American Crime Drama: Summoning the Unforgivable Sins

Let's talk about a few points: 1. It is not recommended that characters appear together. Many movie and TV drama characters that appear at the beginning are rarely remembered by anyone. It is recommended to reduce this situation, or to make characters with facial expressions, such as the rescue uncle in hurricane rescue and the front desk guy at the Avenue Hotel. This kind of writing is easy to impress people, and they will not know who the author is writing about. After all, not all readers will look up the information for a long time like the author. 2. Reduce (delete) characters such as martial arts and fairy tales. It is difficult to control a book that combines Chinese and Western styles. Moreover, the title of the book determines that the readers are the audience of the American variety show. It is okay to add one or two, but a larger number will easily dissuade the readers who originally came because of the title of the book. Even if you add Elden, Sekiro, and Nioh, it will be better than adding martial arts. Of course, this depends on whether the author can control the plot well. 3. The crime value algorithm can be studied through the plot, such as direct, indirect, inducement, order, fault. How to calculate the character's crime value in this case? You can not write the algorithm at the beginning, but add it to the plot to tell the reader. Then you can also upgrade the eagle eye to distinguish whether those have a sin value or how much sin value they have.

It looks good. The supporting characters all have their own personalities, especially the characters summoned by the male protagonist. They are not as human-machine as most novels of the same type. They are completely like puppets. Except for the appearance and skills described, they are completely different from the original people. Although the author does not necessarily follow the original character descriptions completely, but he has his own innovation and a human-machine feeling that is unmatched in other novels. Now it can get a score of 9 or above. The details will depend on what the author writes later. Come on [Like][Like][Like]

A very thoughtful American TV series. I haven't seen a good behind-the-scenes video for a long time. This one is pretty good. It was a little bit toxic in the early stage, but started to show its strength in the later stage. I think half of the reason for the low rating is due to martial arts. It doesn't match well, especially Long Xiaoyun. There are no plots about him that are not poisonous.

It seems pretty good now, but there are too many characters written at once, and I am worried about whether they will be messed up later. Moreover, it seems to be the first time I have seen so many characters in a novel that is not a group portrait. I look forward to better things in the future. It's really fine in the front, but it starts to get weird in the back. Too many settings are added and it feels like it's a mess. It will be okay in the future. There are more and more characters. Some casting problems are a bit problematic, but it is not a big problem for the time being. As long as the plot is not messed up due to too many characters in the future, it will still be okay. Author, you seem to have said that there will be vampires in the back. If so, why don't you include the American TV series "Bloodline"? The Resident Evil version of vampires is still very interesting, and the American TV series "I Am Zombie". I have never found a fan of these two, and vampires and zombies are not strong and will not expand. This zombie has self-awareness and strong functionality, and the protagonist is not from a funeral parlor. In the drama, the heroine can survive by eating only the brains of corpses @

I'm just halfway through watching it, and I feel that the Templars are too weak. In the future, when the major forces understand history, what kind of gadgets can drive assassins into menopause? How about the protagonist build a new Templar, armed with technology, for example, you can refer to Overwatch's Crusader power armor, and add something else Aerial warships, following the technological genre, big scenes such as demon invasion, Templar Knights descending from the sky, etc. In the later stage, in order to deal with threats, assassins and knights can even be reunited into one. After all, they are all from the same origin. As for the real Templar Knights, hehe, whoever is stronger is the genuine one.

It's good to watch. Many of the comprehensive worlds are only partially understood or only known by name, but there is no obstacle to watching. The plot structure is very smooth, the world view makes people look forward to it, and the character descriptions are very graphic and three-dimensional. Just don't feel hot? I feel like I can't achieve it 100%, but my writing is better than 80% of Tomato's books. Come on, author.

It's quite to my liking, but it's a pity Will the author write another book?

Five stars, absolutely W⭐️, the best recovery novel I have ever read, the author's design and character plots, my preferences are the same as mine

There are very few behind-the-scenes novels about Tomato, and even fewer can be written like this. This book really deserves five stars.

In fact, it is considered a good book on Tomato, but it is a pity why so few people read it.