After I Quit the Team, the Valkyries Collectively Broke Through the Defense

This book is quite extreme. It's not like the ones I usually see. This is the kind of book that people who like it will like it very much. People who don't like it will think that the author is being cruel at first glance. However, I like to read this kind of book that is a bit more whiplash. I give it five stars. Where can I find such interesting novels again? Update it soon😡😡😡😡😡It's time for me to be angry😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡

It's good. It's of high quality among regret novels. The author can grasp the relationship between the male protagonist and the female supporting character very well. The plot is also quite daily. There's no blood feud between the male protagonist and the female supporting character. It doesn't seem as depressing as other regret novels. After reading more than sixty chapters, it's not a bad read. I haven't seen any bad points yet. But after all, it's a regret genre. The data will definitely not be very good. If the author works harder, this book still has potential.

In fact, it's really good. This subject does not describe too much in detail how the protagonist is abused, but simply quits to see them regret. It can be said that I regret the excellent work in the article. Why is the score so low?

It looks pretty good, the plot is a bit cliche, but I love reading books where you regret being kicked out of the team [laughing]

First, I regret that the text should be written on a female channel. Some parts of a male channel are toxic. It is very difficult to get high scores. But this book should be written on a female channel. From the perspective of a male channel, there are many toxic points, and some of the cool points are not there. So I gave 4 points. This is because the logic of the writing is okay. If you want to read cool articles on male channels, it is not recommended to go there. Second, there is nothing wrong with the author's writing style. It should be said that it is not bad. It should be able to give 5 points on Tomato. Third, in the work, it is also clearly written that although the protagonist is very capable, he does have problems with his fighting skills. In the first two games, the machine girl and the Valkyrie both had poor performances. Although the female characters have some minor problems, they are still in the range of normal people at the beginning. In the second dimension, they are attackable characters. After all, they are perfect characters. Then It's not a human, it's a god (Shen Youchu?), But the protagonist's personality is not compatible with women, and coupled with his ability, the protagonist is a source of pollution that makes normal people fall. He kills a wave of people every two years on average. The sister character written later confirms this statement. Those who are directly assimilated all look like ordinary people, a bit yandere + orthopedic. (Is the protagonist some kind of subspace evil god larvae?) Fourth, in terms of the character of the protagonist, he is gentle. He is really gentle. He is on the same level as the true Virgin in The Virgin. He has no bottom line and unreciprocated gentleness towards those he considers himself. It is so terrible. However, the protagonist is very capable but incompetent, that is, a variant of dog licking, or a warm man, or a central air conditioner. However, he is very capable, but it is not combat power, but an auxiliary attribute that is off the charts, which is difficult to judge. Fifth, the work as a whole is not like pure cool writing. It adopts a realistic style and is more logically rigorous. This is quite good. If you want to read it, you can read it with your brain. Generally speaking, it should not be posted to places like Tomato where cool writing has changed. If it were ten years ago, it should be posted to those magazines. I don't comment much on this point. Sixth, in terms of plot, it is still relatively compact and not too draggy, at least that's how I see it so far.

It's really well written and contains all kinds of recent memes, which can be read as funny memes. But to fully understand this article, you need some common sense of Internet surfing, such as "I beg you" and so on. It is important to understand that the characters in the second game "Honkai Impact 3" and "Girls' Frontline" can better bring imagination into play. Generally speaking, they are very good-looking.

Children, Shen Nong came back after eating the stone [smile]. The Shen Nong novel written by the author of Shen Ren allowed me to see the diversity of human beings. After reading it, Shen Nong also felt that I had it in my life. I will give it a high score so that others can read my comment. If you like naked, you can try it.

Overall, it's pretty good. After reading the comments, I understand the reason for the low score. Most of the bad points are about Yinglili having Bai Yueguang in high school. From a personal point of view, it is normal for a young lady who is new to the world to meet a scheming man, and it is normal for her to fall in love with him. And according to the young lady herself, the interaction between the two in high school was very limited. Although the Ying family is disgusting, there is nothing wrong with the loser eldest daughter Eiri, except that she is a bit stupid. As for the female protagonists, after reading the book, I feel that they are more competitive. They should be Bai Shaqi and Anjie. Except for the bad girls on the side of the sword, the other female characters can be ignored. The appearance rate of Changhe is frighteningly low. The humanoid team is basically just going through the motions. Wanwan is locked in the identity of sister. The only strong candidates for the heroine are Bai Shaqi, a netizen who has just debuted from Tianshengmei, and Anjie, a good friend for many years. Personally, I still prefer the role of Anjie, a good brother who can support the male protagonist unconditionally, has stories and interactions with the male protagonist without betrayal, and can also form a band together. There are too many other characters to win. As far as Anjie's portrayal is concerned, it is still recommended to watch.

I was almost dissuaded by the score, but luckily I came in. This year I saw a book on Tomato that ranked among the top ten, especially the portrayal of the character's regretful mentality. It really hit my mark. I give you five stars to increase the author's popularity😄

Yes, it's more novel than traditional regret articles. It removes the aggrieved points of traditional regret articles. It looks very refreshing.

It's really not bad. It's a good book about regrets about quitting the team that Tomato Gold Rush took out. The plot is compact after all. The feeling of regret about quitting the team is basically once every ten chapters or so. It's much better than quitting the team at the beginning and then regretting it after one or two hundred chapters.

128. The daily writing is more about group portraits. Things like regret flow and love occasionally pop up to give a sense of presence. To be honest, I can't figure out what the male protagonist is going to do. I read it but didn't fully read it. It's a pity to abandon it if it's tasteless. To be honest, it's better to write the male protagonist to death and enter the pure regret flow.

Although there are some routines, it is still quite interesting, especially if you include Girls' Frontline and Honkai Impact III, it will be more interesting. Ha ha

I often see this book being said poorly in paragraph reviews. It's actually quite normal. This book is about the daily love life of two-dimensional fans. Moreover, its content is somewhat gravity-defying, which in itself is very challenging for readers. Not to mention that this book is classified in Gao Wu Ji Niang. It will definitely be difficult for people who like to watch battles to watch the daily life of love with this kind of gravity. Fortunately, I read Love Daily, otherwise I would have missed a good book. Come on, author. Remember to change the classification back, This book is of high quality whether it is a two-dimensional section or a daily section on urban love. But it was placed in Gaowu. How to say it? At first glance, I thought this was for robot girls to compete in, or to have fun fighting. Still harmed by classification.

No spoilers, I am a bookworm from Qidian Tomato and a reader of thousands of books for 15 years+ I have read more than 200 chapters so far Personal rating: 8.9 Points Comments (Advantages): Multi-heroine type, harem novel, no romance, no excessive color. The author has a strong ability to portray characters. It can be said that every character appears is not superfluous and has its own characteristics. At the same time, the protagonist's character is also very clear and charming. It is of the highest level in this type of novel. At the same time, the plot does not have too many repetitions of the same type, and the rhythm is very ups and downs. I don't understand the low Tomato score at all. This book is excellent, so don't hesitate to read it. Comments (disadvantages): There are too many character names in the early stage, which makes me, who doesn't read carefully enough, occasionally unable to distinguish people. The curtain of world view is too simple. Although the main subject of the article is the harem, if the world view in the additional points is integrated with emotions and pictures to better reflect each character, this book has a higher level and can reach 9.0+. However, this writing method is extremely difficult and can easily distort the main body. It can be used as a reference for understanding.

The male protagonist has too many past events. From the current perspective, even excluding the mercenary period will not affect the development of the plot at all. The author may want to write a lot, but the plot is limited and cannot be expressed at the moment. But it is undeniable that in the category of regret articles, this book is quite well written. Including the very controversial plot of the Ying family in the comment area, in fact, the characters are not important at all. Skipping it and not watching it will not affect the main plot at all. I feel that if all those messy characters were deleted and the plot and writing were concentrated on the main characters, the rating would be much higher. But this will lead to a very thin plot, which requires the author to develop more attractive side plots, rather than simply using different people to support the entire book. Personally, I think it would be more interesting to focus on describing the same character from different angles than to cram in a large number of characters and give each character a little plot.

It's okay. It's pretty good food and fodder. It doesn't have any poisonous points. According to what's written, I guess there won't be any entanglement with the previous team. There's also a new team and the people in the team are pretty good. I just started writing. It's just a seedling. Cheers to the author [sending heartfelt wishes]

It's interesting, the plot feels unreasonable but somehow reasonable, and the protagonist's personality is quite likable. It's good, but not even as good as the people at the starting point. At least like the Yinglili part, if it were in the hands of some low-level authors, it would be bad at least for a hundred chapters. Various pulls and pulls were solved perfectly in less than 20 chapters. Below is Changhe Hao: Judging from the current plot, only the little Loli can still try to save the Changhe Hao, and because she is timid and silent, her status will not be too high. The others are all cool. Robot Doll Group: Those who don't know are the members of the harem group, and their favorability is full. Those who voted with knowledge and those who voted by default are all in disgrace. Female netizen: Not found, the favor is full Yinglili: The game has been completed and the remaining plots will not exceed 10 chapters. Sister: Zhengong Anjie: She is quite obsessed and has a crush on her, but the male protagonist really treats her as a brother, and it may be that Lily is easy to poison some people, so it is difficult to have any results.

Having a layer of two-dimensional skin is what motivated me to start reading it, and there are more and more interesting jokes on the airwaves. At present, the main character of the protagonist is that he will repay anyone who treats him well. Except for the old team of course. So far, no matter how much my old teammates plead, they have always refused, or even feigned disgust. Even if they had really good memories, they only shook their hearts of compassion and strengthened their belief in disgust. Probably, "It's human nature to miss the time when we trusted each other. If you want to go back, you'll have a hole in your head and you won't believe it again." The bigger poisonous point is the bodyguard plot, which I'm okay with because it introduces the protagonist's strength and shows the changes in his heart and behavior after he quits the team. So I don't pay too much attention to this part, but the deduction of stars is also here. It was really cool to see the male protagonist directly recognize his online girlfriend, and there was no pretentiousness about saying we were Internet friends. Just enjoy the benefits of being loved first.

It contains the unlocking machine, Young Qian's tactical doll, and maybe a few more things. I haven't read much of it yet. It's like a regular cool novel, and there's no boring plot. You can check it out.

Not bad, more than 20 chapters, no regrets, no new team members. But the setting is a bit bad. I originally thought it was a private matter, but the official captain has retired. I don't understand why such a big thing happened without any incident. Maybe I don't like the heroine's character. It's purely for personal reasons. I don't have a problem with her, but it just seems too dramatic. Overall it's okay, it looks watchable for the time being. I also saw someone mention another book in the comments. I think that book is the best in this genre, a masterpiece, non-toxic, and excellent.

I'll give it five stars. This book is a magical book with a sense of dry humor, but not everyone likes this kind of book, so the rating is low. For those who like it, it is a sacred book written by a god, so you might as well read it first before talking about it. How should I put it, the back part has a very Japanese comic look to it. You don't need to think about it, just eat it and that's it. By the beginning of Chapter 285, there are no humans at all, but it's good, I just like this crazy plot [laughing]

Okay, okay, the plot in Regret Stream is relatively smooth. It's really interesting that there is also a segment on the Urban Soldier King.

Not bad. The feeling of the crematorium is very good, especially the part about M870. The part about Ying Lili and her 🐴 brought down the overall impression, and then the part about "super powers" felt too deliberate, and the flaws are not covered up. Is the heroine really Yu?

I don't care what you do, hurry up and come to the crematorium, take it all in, and feed the education and training to my mouth😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋 I've already played the second game and watched the harem. Come on, show me the training😋😋😋I want to teach and accompany you😋😋😋 The author, I support the full collection, and the education and training will be provided as soon as possible😋😋😋

An introduction is never a waste! If you finish reading the introduction of a book before it starts, it will be like chewing gum for the first time, and it will feel very comfortable immediately. If you look at the back, you will see that everything is tasteless, so what is there to see? The introduction of Chapter 60 is a highlight of the book in my opinion. Long-term plot + no sloppiness = full of visual appeal.

I regret reading a good book. The Yinglili part is a bit poisonous, but then the author also realized this and changed his writing style. The more he writes, the more comfortable he becomes.

This book is actually quite good among works of the same type. There were many poisonous points in previous works like this, but I see that there are no poisonous points in this book now. I don't know why the rating of this book is so low, except that the number of words is a bit short.

Yes, I encourage you. The current disadvantage is that the original team's cooperation is suppressed. Let's see how it is written later. Finally, the rating is around 6:00. In one sentence, 10 updates a day will allow a great scholar to debate the scriptures for you. The author maintains the original quality and update speed and improves the rating to 8+ or even 9+.

The rhythm is good, it doesn't stick to the subject matter, and it doesn't suffer and hate every day. It has the appearance of a great emperor. It made me laugh out loud as a sniper inspecting his knife on the road. The Ying family is really a failure. To be honest, the act of turning back is really unpopular, especially the head of the Ying family. What does it mean to pull out the corpse and whip it? Supplementary note: What is the purpose of chisel chisel? ? ? What are you doing, author? Invincible