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I have read 30 chapters so far. The writing is average and the creativity is good, but the plot is a bit limited by Bengtie's original work. The part where the protagonist's physical body and the train crew develop together is rather boring. The main problem is that physical development is not "Lagrangian" at all! The author can put more energy and words into the description of Lagrangian worldview. Looking forward to the author's progress The motivation of the protagonist is not sufficient. The author can improve the fleet setting in Bengtie Universe and unify Lagrange's ship setting with that of Bengtie Universe to build a clear combat power system.
What I really want to say to the author is that I hope he can continue writing. Personally, I think the air combat aspect gives me a great visual sense. I really hope you can keep writing. Although the plot is relatively average, the battles and various scenes describing the base really made me feel as if I was actually there and imagining the scene. For me, what attracts me to this book is the description of the ship, the process of the battle, and the exciting giving of orders. (ง•̀_•́)งAuthor, come on But for now, it's really short. I finished it quickly.
Author, author. Your population is unlimited. You can create some infantry to coordinate the battle. This will be very handsome. And you can also do it this way and shoot some special forces. Go to Bill Point for a sneak attack. Imagine your special forces throwing smoke grenades. In their eyes, a red light suddenly flashed in the smoke. Cool just thinking about it. I don't know if I read too many happy novels. Reading this novel, I always feel that the characters in it always have a sense of humanity and machine. The side panel feels very lifeless.
Lagrange's book is too niche, this one is worth reading
The combination of the two makes me happy. Let's add more endless battle scenes😁😁
A good novel, I hope the author will stick to it until the end
The subject matter is novel and interesting. Love to read.
Come on, author, stick to it!
Truth and objectivity are mostly described with a clear structure
Middle! Too hit! ! ! The second brush is ready, the second brush is done