Red Mansion: Rebirth of Liu Xianglian, Sister Feng Comes to the Door at the Beginning

I just finished reading it. The author's writing style is still rare and delicate. This new book goes directly from Japanese light novels to classical literature. The span is not even a bit large. However, the previous book really made me scratch my head. Is the author considering "playing both ways"? Make a "guest appearance" in another show? The control of psychology and pleasure in this book is great. Love itself is the heart, and different psychology means different expressions of love. This is awesome. Sister Lin's portrayal is even more divine. I really like it, but I don't know when I will see the end. So should the author consider changing things to someone else? [Crying][Crying][Crying][Crying]

Not bad, but it's a pity that my little girl died before I finished reading it.

The previous book was more delicate, but this one changed the style and was written very well. It stands out among the Dream of Red Mansions fan fiction. I have read Dream of Red Mansions four times, and it can be seen that the author is very familiar with Dream of Red Mansions, and he is not the last to be famous for Dream of Red Mansions. The writing is not bad, and it is very good.

It's good-looking, not toxic at the moment, and the author's writing skills and rhythm are also on point. Just don't know about starting a harem? After all, Feng Lazi's original work also hated the concubine who lived in the same house with him so much that he was afraid that there would be chaos in the house fight. I hope this can be handled well. Only Feng Lazi is pretty good [blowing kiss][blowing kiss] as long as the writing is good.

Well written as always. At first you said that Riqing was too niche, so you wrote a novel with a wider audience. The result was Dream of Red Mansions. .

This book is a pretty good one that I have read on Tomato, and one of the best among Red Mansions. As far as the beginning is concerned, the plot is compact and suitable for emotional advancement. The overall view is very coherent. It is also considered a guaranteed high-quality book among the Red Mansions next door. As long as the author can maintain the current rhythm, this book will definitely achieve results.

It's a good book. I didn't expect to find fine chaff in tomatoes. Among the Red Mansions novels I've read, the opening is ranked among the top. The writing is smooth, the characters are three-dimensional and full, and the story's opening concept is also very good. There are few novels with Sister Feng as the heroine in the opening. Sister Feng is a girl who has not been dyed by the big dyeing vat in the inner courtyard of the house. What modern person can not love Feng Lazi who dares to love and hate, has a hard mouth but a soft heart, but also considers her heart? I have to give you five stars for this alone. Finally, I hope that the pace will not be too fast later. After all, it is a red-manufactured novel, and it can easily fall apart if you don't grasp it well.

Hateful! Surrounded by Sister Feng in the Red Mansion

I haven't finished it yet. It's from the last book. The author's writing style has improved again. With the author's writing style, I can eat on that platform [crying][crying][crying][crying][crying]

It's really well written, with a brave and resourceful protagonist who is both civil and military. It's the first Red Mansion fanfic that I can read on Rotten Tomatoes. But two updates a day is a bit too little, so I have to keep it up first. I suggest the author start updating the new book at five chapters a day.

Needless to say, the author's strength is still very strong. His writing style is even better than that of the previous book. It showed off my face, and I was shocked by the huge change in theme. Let's talk about a shortcoming compared to Kamemoto's Japanese light novels, which is also a fatal problem. It is that the emotions are not that strong. Kamemoto has the exciting point of having a revengeful evil girl, but the conflict caused by the marriage contract at the beginning of this book seems very bland. The anchor point is not deep enough and it cannot arouse enough appetite. Although the writing style is stronger, the attraction is weak, and it does not look so enjoyable. Flaws do not hide the advantages, I hope the next one will be better.

It's really a rare good book on Tomato. I wanted to read it but it was blocked [Punch]

It's pretty good. I originally thought the theme of Dream of Red Mansions would be boring, but it turned out to be like watching a female ghost before.

The writing style is very delicate, I feel it is the best Red Mansion fanfic I have ever read, and the character design of the protagonist is also very reliable and calm. I just hope the author will change the cover quickly. This cover is not worthy of such a good article [Blow kiss]

Now that I have seen the military camp establishing its authority, I personally feel pretty good about it, and the character's behavior is more logical and quite comfortable. Of course, the most outstanding one is the emotional scene with Wang Xifeng. If you have read Qidian's Red Mansion: The Blue Sky or a better Red Mansion fanfic, you will probably like this one.

Brother, what have you done? There has been no update for two or three days. Please update [crying]

Seeing that so far, there is no poisonous point in the book, it feels good when it should be, and it must be decisive when it needs to be decisive. It must be strongly supported! ! !

It's well written in just three words. Whether it's the emotional drama, the protagonist's creation, or the plot, it's all attractive. It's well written, and the writing style is also very gorgeous. It's not a piece of writing, it's readable, it's absolutely fine.

Come on, author, the five points for the new book come from the belief in the old book. I hope Laoshu can come out of the dark room again in the future. I want to know his follow-up [I'm about to cry]. As someone who started from an old book with 100,000 words to a million words, I am full of expectations for you [get it]

It's a pity that Uemoto was sanctioned This book is pretty good too. You must live on [crying]

After chasing it, I found out that he is actually the author of Female Little Ghost. It's so interesting and I love reading it.

The wording is delicate but not too exaggerated, which makes people feel comfortable to read. It is a good product and a good article, but it is missing a little bit.

It has changed a lot from the original style, but the author's writing style is very good. I read it for a long time without realizing it. It is considered a masterpiece among the Dream of Red Mansions fandom. The only shortcoming is that it is too short [please update]

It's pretty good.. The description method is very detailed. The description of the characters and the location description can be seen from the wording and narrative techniques. The only problem is the age issue, but it is also understandable. The protagonist needs to be first-hand or for the advancement of the plot.

The writing is really good, but after reading it, I didn't find any outstanding problems. I feel like a lot of the online articles about Red Mansion are written about the little emperor's uncle. Many of them are too obscene, and it's easy to get bored after reading too much. Often, it's hard to have the patience to read other content because of this gimmick. The foreshadowing in this book is not bad, and it looks like a serious about writing emotional dramas. It's worth a read.

Fortunately, the last book is still on my bookshelf, otherwise I wouldn't have read it.

The writing style is very good, but I hope the author can use more brains when writing. Wang Xifeng is not married yet, and Xichun has begun to believe in Buddhism. At most, she is just born at this time.

Brother, why did you stop writing?

It's very beautiful, but the original copy is gone [crying]

Approximately how many chapters does the author's protagonist plan to collect the phoenix to eat meat [exploration] I want to see some education and training [blowing kiss] @ Unless Zhaoxia