(Please skip directly from 127 to 160, they are waste chapters written before. Tomato cannot delete published chapters, please forgive me🙏)
The world is strange.
Human beings here are down-to-earth and never look up at the stars, as if they have forgotten the romance called "the universe".
I once thought that I would live an ordinary life here like an ordinary time traveler.
Until that rainy night, a werewolf that shouldn't exist tore me apart in an alley.
I woke up in my own bed, unscathed. The world goes on as normal, as if everything was just a nightmare.
A perfect reset.
But I know someone is watching me.
Reader comments
Advantages: The setting is good, the writing is acceptable, the protagonist's values are normal, and the author is willing to listen to some good suggestions and generate energy for love.
Disadvantages: Judging from what I have written so far, the world view is still unclear, the division of combat power is unclear, the protagonist's role is a bit useless, and the characters are a bit facial, resulting in insufficient overall appeal (enjoyment).
But the author is a novice, so I support him and hope that the novel will get better and better and that he can write what he wants to express.
The setting is very novel, and the characters are very intelligent. I hope there will be a single female protagonist, but it will be fine without it. Forget about the harem, the thinking is amazing.
It's okay. The main character seems to be very capable but can't control himself. It feels more like a book about rules and monsters but covered in supernatural powers. I've seen more than 100 chapters so far and there's nothing bad about it. Except for a small plot that's a bit bloody, luckily I skipped it after only a few paragraphs.
This book suffers from the introduction and title
Change the title of the book to one that does not offend the literary youth and a more direct introduction.
Any formulaic introduction that just follows the crowd is better than this one
After all, the author has no basis for popularity
It would be normal for the platinum writer from QD to have this style
But this is Tomato... A cultural desert in the online literary world.
Don't think too highly of readers
The writing is delicate and the settings are self-consistent, especially the ability to explain. There is no needless blackness. Looking forward to further developments. But how do you plan to deal with the dozens of chapters in the sequel after reboot? I saw a total of 1800+ last night and thought it would last a long time. If I skip it, there won't be much left. I feel like it will give new readers extra expectations. Of course, the author has said, "another world line", maybe there is some foreshadowing in the old chapter.
The writing is very good, the content is novel, there is nothing poisonous, it is very interesting, and it is not a particularly rigid model. But there is a small suggestion that may be my own problem. It feels like there is too much content between each story. It's easy to get a little dizzy while watching it. This might be my problem [laughing and crying]
I have read more than a hundred chapters. The overall rhythm is good and the setting is interesting. The details may need to be polished. I am more deliberate in burying and filling holes.
Something is wrong. Although this book is not a nine-point score, an eight-point score is more than enough. Why is there no rating yet?
The values are good and the author writes very delicately.
Okay, the setting is quite novel, but the number of words is too small and I can't see much more.
The beginning is amazing, but the rest is a bit mediocre. However, the author is still very good at writing a book for the first time. I support it with 5 stars.
The writing style is very good, and it is very comfortable to read. The plot has good logic and develops steadily. Currently, there are 86 chapters with no poisonous points. It is a new book and a good book that not many people have read. It is estimated that the rating will be 9.3
Author, did you not sign a contract? It feels like there are so few people there. It's obviously very good-looking. I suggest you update it for a few days and I'll give it a thumbs up [laughter]
Good so far
Let me knock, you can indeed see it
Big cheers for the author
It feels good. Give it 5 stars to support the author.
It looks good, the emotions are well written, logical and interesting.
The writing is very good and the setting is novel.
Novel and interesting
The setting of Dream Core attracted me deeply from the beginning. The setting is very novel and the content is not poisonous.
It's at the food and grass level and you can read it.
It's a common problem in online novels that plot conflicts are arranged too tightly.
It looks good, it looks good, but why is the update so slow?
Advantages: The setting is good, the writing is acceptable, the protagonist's values are normal, and the author is willing to listen to some good suggestions and generate energy for love. Disadvantages: Judging from what I have written so far, the world view is still unclear, the division of combat power is unclear, the protagonist's role is a bit useless, and the characters are a bit facial, resulting in insufficient overall appeal (enjoyment). But the author is a novice, so I support him and hope that the novel will get better and better and that he can write what he wants to express.
The setting is very novel, and the characters are very intelligent. I hope there will be a single female protagonist, but it will be fine without it. Forget about the harem, the thinking is amazing.
It's okay. The main character seems to be very capable but can't control himself. It feels more like a book about rules and monsters but covered in supernatural powers. I've seen more than 100 chapters so far and there's nothing bad about it. Except for a small plot that's a bit bloody, luckily I skipped it after only a few paragraphs.
This book suffers from the introduction and title Change the title of the book to one that does not offend the literary youth and a more direct introduction. Any formulaic introduction that just follows the crowd is better than this one After all, the author has no basis for popularity It would be normal for the platinum writer from QD to have this style But this is Tomato... A cultural desert in the online literary world. Don't think too highly of readers
The writing is delicate and the settings are self-consistent, especially the ability to explain. There is no needless blackness. Looking forward to further developments. But how do you plan to deal with the dozens of chapters in the sequel after reboot? I saw a total of 1800+ last night and thought it would last a long time. If I skip it, there won't be much left. I feel like it will give new readers extra expectations. Of course, the author has said, "another world line", maybe there is some foreshadowing in the old chapter.
The writing is very good, the content is novel, there is nothing poisonous, it is very interesting, and it is not a particularly rigid model. But there is a small suggestion that may be my own problem. It feels like there is too much content between each story. It's easy to get a little dizzy while watching it. This might be my problem [laughing and crying]
I have read more than a hundred chapters. The overall rhythm is good and the setting is interesting. The details may need to be polished. I am more deliberate in burying and filling holes. Something is wrong. Although this book is not a nine-point score, an eight-point score is more than enough. Why is there no rating yet?
The values are good and the author writes very delicately.
Okay, the setting is quite novel, but the number of words is too small and I can't see much more.
The beginning is amazing, but the rest is a bit mediocre. However, the author is still very good at writing a book for the first time. I support it with 5 stars.
The writing style is very good, and it is very comfortable to read. The plot has good logic and develops steadily. Currently, there are 86 chapters with no poisonous points. It is a new book and a good book that not many people have read. It is estimated that the rating will be 9.3 Author, did you not sign a contract? It feels like there are so few people there. It's obviously very good-looking. I suggest you update it for a few days and I'll give it a thumbs up [laughter]
Good so far
Let me knock, you can indeed see it
Big cheers for the author
It feels good. Give it 5 stars to support the author.
It looks good, the emotions are well written, logical and interesting.
The writing is very good and the setting is novel.
Novel and interesting
The setting of Dream Core attracted me deeply from the beginning. The setting is very novel and the content is not poisonous.
It's at the food and grass level and you can read it. It's a common problem in online novels that plot conflicts are arranged too tightly.
It looks good, it looks good, but why is the update so slow?