Taoist Priest*****

It cleverly blends Eastern Taoist culture with the Western magical world to create a reading experience that is both familiar and novel. The protagonist Lin Yun, as a young Taoist priest from Zhongnan Mountain, observes and participates in the daily life of Hogwarts with his unique "Tao follows nature" perspective. The author's writing style is beautiful, his narrative is calm, and he is especially excellent in character creation. The emotional development between Lin Yun and Aleric Blackwood from alienation to tacit understanding is delicate, real and full of tension. The story not only reproduces the classic plot of the original work, but also integrates magic, power and the meaning of life through Taoist concepts such as "inaction" and "quietness".

Very well written! ! ! ! ! (≧▽≦) It feels warm and peaceful. I especially like the understanding of Taoism in the article. Xiaoyun is very cute (a bit silly). The emotional line between the two is also very good and not abrupt. I hope to keep writing (￣￣)

The author's writing style is very good, and the article contains a lot of thoughts and philosophies about Taoism, and the clever collision with Western culture is unexpectedly well integrated. The main characters in the article are very detailed, and the characters are three-dimensional. They create two characters who can still stick to their hearts and be loyal to their emotions in an environment of different cultures and concepts. They can unswervingly choose each other even in extreme and desperate situations. The large section mainly writes about the emotions and academic thoughts between the two protagonists, with less mention of the main plot and characters of the original book. Personally, I prefer the process of the relationship between the two protagonists slowly warming up [shy][shy]

Thirty-four. Very good. Typical articles with moderate polish and smooth writing. The author has studied Eastern Taoism and Western culture, and naturally blends Eastern and Western academics into the original plot. The plot is very short, and the third-person summary method is mostly used to convey the plot. If it can be expanded, it will be really brilliant. It is really awesome to write a novel for the first time. The general summary is freedom, the freedom to pursue the great road and a carefree world. It would be better if the classroom learning and magical travels could be written clearly. The fantasy feels like an extension of the magical world, which is not noticed by the mainstream world but is real enough. Two sapiosexuals fall in love naturally. Their relationship and love are like the fusion of Eastern and Western magic they studied, seeking common ground while reserving differences and then reaching the same destination through different paths. The characters are really good, the cold, arrogant and orderly Snow Owl ➕The naturally calm and gentle White Crane, plain and simple, pursuing the truth. But it has little to do with the original work. The protagonist does not participate in the original plot. Most of the time, he is outside. What should happen will happen. He and the protagonist are classmates and friends, and they will not fight side by side. It feels like the author used the background of magic to write a story about the collision of Eastern and Western cultures to express her thoughts on Taoism and magic.

The writing style is fresh and elegant, the emotions flow from shallow to deep, and the plot is coherent and not procrastinating. It is told in a eloquent and prose style. PS: It's not about the main character (i. E. HP's main drama), it's a snake farm story outside of the main drama. The main drama is basically covered in one go. PSS: Like it so much⁽(◍˃̵͈̑ᴗ˂̵͈̑)⁽

It's a fairy tale, it's a fairy tale. I don't know how long it's been since I've read such a fragrant article. Thunderbolt: None Advantages: 1. The emotional line of the article is thin and the flow is long. The intersection between the two people is a top-notch collision of wisdom and creation. The two people with high IQs and the detailed explanation process gave me the feeling that the author is really a Taoist priest. The writing is particularly good. 2. Although it is a hp fanfic, it is more like an independent short story, plainly describing the love story between two people. The protagonist group rarely appears, and the protagonist rarely enters the country. Lin Yun will not interfere with the main story line, only in the story line with Alex. 3. The two of them are always behind each other, and neither one will leave. After seeing Alex betray the Black family for Lin Yun, Lin Yun is still firmly by Alex's side, I really feel indescribable excitement. 4. The career line is also good. I applaud it. It is two people's joint participation, creation and discussion. They have such a tacit understanding that they know what they want to do with one look. The combination of Chinese and Western, the truth and explanation mentioned, I really doubt that the author has really done it. Now the main text has been completed. Although it is very small, if you read it carefully, it takes about three or four hours. The extra car is also good. Hope to make and create more masterpieces!

A very nice short story! It's a genre I've never read before. It's overall light but very happy. The writing is great, but I was on the wrong side of TAT the whole time. I highly recommend reading [Blowing Kiss][Blowing Kiss]

Nice! It's a very long-lasting love, very short but with a long span of time. The young couple are both sapiosexual, and their unwavering choice for each other is really great! The emotional line is also very natural, the author's writing style even includes cars [blowing kisses]

The author does not need to look in the mirror at all, because God has no image and cannot be reflected So pretty. There are no words to describe my inner feelings [love][love][KISS][KISS]

Overall, it's pretty good. It's a rare book among HP fanfics. It doesn't involve too many stories about actively participating in the protagonist group. I think this is pretty good. The two protagonists firmly believe in each other when facing many things. Both are scholars, and the narrative style of the article is relatively light and elegant. I read it intermittently over several days, and the two protagonists' interactions were pretty good. I hope the author will continue to work hard.

Mom, the author is so talented, and the sentences are so melancholy and beautiful. You can even excerpt good words and sentences here. I feel that this book is no longer a novel, but can be read as a prose. The author's writing style is very different from other novels, but I surprisingly accepted it well and loved it very much.

What a magical book, very light, with two main characters, but it made me very excited (although I don't know why I was excited)^_^ HP's original main line has been briefly mentioned, so it won't affect me if I haven't read it. . I finished reading it in one sitting, probably just for dessert after dinner. . . Right

The writing is good. Although the length is short, it mainly tells the content of the protagonist. The four little ones and the main content are basically mentioned in one go. It depends on what you like. However, this kind of writing is really clear and fluent, and it is very well written.

The author's writing is very, very, very good! I finished reading it in one night. The protagonist basically does not participate in the plot of Harry Potter, which mainly revolves around the collision between the ideological and cultural system of Chinese Taoism and nature and the ideological and cultural system of the magical world. It is a very interesting subject.

It looks good, the writing is very good, I like [blowing kisses] very much. That is, if you watch it too quickly and only have the plot in your mind, when you think back on it, you will feel a bit incomprehensible. Your brain's comment on it is that it is good-looking, but you don't know why it is good-looking. Why did I write like this? Because I read too quickly and forgot a little bit. If the above situation occurs [face covering], then I will be punished to taste it again and again [shy]

Different from the previous HP, the writing style is also gentle and steady. There are cultural differences and similarities between the East and the West. Harry has less main plot. The whole article is mainly about the process of the two people meeting and getting to know each other, which is quite good.

The water flows slowly, unobtrusively and naturally. It's just too new, I'm looking forward to the follow-up.

It's very beautiful, plain but attractive, ah ah it's so beautiful, I will read this book twice [shy][shy][shy][flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss][flying kiss]

Smooth and natural, the identity of a passerby remains outside. It's just that in the context of a Harry Potter world, the plot line of what the damned people should live remains unchanged and passed over in one stroke. It's just academic analysis and confirmation from time to time with Western lovers, so what's the point?

Very rational feelings

There is no thrilling experience, but the relationship comes naturally, very rational, and the logic is clear.

It's really good to read, and it has little to do with the original work. Baozi who hasn't read the original work doesn't hinder watching it. Lin Yun fits my impression of Taoism very well, and the writing is very good. I really recommend it. I stayed up late to read it. It's a short story, not long. You can read it before going to bed. Lin Yun and Aleric are sweet, and their relationship comes naturally. They are soul mates, like-minded, and the exchange and collision of East and West, magic and Taoism are really well written [Adoration] [Adoration] [Adoration]

The writing is good, not bad, and suitable for reading when you are anxious.

Very nice! Just a little less

The long and steady flow of writing is beautiful.

I wish I didn't know each other is being serialized, but a few chapters are not enough to read

I really like this kind of long-lasting love

For now, it's just a light feeling, very smooth and comfortable.

It's so good, I feel like I'm reading Lin Yun's diary. I'd like to add a chapter about two people taking care of a baby.

The author is so beautiful! ! I love you! ! [Adoration][Admiration][Like][Like]