I Died Faking My Death After Winning Over the Yandere

It looks good, and I can tell that the author is very careful. I would like to make a few suggestions: 1. The pace should be faster. Conspiracies and business wars can be divided into sections. It takes more than 100 pictures to reveal family problems. It is too dragging. Follow-up suggestions: Get rid of family issues as soon as possible, write less about business wars, let the heroine take power as soon as possible, and focus on relationships and yandere stories. 2. If you are single, try not to open up the relationship line with your sister. I am afraid that subsequent comments will say that you are sending your daughter away. Ha ha. 3. Bai Yueguangqi can write about the sunny spots... Add some awareness of lightning protection. In short, the author has some writing skills, but there are too many foreshadowings, which makes it easy for readers to become addicted to the book. It's better to keep up with the current flow of cool literature. There are poisonous points and too many branch lines buried. 1. Baiyue Guangguang: There are more than 100 chapters describing the relationship with the heroine. Is this going to end in death? The heroine was hugged, touched on the face, and looked at each other by Princess Bai Yueguang... This kind of... Um... Does not fit the current environment. 2. Best friend line: The cause of death and the reasons behind it are repeatedly buried, and a line of whitewashing of the heroine is also added here. ...3. Sister line: Being looked at and hugged... (And the relationship between Bai Yueguang and the heroine and the relationship between the heroine and the heroine's sister are all matched by the male protagonist... Self-love? Giving away the daughter?) 4. The family (business) power seizure line, more than 100 chapters are still in the initial stage of guessing, it is too slow. 5. Treatment of leg lines... Just opened, hiding it from the heroine. 6. The male protagonist's ex-girlfriend line was opened again. Finally, there is the heating up of the relationship between the male protagonist and the female protagonist... The subject matter is very good, but I still recommend that the author patch it up and take offline the branches that should be taken offline. The first part was really good, but in the middle and later stages it felt messy. The key points to grasp are: 1. The heroine is sickly. 2. The male protagonist escapes to death. 3. The emotional entanglement between the heroine and the hero.

The combination of book-traveling + yandere + crematorium really shocked me. Pei Song's careful strategy was written very delicately, and I can feel the tension of the temptation on the edge of death! It has a strong sense of immersion and is worth reading!

The writing is good and in line with my taste. Before reading this book, I read a lot of book reviews, which pointed out that there are some plots in this book that are not in line with the public's taste. However, after reading it overall, both the plot and the characterization are getting better and better. The more you read the back, the more you will have endless aftertaste. And there are very few authors who write 10,000 words a day. In order to prevent the author from being distracted, I will give you a five-star support. In short, when reading this book, you still have to taste it yourself. If you listen to other people's comments, you may have a submissive mentality. The writing is quite good [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

The writing is very good, and the emotional changes between the male and female protagonists are quite natural and gradual. Qi's character feels a little stomach-ache when I look at it. It feels inappropriate to put him in the villain camp, and it's even weirder to put him in the protagonist camp. Currently, it feels like a character in other novels who is about to be slapped in the face by the male protagonist. Today, I personally like it very much when I see the heroine's attitude change from a favorable attitude to a feeling of alienation. But considering that the male protagonist escapes later, it should happen that Qi did something that caused the female protagonist to hurt the male protagonist, so the male protagonist ran away. I'm looking forward to this part of the plot, but I think it will make me feel sick to my stomach. Come on, author, think carefully. It's been so exciting these days! Seeing that the score slowly increased from 7.1 To 7.8, It can be seen that there is no big problem with the author's writing! Come on

In fact, it's not bad. The author has a very good attitude, patiently replies to readers, and does a lot of updating that others can't do. In the article, Qi is too capable and behaves in various situations, and the heroine has lived in that kind of environment since she was a child. She should have understood that Qi is not a true gentleman, but she is still willing to socialize with him. Is the reason why Qi is the head teacher and a conspiracy full of loopholes? It's a bit unreasonable, because many places are far-fetched. I thought it was just a connection at first, so I couldn't help but jump to the newly updated article, and it turned out that he was still alive [shocked]. It was just a side story, and the more than two hundred chapters were purely uncomfortable and unexciting, with a hint of mental mysophobia. Assuming that Qi Qi is offline early, I think the author's writing style can still create a more brilliant plot, and the reputation in the comment area will be much better, so that people who give good reviews will not be just complaining. I also look forward to the author's follow-up

The role of Qi Huan, the heroine Bai Yueguang, is well done. Fortunately, after a long time, the male protagonist became green🐢

How to say it? Every time I see some moments that hint at the male protagonist's escape, my heart aches (but I quite like this feeling😍). For example, the male protagonist swears that if the female protagonist kills someone, he will make her lose the person she likes in the future. I feel the deepest here. To be honest, a novel that touches the heart is really excellent. But I want to know will the male protagonist forgive the female protagonist in the end? At present, in my opinion, it will. After all, the heroine hasn't done anything too extreme and has no issues with principle. (What the principle is is easy to understand. Maybe mine is different from yours. If you have any questions, please feel free to comment.) But for the sake of the plot, there will be some excessive things. However, judging from the image of the heroine, I think there should be no problems in principle. Then I still hope they have a happy ending. I hope the author hears my voice. It doesn't matter if I use some cruelty or cruelty in the process. After all, the setting of the novel itself is necessary, and the twisted plot is also a kind of enjoyment for us readers, but the ending must be a good ending. But if the author wants to pursue a tragedy that leaves a deep impression on readers, I won't blame the author, really [smile]. No more nonsense, [Love] This is really a good work [Love] I hope the work will be more popular. Finally, the author must have a good ending, red bean paste Anigado! ! ! To adapt to people's needs, change "yi" to "different". [Laughing evilly] One more thing I hope the author will update is ten chapters a day, it's too few and not enough to read! Hee hee😁

As a bookworm for 10 years, I will briefly express my opinion. I've read more than 30 chapters, and there's not a single sticking point so far. Authorial subject matter is common. But it's very novel. And the writing is very good. It's very comfortable to watch. And the style is particularly perfect. This does make me feel a bit awesome. Anyway, it looks like there is no problem. You can look down with peace of mind. Why is the current rating so low? The ratings of new books are very low. So far, there are no problems. As long as the author continues to write as usual, there shouldn't be any big problems with this novel. I think he was awesome in the early stage, but I'm looking forward to it in the later stage. Come on, author!

The previous part is okay, I feel that the part where the male protagonist escapes to death and the female protagonist pursues her husband will be very exciting, I look forward to it [laughing evilly]😋

It's very interesting. I feel that the author is a very meticulous person in life. He may write a diary every day and experience many details of life with his heart. This makes the characters in the article lifelike and the many daily descriptions very vivid. For example, when learning to swim, the water is up to the chest and breathing is stuffy; in winter, the description of cold hands, while most novels only describe redness from the cold, but in this article, the fingers are swollen and numb. There are also many characters whose inner descriptions are also very detailed, and the interactions between the characters are also very interesting.