The Mycelium Restricted Zone

The writing is good, and the sense of immersion in the early stage is okay, but the plot still needs to be polished, and some of the intrigues between people and the base can be appropriately reduced. The first is that the experience is not enough to write it, which can easily make readers tired and boring, and lacks excitement and tension. It is recommended to reduce the length; The second is the sameness of survival in the bookstore after the doomsday, which can be seen at a glance; the third is advice from social sciences. The greater the social competition and the greater the pressure of competition, the easier it is for humans to seek the opposite things in the virtual world - such as cooperation and tranquility. The above is a little bit of my experience after reading it. If it is useful, keep it. If it is not, just ignore it.