I originally wanted to write a story about a father doting on his son, but it got away from me as I wrote. I learned a new term from the comments: this might be a dark, angst-filled story.
Still, we have to believe in love. Xi Nian will definitely be healed; as for how everyone else develops, we'll just have to take it one step at a time.
The plot isn't entirely under my control. The characters have minds of their own and often do things I never expected.
Sometimes I get carried away writing, and... I've already scrapped several outlines as the story developed. At the moment, I'm writing day by day with no outline and no chapters in reserve.
There are no main or secondary pairings, and Xi Nian will not reach adulthood.
The first volume moves at a fast pace, and its court intrigue won't stand up to close scrutiny.
The second volume follows Xi Nian's daily life in Jiangning Prefecture. It has a slower pace.
Hei Ni Tuan loves the story, I really feel that the male protagonist is so pitiful, can the author help the male protagonist to stand up, instead of being rounded and squashed by others in the name of love, and the male protagonist's mother is so pitiful, so pitiful, the mother who gave so much at the beginning of the story. Now it seems that the three children she gave birth to are far away, and the husband has no intention. She feels like she has become just a tool. What a pitiful mother, what a pitiful baby 🥺
After reading what I have written so far, how can I say, I came here for the group pet article, but I personally feel that this one is more like the Black Mud Heartthrob [young version]. The perspective of Zai is pitiful and many of them are about him in the eyes of others, but the writing is very good. After reading one volume, I didn't read it as a group pet article. Maybe it's because I prefer this kind of morbid love in reading articles? Anyway, I quite like it. The highlight is that Zai's father is too possessive and has to do everything by himself. Zai's mother is neglected and abuses Zai's mother. The rest will be discussed later. I like this kind of thing very much. If you just like to read the story of group doting on Zai, Zai is controlled by Zai's father and the Seventh Prince in the early stage. It is a very pathological kind of liking him, a bit like a puppet on a string, but Zai Xiao doesn't understand it yet.
I really like it. I particularly like the description of the male protagonist's increasing desire to control Xi Nian. The writing style is really good and it's very interesting to read. I'm looking forward to the development of the plot later. I enjoyed watching it all. Highly recommend! I can't see enough 😢😢😢
I have only read the first few chapters so far, but it is enough to feel the power of the teacher's writing. The foreshadowing in the first few chapters has enhanced the persuasiveness of the protagonist being the group's favorite, and has gradually revealed the theme of love is poison 👍👍👍
I really like it, I really like it, I like it so much. The teacher's writing is so touching. It's a very nice book. I'm full of morbid feelings. I beg you to continue writing like this. I really like everyone's strong twisted and morbid love for hope Nian [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart]
At first I thought it was just a pet novel. After seeing the back, I suspected that I had gone to the wrong place. Did the author have a vest somewhere before 😳😳
When I came in, I thought it would be fantasy + Machiavellian imperial examination + group favor. It's like being attracted by the botanical garden's propaganda, but when you go in, you find that it is full of gram-fed plants. Later, forget it, just eat whatever you see.
Halfway through I read it and realized it was a bit biased. They are different from ordinary fathers and sons. Nian'er and his father are more paranoid. Nian'er is a huge fan. The author's writing is so good.
How can I put it, the father's love for his son is becoming more and more paranoid. It's weird. If you like this style, you can go for it. It's just that the Tang Yang family was miserable and pure and was used as a tool.
Woohoo, it feels miserable but not too miserable. It looks good. Come on! 😘😘😘 I hope Nian'er can grow up happily!