Jobless: Falling and Then Picking up a Female High School Student

The look and feel is pretty good. Although the protagonist is a chuunibyou, he doesn't show much of it, so it won't make people feel embarrassed. It can be said that it's great if the jobless fan doesn't come up with a bunch of crap, and the protagonist is not someone who knows the plot, so there is a lot to write about. If I could maintain this level of writing, it might be a great work by an unemployed fan. No matter, if it suits my taste, please support me first [like][like][like] Spare food and grass belong to

Not bad, but I remember Qixing has a boyfriend, right? She worked hard to learn magic just because she wanted to go back, right?

It feels like it's half-written, but it's okay, the main crisis has almost been resolved, and it's very satisfying. The emotional line between Li Jie and Cliff will be smoother (it wasn't smooth before? ()) Zanoba was not exiled to the magic school because of Rudy. His good brother is gone😭. Julie will also have Rudy not go to the slave market and continue to wander because of Zanoba's absence. Rudy doesn't have an ED, but in this case, in Rudy's perception, the red mother has not "run away", and I don't know if he can accept the white mother, and without Qixing as a catalyst, he will be "Fitz-senpai" for a longer time, but overall there should be no problem, it will just be a little more stretched. But Mama Smurf... If Rudy hadn't moved the maze to save her, Mama Smurf wouldn't have fallen in love with him. Rudy originally had no romantic feelings for Mama Smurf, so it probably wouldn't have happened, but he unknowingly did what Hitogami couldn't do. Hitogami has to give Hakiyu a (), but I believe in fate, they will definitely get together (I hope XD) Where is Izaruti? You went to the Holy Land of Swords and you don't have any faith? Without the moment that Dragon God gave Rudy, could Alice still practice so hard? Why don't you explain in detail what that "little seven stars" is? Where does Ulysses go next? In short, good days are ahead of us. Although there are many more regrets, I still thank the author for writing this fanfic🙏 The loss of good brothers means that it is probably difficult for Rudy to get to know Zanoba, but it seems that Rudy's school life is arrogant😭

Where can I find someone who is both a god of death and a jobless person?

Overall, it's pretty good. I randomly picked it up while listening to the book, mainly focusing on magic and the ghosts of death. This 10-year-old is almost invincible in hand-to-hand combat. Let's get out of the car first to avoid losing my impression again.

It's very interesting, detailed and sketchy, and most of the plots are original, which is really rare in fan fiction! The daily part is well written, and it has the feeling of "lasting love over time" with Qixing. There are a lot of fight scenes, but I can't tell how well the fight scenes are written. There is a high probability that there will be multiple female protagonists, and the setting of "secondary middle school" is not well reflected, and will be gone within a few chapters.

It's really not bad, my god, it's a very good jobless fanfic (the protagonist no longer has any chuunibyou characteristics, which doesn't matter, after all, it's really hard to have fun with the current plot)

Although sometimes the main character is a bit average, but generally he is good, at least he has an 8.5 Level. I don't know why it is only 6., But it's a pity that the update has been discontinued. I hope the author can write a sequel about finding his family if he has time in the future.

Shizuka Nanahoshi had a boyfriend in the original world, Akito Shinohara, and they got together after the original.

It's pretty good, although the writing is a bit poor but the plot is quite smooth. He didn't deliberately put poison either.

It must be five stars, the details are well described, it feels like watching the original novel😏

Still very good

I like it, it's really good, but the main character is not good enough

It's heartbreaking that the author stopped updating. The protagonist has done a lot of things and is more reliable than Rudy. I think The author offends both those who like to read and those who don't.

The writing style is very good, the logic is relatively clear, the image and growth of the protagonist are outstanding, and the scene description is detailed. It is much better than ordinary articles.

It's so beautiful that it's considered a fine product.

Just keep it for now, I really like Boss Long, I hope the author won't stop updating [please take a closer look]

I am convinced that the author has a chuunibyou! [Sinister smile]

Why did it stop for a week? Is the book still written?

The writing and plot are very good, but the ending is a bit sudden.

It's pretty. Why is the score so low?

A very interesting and interesting book

The logic is clear and the author respects the original plot. The writing style is also very smooth. The plot is particularly exciting.

It's a good book with a reasonable plot. It's much better than those written by people who don't know what to read.

It's awesome, I love reading it, I love reading it, the author must continue to do more, this is one of the few unemployed fans who can read it [Like]

Great to see, you can give it a try

Not bad, but too short [face covering]

In the original work, Qixing has a girlfriend

I have read more than 20 chapters so far, and each chapter is very long and good. Come on, author

It's very good to transfer directly without any ink at the beginning. It's much better than copying the original text for a hundred chapters. The AI ​​rate increases a bit later.