Jobless: I Fell and Then Found a High School Girl

The look and feel is pretty good. Although the protagonist is a chuunibyou, he doesn't show much of it, so it won't make people feel embarrassed. It can be said that it's great if the jobless fan doesn't come up with a bunch of crap, and the protagonist is not someone who knows the plot, so there is a lot to write about. If I could maintain this level of writing, it might be a great work by an unemployed fan. No matter, if it suits my taste, please support me first 👍👍👍 Spare food and grass belong to

Not bad, but I remember Qixing has a boyfriend, right? She worked hard to learn magic just because she wanted to go back, right?

It feels like it's half-written, but it's okay, the main crisis has almost been resolved, and it's very satisfying. The emotional line between Li Jie and Cliff will be smoother (it wasn't smooth before? ()) Zanoba was not exiled to the magic school because of Rudy. His good brother is gone😭. Julie will also have Rudy not go to the slave market and continue to wander because of Zanoba's absence. Rudy doesn't have an ED, but in this case, in Rudy's perception, the red mother has not "run away", and I don't know if he can accept the white mother, and without Qixing as a catalyst, he will be "Fitz-senpai" for a longer time, but overall there should be no problem, it will just be a little more stretched. But Mama Smurf... If Rudy hadn't moved the maze to save her, Mama Smurf wouldn't have fallen in love with him. Rudy originally had no romantic feelings for Mama Smurf, so it probably wouldn't have happened, but he unknowingly did what Hitogami couldn't do. Hitogami has to give Hakiyu a (), but I believe in fate, they will definitely get together (I hope XD) Where is Izaruti? You went to the Holy Land of Swords and you don't have any faith? Without the moment that Dragon God gave Rudy, could Alice still practice so hard? Why don't you explain in detail what that "little seven stars" is? Where does Ulysses go next? In short, good days are ahead of us. Although there are many more regrets, I still thank the author for writing this fanfic🙏 The loss of good brothers means that it is probably difficult for Rudy to get to know Zanoba, but it seems that Rudy's school life is arrogant😭

It's very interesting, detailed and sketchy, and most of the plots are original, which is really rare in fan fiction! The daily part is well written, and it has the feeling of "lasting love over time" with Qixing. There are a lot of fight scenes, but I can't tell how well the fight scenes are written. There is a high probability that there will be multiple female protagonists, and the setting of "secondary middle school" is not well reflected, and will be gone within a few chapters.

Overall, it's pretty good. I randomly picked it up while listening to the book, mainly focusing on magic and the ghosts of death. This 10-year-old is almost invincible in hand-to-hand combat. Let's get out of the car first to avoid losing my impression again.

It's really not bad, my god, it's a very good jobless fanfic (the protagonist no longer has any chuunibyou characteristics, which doesn't matter, after all, it's really hard to have fun with the current plot)

Where can I find someone who is both a god of death and a jobless person?

Although sometimes the main character is a bit average, but generally he is good, at least he has an 8.5 Level. I don't know why it is only 6., But it's a pity that the update has been discontinued. I hope the author can write a sequel about finding his family if he has time in the future.

Shizuka Nanahoshi had a boyfriend in the original world, Akito Shinohara, and they got together after the original.

It's heartbreaking that the author stopped updating. The protagonist has done a lot of things and is more reliable than Rudy. I think The author offends both those who like to read and those who don't.