America, 1851: I Join the Western Expansion

It's quite good-looking, refreshingly dense, and the logic is fairly clear. Many places seem to have consulted real information and incorporated the history of Sacramento during the California Gold Rush. However, many people don't know about Sacramento, so they could just write about San Francisco. (Personal suggestion) There are some places where the sentences are not fluent, probably because of the new writer. But overall it's still okay. I hope the author will continue to work hard to strengthen the sentences and the relationship between paragraphs😄😄😄

It's okay, just that some plots are a bit taken for granted, but everything else is okay. The history mentioned in it is all true, which is very good, unlike many people who write it blindly. It seems that the writer is also a newbie, please try your best 🤭

Give yourself a five-star review, after all, this is your first full-length novel. I know there are many shortcomings, but it is by recognizing my own shortcomings that I can make progress! In addition, I would like to thank all the handsome guys and beauties who commented and urged me to update this novel. Whether it is encouragement or encouragement, it has turned into motivation for me to move forward [OK]😎👍

It's a great novel, but there's too little written and it's not enjoyable enough.

I have been looking for Tao Jin's book, which suits my taste.