Starving Corpses: The Fine Grain Ears

To be honest, I didn't expect that there are still people writing Hungry Death fan fiction. The writing is delicate, the inner drama is real, and the actions can also highlight the characters' personalities. It missed the popularity. The cover of the book is average. It is a typical good book that has been buried. I highly recommend everyone to read it. Then I just suggest that if it is convenient, you can change the cover to a better-looking one, which may attract new readers. Finally, come on, author, we readers are supporting you. You should also pay attention to your health. Don't tire yourself out by writing novels. Your body always comes first. Finally, if you can, please don't stop updating. I will always wait for the good ending. In short, this is a very good, very good, very interesting novel. I highly recommend everyone to read it. Five stars!

The theme is okay, the plot is okay, but the pace is slow, and one thing is repeated dozens of times. The part where He is struggling to pretend to be Sui or run away is said several times, and it appears in large numbers in subsequent articles, which seems a bit deliberate. The overall reading of the article feels a bit depressing. There are many psychological descriptions, but there are too many. Although it can show the rich inner emotions of the characters, I personally feel that it is very laborious to step into the role. Also, there are too few events described in a few pictures. Sometimes one thing can be written into more than ten chapters, but the sum of dozens of chapters actually does not write much at all. Multi-perspective description can indeed show the full picture of the event in all aspects, but there are many repetitive aspects, especially the description of scenery. The author may want to comprehensively express the actions, expressions and language of all the characters in this event, but this is the reason for the slow pace (it does not mean that different perspectives are not allowed to be written, it just means that some repeated things can be eliminated, the language is cleaner and tidier, and the multi-perspective aspect is indeed suitable for this article). There are too many repetitive parts in the article, not only referring to the things mentioned above, but also too many repeated sentences. One thing is said dozens of times in the article, and each time it is described with the same sentence structure as the last time or the last time. It is the part that He experienced when he was a child. It first appeared in Chapter 3 and is still mentioned repeatedly in nearly 80 chapters. Of course, some of it is for plot needs. In short, the pace is slow, there are too many repeated descriptions, there are too few things, and the characters hesitate too much. Sorry, the above is my humble opinion. It contains subjective factors. I don't have enough personal experience to comment, so I hope you can understand. Keep up the hard work and hope this article gets better and better 👍

The empress is about to leave, and the hunger and death fever is over, but this does not hinder the cooking ability and love of our Liang Sui chef. 😘 To be honest, it has been a long time since I read such a detailed and well-written Liang Sui article. I just like to read some twisted, not frank and slow-burning love. I must give He He Suisui a good ending😭😭😭 Author, please don't interrupt the update. If you dare to interrupt the update, I will hang myself for you. Meow

I love it so much. Although there are some comments saying that the plot is too slow, I think Liangsui should have this kind of hazy and obscure love that may not be revealed in a lifetime. The entanglement and emotions between Liangsui are not uncomplicated, but the author has really grasped it well, without any sense of violation, and the characters and emotional lines are perfect. I like this kind of slow-burn entanglement with a bit of be aesthetics 🍉 (but author, you must give Liangsui a good ending!) (I have neither a good impression nor dislike of the character He. I still only accept the relationship between Liangsui and Liangsui, but at present, He does not have much influence. As long as she does not compete for the position of Sui's wife, I will accept it [please update])

The ending of "Spreading Flowers" can be regarded as a masterpiece in my opinion, but the pace is a bit slow. After all, the perspective of three people, although it is more than 600,000 words, in summary, the story is not too much, but it has everything it should have. Although the ending feels a bit rushed, it is smooth and smooth. Damn it, it's a pity that there are too few plots of the three of them living together. I'll have to wait for the sequel. (Another point is that Liang's attitude towards He'er in the early stages was so bad that it really affected the viewing experience. I couldn't stand it at the time, but luckily I persisted and didn't miss the follow-up) [Learned]

Alas, the author suffers from the disadvantage of writing late. He is obviously a good novel. His writing style is exquisite, his language is vivid, and his emotions are expressed appropriately. It is no problem to use it as a Chinese model essay. It is a pity that he wrote it too late and missed the heat of starvation 😢 😢 😢

Hey, it's so pretty! Hehe is so cute, the ears are also beautiful, Liang is also a piece of wood

The teacher chose the angle well. It is a different experience from those scripts that travel thousands of miles. The slow life in Yangzhou feels wonderful. It can also be seen that the ending is similar to Mingyu's Hard to Hidden. It is a good work and worth reading. I am also looking forward to the teacher's new book [Blowing Kisses]

It's a good read, although some parts are repetitive and a bit long-winded, and the description of psychological activities is a bit too complicated and unrealistic, but the reading is still okay. I haven't seen any bad points so far, so it's worth reading. (Super harsh review)

The whole fanfic can be said to be very good, the emotions are progressive and delicate, that is, I want to read he, what does it mean if you get stuck for me 😠 write me he quickly, I disappeared three times in a row when I was playing Hungry Death, I don't want to eat at all, please, please write he quickly 😢