Traveling Through the HE World, I Feel Numb

The writing is okay, but it looks a little tired. For example, there is a prosperous country with a strong military force, and at the same time there are many internal chaos and external enemies. Whenever something big happens, those powerful forces have little effect, and then rely on a few students to save the world. I can understand why the author wrote in the first chapter why the world will be destroyed. The existence of those strong people is more of a formality. Maybe the later plot was accidentally added, and it is simply careless.

This is not a pure novel, and I don't eat meat. So far, I have seen that the protagonist in Chapter 161 has only eaten it twice. Both times, it was the same person, both at the beginning. The remaining princess, master, original protagonist, and dragon girl are all in the ambiguous stage. Furthermore, is the protagonist improving too slowly? In Chapter 161, there is no improvement in the realm at all. The fourth level and the seventh level are almost 200 cards. The protagonist, as the only son of a big family, has no protector at all, so such a big family arranges for a Fei to protect the protagonist? After all, Alice still has a sword master who can arrive in seconds if something happens, so the protagonist's master has to wait until the fight is almost over. Also, I didn't see what was going on with this layout. I only saw that the protagonist's intelligence system was quite powerful and the rest was useless. He boasted about how awesome the academy was and then was almost killed by several seventh-level sneak attacks. The tutor couldn't beat the enemy and had to rely on the protagonist and Alice to steam it. Two fourth-levels treated it as an eighth-level and beat the seventh-level to death. The protagonist lost an arm at a glance. He went to the Dragon Heritage Land and became a protector for a seventh-level knight. His strength was not good enough, and he had to rely on the protagonist's explosion to defeat the enemy. Generally speaking, I don't see the use of the protagonist's aristocratic status. I don't see how awesome the protagonist's family is as a duke family. I don't see the protagonist's overbearing character. I feel that the family is useless without the protagonist. The overall characterization is better for the protagonist Qingmei and the princess.

It's good to watch. I want to watch The Master and the Disciple.

Although there are obvious traces of human participation in relatively hidden AI articles, the inclusion of colons in columns 1, 2, 3, and 4, single quotation marks everywhere, and mysterious parallel sentences still reveal some of AI's flaws inadvertently. Putting aside these things, the writing is actually pretty good, and the various settings are not too weird, or include some abrupt and inappropriate elements, and the process can be said to be almost standard. It is indeed better than most Tomato authors, and there is no unsophisticated upgrade level. In theory, although there are some third-level and fifth-level ones at the beginning, they can basically be regarded as system-less and level-less. In actual fighting, it is not particularly important, because the protagonist has never been able to defeat the original heroine, and the original heroine's character is relatively unlovable, which may be a potential poison point.

The plot of this book is quite interesting, but the data is not good. Come on, Haji. What happened to the collapse of combat power? Those chapters of The Color Field are too outrageous, each one is more durable than the last [Start]

The plot is okay, but the combat power is terrible.

The subject matter is okay, but I don't know if the author had a fit at the beginning or something, but the pace is too fast. After the opening adventure and then grabbing the heroine's treasure and leaving, it would normally last for at least dozens of chapters. But now that one chapter is complete, those who don't know thought I was reading the outline. The coming-of-age banquet is also normal, and there is a deployment stage with undercurrents from all sides, which is omitted here.

The content is too simple and lacks conflict points. It's very bland, you can only see the main character like an invincible lawn mowing game.

Okay, it looks pretty Your fighting ability is a bit weak, can you write better [face covering]

Recommendation[Adoration][Admiration]

Very manga-like

It's rare to see someone who has written more than 500 chapters without any ratings.

I like this kind of western fantasy

Still pretty good

Come on, come on, come on, come on, come on

Well written.

The protagonist hides his strength from level 4 to level 3, and the opponent he fights is level 6 or 7. There are too many slots, and there is no need to hide his strength at all ()

No one commented?

Why are there so few people?

It starts with Thunder, and then the plot becomes a bit hard to understand.

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It's a good Western fantasy [laughs] but why are there so few people? Did Tomato deliberately not promote Western fantasy books? [What]