As an Inferior Student, I Don't Want to Stand in Front of the Stage

The protagonist is gentle but not a virgin, ruthless but not indiscriminately murderous, rationalistic and not driven by his second brother, and respects everyone accordingly. Such a protagonist is so lovable (self-praising for once🤓)

The male protagonist is afraid of society, but he is very clear-headed and has positive views, which is still not very common in Tomatoes. Moreover, the female protagonist is not a drag, and the emotional line is also well written. However, the male protagonist basically follows the crowd and is pushed by the female protagonist. I hope there will be a personal line for the male protagonist later.

The writing style is acceptable There is a clear backlash to the worldview and infrastructure layout, and it can be seen that care has been taken. There are also some new ideas in ability setting I didn't expect that the most vulgar ability would be available to the male and female protagonists, okay? Talking about the male and female protagonists, the relationship between the male and female protagonists in the first volume is relatively hasty and perfunctory. There is no foreshadowing before starting to describe the relationship. It is a bit baffling to read (Why did your relationship suddenly become so good? Where did the deep bond develop?) The author seems to have touched on it in one stroke, but this is not something that can be touched upon in one stroke. As for the battles in the first volume, every battle field is an encounter. It is very rushed and goes away quickly. I can't say there is anything wrong with the logic, but what does it look like? It feels like everyone except the audience has read the script. After going through the cutscenes according to the script, everyone gets off work together, and then starts the next scene immediately. Multiple battle plots, ability confrontations, games, and character creation are all compressed into this small text in the first volume, resulting in a huge information density and an uncomfortable viewing experience. Oh, by the way, there are also some small traces of AI polishing. I hope I am too sensitive and saw it wrong. If you only focus on tomatoes, this can be considered a readable novel.

The author is great. I think the book is generally good. There are just a few small problems. The biggest one is that there is too little description of the male and female protagonists. It focuses too much on the background and the foreshadowing of the plot, that is, other people's experiences, etc. The portrayal and participation of the male and female protagonists are not strong. But I also hope that the author will continue to work hard. Don't cut it📖ah @Potato Ring

Damn it, haoshu, it's so delicious⊙▽⊙It's also like eating it, hehe, so good_(: D)∠)_woohoohaha(●°u°●) "Hmm, okay, Ouye, it's so cool, comfortable, fast, hehehehaha^ω^wuhuhaha(⊙ꇴ⊙) Pressure Ludori, it's so beautiful\(//∇//)\I want to watch it, woo woo woo (┯_┯) Why have you finished watching it? Update soon, ah ah ah, hehe, I must finish reading it (*/∇＼*)

This book is really good to read, it feels like watching an anime, and the character pictures added by the author are just right. The writing style is also very delicate. The only drawback is that there are too few updates and the time is not fixed. However, as long as the updates continue, I will continue to support it! ! !

Good looking. Love to see more.

Not bad, oyster wings oyster wings

Routine and interesting

It feels pretty good. Support it

This book is really good, isn't it?

It's delicious, and the cover is pretty good. Did you draw it yourself?

A very special book🤓👍🏻😋

Haokan It's a pity that no one has good works

Sure enough, I still like to read novels that are thoughtful and logical. Nowadays, reading books without logic makes me physically disgusted. This is a good book [Top post][Top post][Top post]

The subject matter of the article is good, and the author's writing style is also acceptable.

Although the narrative is a little tight, it's really okay

A rather special book with an innovative setting that is worth reading.

A very good book, I hope the author will continue to update it It will definitely happen, right?

Such a beautiful book, I must share it and recommend it

After searching for so long on Tomato, I finally found a book that is very similar to mine, but the updates are a bit slow [Please give me more updates] [Please give me more updates] [Please give me more updates]

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