Camouflage**********

It looks good, and I can tell that the author is very careful. I would like to make a few suggestions: 1. The pace should be faster. Conspiracies and business wars can be divided into sections. It takes more than 100 pictures to reveal family problems. It is too dragging. Follow-up suggestions: Get rid of family issues as soon as possible, write less about business wars, let the heroine take power as soon as possible, and focus on relationships and yandere stories. 2. If you are single, try not to open up the relationship line with your sister. I am afraid that subsequent comments will say that you are sending your daughter away. Ha ha. 3. Bai Yueguangqi can write about the sunny spots... Add some awareness of lightning protection. In short, the author has some writing skills, but there are too many foreshadowings, which makes it easy for readers to become addicted to the book. It's better to keep up with the current flow of cool literature. There are poisonous points and too many branch lines buried. 1. Baiyue Guangguang: There are more than 100 chapters describing the relationship with the heroine. Is this going to end in death? The heroine was hugged, touched on the face, and looked at each other by Princess Bai Yueguang... This kind of... Um... Does not fit the current environment. 2. Best friend line: The cause of death and the reasons behind it are repeatedly buried, and a line of whitewashing of the heroine is also added here. ...3. Sister line: Being looked at and hugged... (And the relationship between Bai Yueguang and the heroine and the relationship between the heroine and the heroine's sister are all matched by the male protagonist... Self-love? Giving away the daughter?) 4. The family (business) power seizure line, more than 100 chapters are still in the initial stage of guessing, it is too slow. 5. Treatment of leg lines... Just opened, hiding it from the heroine. 6. The male protagonist's ex-girlfriend line was opened again. Finally, there is the heating up of the relationship between the male protagonist and the female protagonist... The subject matter is very good, but I still recommend that the author patch it up and take offline the branches that should be taken offline. The first part was really good, but in the middle and later stages it felt messy. The key points to grasp are: 1. The heroine is sickly. 2. The male protagonist escapes to death. 3. The emotional entanglement between the heroine and the hero.

The combination of book-traveling + yandere + crematorium really shocked me. Pei Song's careful strategy was written very delicately, and I can feel the tension of the temptation on the edge of death! It has a strong sense of immersion and is worth reading!

The writing is good and in line with my taste. Before reading this book, I read a lot of book reviews, which pointed out that there are some plots in this book that are not in line with the public's taste. However, after reading it overall, both the plot and the characterization are getting better and better. The more you read the back, the more you will have endless aftertaste. And there are very few authors who write 10,000 words a day. In order to prevent the author from being distracted, I will give you a five-star support. In short, when reading this book, you still have to taste it yourself. If you listen to other people's comments, you may have a submissive mentality. The writing is quite good [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

The writing is very good, and the emotional changes between the male and female protagonists are quite natural and gradual. Qi's character feels a little stomach-ache when I look at it. It feels inappropriate to put him in the villain camp, and it's even weirder to put him in the protagonist camp. Currently, it feels like a character in other novels who is about to be slapped in the face by the male protagonist. Today, I personally like it very much when I see the heroine's attitude change from a favorable attitude to a feeling of alienation. But considering that the male protagonist escapes later, it should happen that Qi did something that caused the female protagonist to hurt the male protagonist, so the male protagonist ran away. I'm looking forward to this part of the plot, but I think it will make me feel sick to my stomach. Come on, author, think carefully. It's been so exciting these days! Seeing that the score slowly increased from 7.1 To 7.8, It can be seen that there is no big problem with the author's writing! Come on

In fact, it's not bad. The author has a very good attitude, patiently replies to readers, and does a lot of updating that others can't do. In the article, Qi is too capable and behaves in various situations, and the heroine has lived in that kind of environment since she was a child. She should have understood that Qi is not a true gentleman, but she is still willing to socialize with him. Is the reason why Qi is the head teacher and a conspiracy full of loopholes? It's a bit unreasonable, because many places are far-fetched. I thought it was just a connection at first, so I couldn't help but jump to the newly updated article, and it turned out that he was still alive [shocked]. It was just a side story, and the more than two hundred chapters were purely uncomfortable and unexciting, with a hint of mental mysophobia. Assuming that Qi Qi is offline early, I think the author's writing style can still create a more brilliant plot, and the reputation in the comment area will be much better, so that people who give good reviews will not be just complaining. I also look forward to the author's follow-up

The role of Qi Huan, the heroine Bai Yueguang, is well done. Fortunately, after a long time, the male protagonist became green🐢

How to say it? Every time I see some moments that hint at the male protagonist's escape, my heart aches (but I quite like this feeling😍). For example, the male protagonist swears that if the female protagonist kills someone, he will make her lose the person she likes in the future. I feel the deepest here. To be honest, a novel that touches the heart is really excellent. But I want to know will the male protagonist forgive the female protagonist in the end? At present, in my opinion, it will. After all, the heroine hasn't done anything too extreme and has no issues with principle. (What the principle is is easy to understand. Maybe mine is different from yours. If you have any questions, please feel free to comment.) But for the sake of the plot, there will be some excessive things. However, judging from the image of the heroine, I think there should be no problems in principle. Then I still hope they have a happy ending. I hope the author hears my voice. It doesn't matter if I use some cruelty or cruelty in the process. After all, the setting of the novel itself is necessary, and the twisted plot is also a kind of enjoyment for us readers, but the ending must be a good ending. But if the author wants to pursue a tragedy that leaves a deep impression on readers, I won't blame the author, really [smile]. No more nonsense, [Love] This is really a good work [Love] I hope the work will be more popular. Finally, the author must have a good ending, red bean paste Anigado! ! ! To adapt to people's needs, change "yi" to "different". [Laughing evilly] One more thing I hope the author will update is ten chapters a day, it's too few and not enough to read! Hee hee😁

As a bookworm for 10 years, I will briefly express my opinion. I've read more than 30 chapters, and there's not a single sticking point so far. Authorial subject matter is common. But it's very novel. And the writing is very good. It's very comfortable to watch. And the style is particularly perfect. This does make me feel a bit awesome. Anyway, it looks like there is no problem. You can look down with peace of mind. Why is the current rating so low? The ratings of new books are very low. So far, there are no problems. As long as the author continues to write as usual, there shouldn't be any big problems with this novel. I think he was awesome in the early stage, but I'm looking forward to it in the later stage. Come on, author!

The previous part is okay, I feel that the part where the male protagonist escapes to death and the female protagonist pursues her husband will be very exciting, I look forward to it [laughing evilly]😋

It's very interesting. I feel that the author is a very meticulous person in life. He may write a diary every day and experience many details of life with his heart. This makes the characters in the article lifelike and the many daily descriptions very vivid. For example, when learning to swim, the water is up to the chest and breathing is stuffy; in winter, the description of cold hands, while most novels only describe redness from the cold, but in this article, the fingers are swollen and numb. There are also many characters whose inner descriptions are also very detailed, and the interactions between the characters are also very interesting.

It's good and worth reading, and there's no such thing as cheating. There's no way the heroine could have cheated on her. We all read this novel based on God's perspective and the author's spoilers. The character's thoughts must be deeper than what the hero knows, and the hero never thought about spending the rest of his life with the heroine. He only wanted to get 100 million points to escape and live a good life. Overall it's very good Yes, yes, we have reached the climax. I hope the author will take good care of it and not write bloody plots or plots that make people lose their wits [lick the screen][lick the screen][lick the screen]

Although there are a little bit of tiny poisonous spots that don't affect the whole thing. But the overall flaws are not hidden, the story is relatively complete, and I can have confidence in the future. The reason for the five stars is that he updates it five times a day and still releases it in one breath. How does that sentence come about? The frequency of updates determines my attitude towards the author. Don't support books and kill the author. Please [I'm about to cry]

It's very interesting. I stayed up late to catch up on the latest. The author is also very generous, but it's a pity that I was manipulated by a villain. Remember to call me back when I'm resurrected.

The writing is smooth, the emotions are delicate, and the foreshadowing is natural. Soul-piercing, but beautiful. [Like] The author's ability to control the rhythm of the narrative is very strong, allowing people to see the natural changes in emotional development. It stands out among many others who have full favorability and repeated horizontal jumps. [Laughs] It's a pity that I haven't updated it for four meals, so I'll keep it for now. [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

There are some minor flaws, but the writing is very good, and the author updated sixteen chapters in one day [face covering] sixteen chapters! ! The author is really a cruel person This is a single female protagonist, so don't criticize me for giving away the daughter. How could the single female protagonist be giving away the daughter? As for the intimate contact between the heroine and Bai Yueguang (fake), it is a bit toxic in a male romance novel, but it's okay. The author likes to write details too much, and the matter of helping to put on shoes feels like it's frivolous. This is the main flaw of this book. In fact, to advance the plot, it is not necessary to describe the details of touching feet. The current mainstream view is that feet are also private parts, which is still relatively unfamiliar. If there is no actual contact, just writing about making the male protagonist misunderstand is actually enough to advance the plot. The low score is mainly due to not paying enough attention to the poisonous points. The book itself is of an online standard, and the more you write, the better.

I like the interaction between the heroine and the hero very much, and although the heroine's Bai Yueguang scene is a little estranged, it is still acceptable. The heroine is gradually infected by some close interactions in the male protagonist's life.

Although I had a stomachache at the beginning, it slowly became sweeter at the end, tricking readers into killing me. It was really uncomfortable to read at the beginning, but in order not to waste my pain, I read the latest chapter, and it finally eased. It will feel sweet later on. I hope so. The author needs to add more Oil writing, we must continue to be productive [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying]

It's really good to watch. I give it five stars because I want more people to watch it. It feels like a sophisticated comic like Lu Bu and Dong Zhuo. If you savor it carefully, you will remember it like mustard. The plot also looks very good, just like a clogged sewer. 👍👍👍

It is a book with a very clear main line of emotions. It was a little uncomfortable at first to see what the system mandated. But this requirement is the same as none, so it is harmless. The emotional line of the male and female protagonists is quite smooth, and it does not appear to be sudden. Putting aside God's perspective, how they think about each other is quite reasonable.

Don't say anything, the author's serious attitude and update speed are worth it The plot is very satisfying and spot-on, and there is a feeling that you still want to continue watching even though you know what is going to happen next. It is not a pure enjoyment, which is too low-level, but a twisting kind of enjoyment, which is not smooth but has ups and downs.

I feel that the author has written well, the writing style is online, the article describes the environment and atmosphere very well, and the description of each character's psychology and actions is very detailed. Even the character Qi Huan has too much contact with the heroine. Some interactions will inevitably be associated with the interaction between the hero and the heroine, and readers will definitely feel uncomfortable if it is described too much. From the perspective of the future, the heroine's trust in the hero has been gradually established. I hope the author can give more sweets and a little torture. Hehehe [adoration] [adoration] [adoration]. Come on, author [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

Md, it's so good that it kills me. The author is also kind and writes thousands of words every day. The plot is very creative and doesn't stick to the template. I'm on vacation this week and I finished reading it (currently updated) in two days. It's very good.

It's very interesting [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]. After Pei Song escaped from death, I felt that the description of Wanxing was a bit lacking. It would be better if more could be written about the state of Wanxing. In the past two years, I actually feel that I can write a few more chapters, so that readers will be more looking forward to their reunion. I feel a little disappointed after reading it recently, but it has been well written [Adoration][Adoration], I hope the author will continue to work hard [Blowing kiss][Blowing kiss]

It's large in quantity, sweet, not mind-boggling, and has some minor flaws, but it's updated seven or eight times a day, so what else can I say, five stars for you brother, if you don't like the reviews, leave. Don't think about whether it's green or not. To create a light, you have to lay out the shadows first. It's nonsense to talk about opinions regardless of the structure. The author enjoys the writing, and you enjoy watching it.

The characters in this book are well created, and the events are clear (you need to use your brain a little). Currently, it is known that there will be two waves of villains. It is hard to say whether there will be "Hunters with Guns" in the future (I will not spoil the characters). There are some minor flaws in some places, but they are not harmful. The IQs of the male and female protagonists are both online. The villains are also very good and will not be easily exposed (except from the audience's perspective). So far, I can read it and look forward to the follow-up development.

Both the male and female protagonists have very high IQs. The author has a good grasp of the tension and ambiguity that should occur. Although there are a few places where it is a bit embarrassing (the male protagonist sometimes does things that are a bit silly), the plot and sequence of the story are very smooth and not incoherent. I support the author. [Learned]

This is the first time I have seen such a beautiful novel. This author has updated it more than a dozen times in two days. It is really good [shy][shy][shy] I hope the author will give himself two injections of adrenaline and continue to perform and keep updating a hundred times.

This book is really good to read. The writing is delicate. The plot doesn't drag on and on. The key is that the emotional scenes are really well written. The writing is really good. I cried when I read Pei Song. It's worth staying up all night to read it. I'm following this author.

To put it simply, objectively speaking, it is a good book in terms of emotional lines and plot design. These two points alone meet the needs of a refreshing novel. It can be said that the author has a high writing talent, but there is no doubt that in terms of character three-dimensionality, curves, group portrait design, line interpretation, and plot details , as well as the depth of the plot and the structure of the plot. I personally can boil it down to one point, which is the immature writing style. I think this is really hurtful. However, if you look at it without analysis, it actually looks good in general. Once you look at it carefully and even just think about it a little, it feels very uncomfortable.

It's very interesting, and I'm experiencing withdrawal reactions. Some people may not be able to accept the previous chapters and feel they're not satisfying enough. But this is the real thing. It's not like other novels where you have unconventional feelings for a person without warning. The author uses 300 chapters to depict a unique Jiang Wanxing. I highly recommend it.