming and heart-wrenching at the same time. It can be said to be the best Irving book I've ever read. Don't be fooled!!!

Why is the author's book gone? Why has the book been taken off the shelves? If there is a resurrection battle, author, you must win. I don't want to be without books to read yet. It would be a loss if such a beautiful book is gone. [Cry][cry][cry] Save, save, save! ! ! ! [Cry]

I finished reading this book early this morning. It was so sad and satisfying at the same time (Chi v Chi). It seemed like a good if line for Xiaobai to get on the bus, but it was not. Warm reminder, the novice in this article is a time traveler, not a local novice. In fact, it is more similar to a peer in the modern world who has traveled through the game. Bai E is the most perfect golden descendant and savior. 33550336 Reincarnations are enough to wear away his weak self-awareness, leaving behind the most perfect body and the best fuel. After 8 billion reincarnations here, it was discovered in vain that this was an abandoned world line, so everything was eventually destroyed and ceased to exist. In the wheat field of Aili Secret Pavilion, the partners fighting side by side will still offer blessings to the savior when they are killed and the fire is taken out. A vision of the good old days. The gray dawn never came. Xiaobai, Xiaobai, cry. It makes me so sad to see you smiling like this and keeping silent. Yes, good writing invites everyone to enjoy it.

Ahhhh, Tomato, you have done all the bad things [crying][crying][crying] This book is really beautiful. The teacher wrote it very well.

If it's not a brother, why is he removed from the shelves? Can he win the Easter match? What should I do if I have to support myself with books to support myself to death? Pressure points pressure points.

Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhh! Why has it been taken off the shelves! 😱Tonic wow Is it to press for points?

It's very interesting. The stars in this novel are the best I've seen in fanfics [laughs] because there are no fanfics that have entered my brain. After all, I am considered a negative fan of the star (some of the fans are directly stuck on my face [smile]), but after reading this book, my perception of the star has changed. Now I have no feelings for the star, neither a fan nor a fan. I originally came here for Xiaobai (Xiaobai, we all like you very much [send my heart] [send my heart]), but in the end I have no interest in Xingzhuan [face covering] By the way, I gave this book a score of 98.6 Because I got a score of 1.4 [Grieved]

Teacher, teacher, I really like your writing. You have put all kinds of considerations into the plot and characters, as well as the sincere emotions you put into it. I hope it will give Xiaobai a happy ending. Teacher, I will follow you for the rest of my life. Don't be fooled!

It's great. I love reading more. There's nothing OOC about it. The train family is super warm. Although I personally think Xiaobai's situation can't be cured no matter what, it's still great. It would be great if I could update ten chapters a day [shy]

I really like it. The interaction between Train Crew and Bai E warms my heart (*˘˘*). .:*♡, Author, you wrote very well, and I'm really looking forward to the follow-up [send my heart] [send my heart]. By the way, I really want to see the author write a movie-watching [Send Heart].

The characters in it are very consistent with the characters' personalities, the plot has ups and downs, the writing is very good, and the psychological activities and characters' personalities are very well portrayed, and the author also buried some of his own little thoughts. The most important thing is that the plot inside is based on the game and information, so it is worth reading.

Why is Teacher Teacher's book removed from the shelves! ! [Crying][crying][crying] I just went online [almost crying]

Why was it removed from the shelves (ToT) My favorite fanfic article

It's rare to see one that's okay. Will it be available normally in the future? When I opened my eyes, the book I was chasing was gone.

It's nice, but it's a pity that this book is no longer available. I have collected it for more than 40 days. Now that it has been gone for a long time, I found out that I can still give ratings. I'm really happy. The author is great. Can I ask when the group will open? I also want to join. I heard them say that I need to give it two stars to save it. It's fast, but it's OK now. I hope to see this book come back. Big boost for the author.