Death by Hunger: Suihe's Good Relationship

To be honest, I didn't expect that there are still people writing Hungry Death fan fiction. The writing is delicate, the inner drama is real, and the actions can also highlight the characters' personalities. It missed the popularity. The cover of the book is average. It is a typical good book that has been buried. I highly recommend everyone to read it. Then I just suggest that if it is convenient, you can change the cover to a better-looking one, which may attract new readers. Finally, come on, author, we readers are supporting you. You should also pay attention to your health. Don't tire yourself out by writing novels. Your body always comes first. Finally, if you can, please don't stop updating. I will always wait for the good ending. In short, this is a very good, very good, very interesting novel. I highly recommend everyone to read it. Five stars!

The empress is about to leave, and the hunger and death fever is over, but this does not hinder the cooking ability and love of our Liang Sui chef. [Blowing kiss] To be honest, it has been a long time since I read such a detailed and well-written Liang Sui article. I just like to read some twisted, not frank and slow-burning love. I must give He He Suisui a good ending😭😭😭 Author, please don't interrupt the update. If you dare to interrupt the update, I will hang myself for you. Meow

I love it so much. Although there are some comments saying that the plot is too slow, I think Liangsui should have this kind of hazy and obscure love that may not be revealed in a lifetime. The entanglement and emotions between Liangsui are not uncomplicated, but the author has really grasped it well, without any sense of violation, and the characters and emotional lines are perfect. I like this kind of slow-burn entanglement with a bit of be aesthetics [eating melon] (but author, you must give Liangsui a good ending!) (I have neither a good impression nor dislike of the character He. I still only accept the relationship between Liangsui and Liangsui, but at present, He does not have much influence. As long as she does not compete for the position of Sui's wife, I will accept it [please update])

The theme is okay, the plot is okay, but the pace is slow, and one thing is repeated dozens of times. The part where He is struggling to pretend to be Sui or run away is said several times, and it appears in large numbers in subsequent articles, which seems a bit deliberate. The overall reading of the article feels a bit depressing. There are many psychological descriptions, but there are too many. Although it can show the rich inner emotions of the characters, I personally feel that it is very laborious to step into the role. Also, there are too few events described in a few pictures. Sometimes one thing can be written into more than ten chapters, but the sum of dozens of chapters actually does not write much at all. Multi-perspective description can indeed show the full picture of the event in all aspects, but there are many repetitive aspects, especially the description of scenery. The author may want to comprehensively express the actions, expressions and language of all the characters in this event, but this is the reason for the slow pace (it does not mean that different perspectives are not allowed to be written, it just means that some repeated things can be eliminated, the language is cleaner and tidier, and the multi-perspective aspect is indeed suitable for this article). There are too many repetitive parts in the article, not only referring to the things mentioned above, but also too many repeated sentences. One thing is said dozens of times in the article, and each time it is described with the same sentence structure as the last time or the last time. It is the part that He experienced when he was a child. It first appeared in Chapter 3 and is still mentioned repeatedly in nearly 80 chapters. Of course, some of it is for plot needs. In short, the pace is slow, there are too many repeated descriptions, there are too few things, and the characters hesitate too much. Sorry, the above is my humble opinion. It contains subjective factors. I don't have enough personal experience to comment, so I hope you can understand. Keep up the hard work and hope this article gets better and better [Like]

The ending of "Spreading Flowers" can be regarded as a masterpiece in my opinion, but the pace is a bit slow. After all, the perspective of three people, although it is more than 600,000 words, in summary, the story is not too much, but it has everything it should have. Although the ending feels a bit rushed, it is smooth and smooth. Damn it, it's a pity that there are too few plots of the three of them living together. I'll have to wait for the sequel. (Another point is that Liang's attitude towards He'er in the early stages was so bad that it really affected the viewing experience. I couldn't stand it at the time, but luckily I persisted and didn't miss the follow-up) [Learned]

Alas, the author suffers from the disadvantage of writing late. He is obviously a good novel. His writing style is exquisite, his language is vivid, and his emotions are expressed appropriately. It is no problem to use it as a Chinese model essay. It is a pity that he wrote it too late and missed the heat of starvation [crying] [crying] [crying]

Hey, it's so pretty! Hehe is so cute, the ears are also beautiful, Liang is also a piece of wood

The whole fanfic can be said to be very good, the emotions are progressive and delicate, that is, I want to read he, what does it mean if you get stuck for me [angry] write me he quickly, I disappeared three times in a row when I was playing Hungry Death, I don't want to eat at all, please, please write he quickly [cry]

The teacher chose the angle well. It is a different experience from those scripts that travel thousands of miles. The slow life in Yangzhou feels wonderful. It can also be seen that the ending is similar to Mingyu's Hard to Hidden. It is a good work and worth reading. I am also looking forward to the teacher's new book [Blowing Kisses]

It's a good read, although some parts are repetitive and a bit long-winded, and the description of psychological activities is a bit too complicated and unrealistic, but the reading is still okay. I haven't seen any bad points so far, so it's worth reading. (Super harsh review)

I finished reading it in one go. The article is overall good. The fight between the three people is a bit sadistic. The plot can't be said to be dragging. After all, the conflict between Liangsui and Liangsui has been sealed for nine years. It doesn't make sense to resolve it too quickly. What's more, He'er has joined, and He's chapter Basically, I watched it as fast as I could (I felt sorry for the author's efforts and He'er, but I still felt sorry for He'er, who was dragged away by the particularly violent and crazy Shengliang in the early stage), probably because I prefer pure love [face covering]. But even without looking closely, I can feel that He's characterization is pretty good. When I first played the game with no ending, I also thought about the sequel. At that time, I was very confused about whether it was necessary to add important characters if I wanted to continue it. It was not until I read this article that I got a lot of inspiration.

Liang He's line is really good-looking. Sometimes I forget that it's for Liang Sui. I didn't expect that Sui in this book can't compare to He. However, according to the proportion of the plot, He is indeed the female lead. She is portrayed so well that in retrospect, it's a pity that she is only a second-generation character. She was really pitiful in the early stage, and also in the middle stage. Those things I have experienced have led to my character being too sensitive. Some of the plots made me feel really pitiful for He, which made people feel distressed. Liang was too cold to He in the early stage. It was so cold that I almost couldn't stand it and gave up. However, it started to get better from the moment Sui appeared. It is a very good novel [Send Heart] [KISS]

This book is really good to read, especially when it describes how Lu Bu fights Sun Wukong for hundreds of rounds for Diao Chan, but Xue Baochai is really too strong. If it weren't for Nuoshou's outer ring hanger + Noxian guillotine, this wave of M4 six times strafing would kill him. Apart from that, I prefer Zhuge Liang's Huaguo A sentence said by 108 Monkeys in Mountain 108: "Young man, don't show off your pride in front of your brother Liang", which shows Zhuge Liang's indignation at the monkey knocking him to death with three sticks. In short, this book has an interesting plot, a clear system, many foreshadowings, the fighting scenes are immersive, and the character description is very good!

The writing is okay, the plot concept is also good, but the pace is a bit slow, and there is a bit of a knife. I prefer to watch fast-paced and pure sugar movies, but the creation is not easy, so I have to give a five-star encouragement [like][like][like]

It's a very good Ming Dynasty novel, but it resonated with me at the beginning and tortured me in reality for a while. The author's writing style is very good, with rich emotions and appropriate descriptions. It should be carefully savored and appreciated. I hope Lao Liang and Sui Sui He'er get better soon [air kiss]

It's really procrastinating at the beginning, but the psychological description is delicate and the writing is good. 666, What happened to the author? There is a creator on site B who wants to make a DLC based on your novel. Do you know him? Please elaborate [exploration]

I really feel good about it. The characters are so delicately drawn. [Smile] [Smirk] It's beautiful. The writing is gentle and powerful. The story is intriguing. After reading it, I feel full of emotion. Forget it, I can't think of any good words. That's all.

The writing style is quite delicate, and the very detailed psychological description makes people feel as if they are in the story. However, the pace of the plot of the whole book is relatively slow because of this. It's very sad in the early stage, but very sweet in the later stage. It's a good Hungry Death fanfic. The main body of this book is the emotional conflicts between the three protagonists, Liang He and Sui. It is rare to see a starving death story with a "missing" ending, and it is specifically written about the "love" between Liang Sui and the third person He. The triple perspective makes the plot of the whole book overlap, slow and protracted, but at the same time, it also allows it to vividly show the three people's moods. Various small things can have quite detailed psychological descriptions, allowing readers to witness the protagonists' step-by-step personality changes from sadness to joy, and from darkness to light.

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

It looks good, but when will Lao Liang's schizophrenia be cured and when he meets Man Sui?

Nice! Wall crack recommended! ! My first ending when I died of hunger was speechless, and I felt uncomfortable for a long time. This book is a continuation of the book without an ending. The author's writing style is very good, and the emotional description and psychological portrayal of the characters are top-notch. The narration from the first perspective is really very immersive. The change of the character's perspective and the addition of details make the story more three-dimensional. It started at 12:30 in the morning and now it's 4:50 in the morning. There are more than 140 chapters. It's so cool! ! ! Come on, author! ! !

The story of three broken souls repairing each other... The plot is really touching, and the characters are vividly created. The addition of He'er has become the bond between Liangsui and Liangsui's emotions and past. The story is really handled reasonably and in place. Teacher, you are so great! Liang Hesui, you three must live a good life [almost crying]

It's really good to watch, but Ryoya is too stupid, even worse than the original work. The author is also lying and said there is a HE ending. It's basically a better bad ending [crying] [crying] [crying] (Of course, I personally think it's mainly because it doesn't feel sweet and perfect enough) (manual dog head) and it feels like there is still a thin film between Ryo and Sui at the end. It's a bit awkward to be able to really let go of the past and fall in love. Sui feels quite cold, and Liang also feels sorry for Sui. He feels that their relationship is too stiff and they can't be truly intimate. As for He, why Liang is so rude to her, it hurts [angry]. After reading it, I feel very sad. It's one of the few novels that made me cry. [Crying] Can the author hurry up and give you sugar? @

Needless to say a masterpiece

Except for the scene where Man Sui threw himself into the lake and was rescued by someone else, which is a deus ex machina, the others are the most consistent with the original work I have ever seen.

Yes, the writing is very good. It was recommended by a group of friends. If there is a chance, can I draw it in handwriting? Post videos on site b

I stayed up for 4 hours and read 150 chapters in one go. I haven't stayed up late to read a book for a long time👍🏻You will know the level of this book after reading 10 chapters😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋

Nowadays, there is a new book with such good writing. I have read the first ten chapters. The pace is a bit slow, but the dual perspective description is very delicate. I am looking forward to the following stories.

It was so well written that it made my saliva run from my eyes.

I'm finally ready to review this book. I've been hooked from the first chapter. I have to say that this book is really good-looking. It has delicate characterizations and psychological changes. Xiaohe's psychology changes from resistance to innocence. Wow, it really deserves 5 stars.