Help! My Wicked Disciples Want to Make a Move on Their Master!

The male protagonist is very awesome, he can defeat everyone throughout the whole process. He gives me the feeling that he can do everything. The author's setting for him is really strong, so the whole book looks very refreshing and refreshing, and the refreshing writing is absolutely awesome.

The writing is pretty good, and the writing by these apprentices so far has distinct characteristics. Most importantly, the yy clips are also very unique [laughter] Some suggestions, I hope that the emotions of the male protagonist can be richer in writing, a bit like putting on pants and disowning people. The plot could be richer, but a little too short The most important thing is to remind you to update hhh

It is also the best in Tomato Tang. The person who can read it without expression is the contemporary Shen Nong.

The fourth chapter of Peerless Tang Dynasty has made me collapse several times. It can help some people who are not good at poison resistance to practice poison. It is recommended.

It's good-looking, it's good-looking. Ye You is currently the most yandere and the one who loves to bully the male protagonist. The author should write more scenes of the male protagonist being injured and vomiting blood. It's kind of cool.

This novel is a feast of words! The interlocking plots are breathtaking, the characters are as vivid as neighbors, and every page you turn is like stepping into a new world. It will be a long-lasting aftertaste after reading it. It is definitely worthy of a five-star recommendation! How are the realms divided?

It's pretty good to watch, but many of the settings in the early stages don't hold true in the later stages. Just like the protagonist had a system in the early stage, the system in the later stages is gone. Moreover, the protagonist's master is constantly being marginalized in the later stages. Moreover, Liu Ruyan from the early stage disappears in the later stages. Moreover, many of the protagonist's apprentices have roles in the early stage but no roles in the later stage. Some even have very few roles. However, in general, it is still very good-looking. I hope the author will update this kind of books again. Five-star praise and support.

I have been reading for a long time, and I have reached about chapter 206, which is the chapter about Han Yue, the great disciple. I think it is generally good. Maybe the author forgot about one of the disciples in the big words. The disciple with the blood of the ferocious beast, she is missing? ! It would be better and more perfect if the author greatly activates the time and space retrieval skills to add her back to Hanyue's chapter. Oh~ yes, it's the fourth child. The author, you don't know which chapter wrote about the fourth child hanging on the beam, but he didn't see the fourth child appear.

Yes, the opening is very well written. It doesn't feel particularly deliberate. The overall rhythm is a bit fast. Except for the chapter in the middle, which is a bit Torah, there are no watery words in other parts. I recommend [Chigua][Chigua]

I have read Chapter 182 so far. In one sentence, if you like strong women and weak men, and the male protagonist is passive throughout the entire process and has a Shura field throughout the entire process, you will be blessed [laughing]