I, Hyperjackton, Take the Star Train at the Beginning

Personally, I think it is a better second-generation novel about Honkai Star Railway. Although Hyperjetton is a popular character, it is really rare to see him without a system. [Laughing] Especially this kind of character who has no movie viewing system and is not a time traveler. I personally like this very much. However, I am curious, what is the author's positioning of this character's combat effectiveness?

I am Shennong, I am leaving, you know.

How to put it? I personally think this novel is well written, but the image of the protagonist feels a bit inconsistent. After all, judging from appearance alone, even if Jayton has self-awareness, he should not have this kind of character.

The plot has a lot of originality. Unlike some articles, the protagonist has the power to overturn the table. The plot of being wanted in Yaliluo remains unchanged at all. Apart from showing that the protagonist is not unconscious because of his strength, the rest is the same as the plot. This book is different. With the power to overturn the table, he is not wanted.

Personally, I think it's very encouraging. After all, it's a combination of a very popular game and a very popular character. It might be a bit toxic. After all, if fan fiction isn't toxic, can it still be called fan fiction? Anyway, cheers to the author! Looking forward to daily updates

It's so rare to finally see someone who has not changed into a human being. There are so many strange races in the universe, why do you have to become a human being?

It's very good, and it's very well written. It brings hope amidst despair. Despair is food, beauty is scenery.

I feel like there is no need to follow the plot all the time. I want to watch something more enjoyable that is free from regrets. [Laughs] I want to watch Jetton's elbow machine and romance the ancient city.

Come on, author, but I think Hyperjetton is more suitable as a villain. If I want to write about you, I would recommend Cailong [Thinking]

It's better to look at. It's much better than the previous God-defying stuff. I really don't know when it was made. The quality suddenly changed and became very bad. I think this book is a better one. I even think I've taken too many poisons now, so I can give it a five-star rating. I don't know when it will be officially released. Like "Xikang in Xiakang" as performed in the poem, Jetton doesn't play much, and it's better to have some original plot.

It is one of the better novels we have read among Beng Tie. The protagonist Jayden makes us feel like a very reliable big brother, sensible and powerful. However, what I like most is the interaction between the three little ones and others under the change of protagonist. It seems really comfortable. Using the most extreme darkness to do justice, I remembered that I wrote a character myself, alas

Be sure to write about Omphalos fucking to death and laigu shit[angry]

It's beautiful, very beautiful, but why is it rated so low? I almost couldn't read a book that suits my liking

The writing style, content, and word count are all good enough, but Jayton lacks a trace of divinity.

The writing is good [like], but I think the characters' emotions can be expressed more naturally [OK]

Bengtie is already invincible, it would be a pity not to build a canopy

Rare subject matter, support me

People have different preferences

Super awesome and good looking

Finished? So fast!

My evaluation is very red

Yes, yes (can't write)

New author, please encourage me. [Top post][Top post] I hope the updates will not stop [Ask for more updates][Ask for more updates]

It is well written and very creative. I hope the author will continue to work hard and finish this book well. I will continue to support you.

As a newbie, your writing is already quite good. I would like to give you a review.

Very good, hope it doesn't end badly

Come on, come on, come on

Not bad, just don't die

The lack of heart is afraid of the author being proud.

It's creative and it's okay to eat.