The Original Dragon from the High-Dimensional World

It's well written, but there is a small problem. The writing of both worlds is very good, but there is a strong sense of separation. The integration of the two themes is not high enough, so some people want to see more of the original world, and a little bit want to see more of the game world. One is Western fantasy and the other is martial arts. It is quite difficult to integrate them. Come on, author!

Generally speaking, what attracts me the most is the old lynx on the cover.

This setting of the author satisfies my desire to write a book that covers a variety of subjects. It is quite interesting. I think I can explore this aspect, which will make it look more interesting.

The writing is quite good, but there is too much about the world of martial arts [Blow a kiss]

Personally, I don't like the perspective of dragons and I feel that the world is very dangerous and there is no need to go out. Sometimes it's inexplicable.

The integration of the two identities in the early stage was not good. The story of the main world was pretty good. The switching between the main and deputy identities was not smooth, but overall it told a good story without any major bad points. Come on.

It's okay, maybe because the main world has been playing high-end games. The dragon leather sheath made by the protagonist seems a bit brittle, and the aging curse of the necromancer has not been reduced. According to the normal magic resistance of the dragon, curses and magic should be able to resist most effects. It seems to be full of food here, and then there is the evil god. The dragon skin of the protagonist seems to be a completely defenseless computer in front of him. He came in as soon as he wanted, and directly found hundreds of private files and took a look, and then his eyes were burned by the indescribable contamination.

Author update soon The author's soul returns... 𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌 The soul returns... Driving the long whip and setting up the six bridles... 𓀌𓀎𓀠𓀤𓀫 The soul is back... Crossing the mountain and singing... The soul is back... The soul is back... 𓀋𓀌𓀎𓀙𓀠 The soul returns... Sings high and triumphant... We share the same robe and enjoy the glory... 𓀋𓀠𓀤𓀥𓀫 The soul is back... The soul is back... 𓀋𓀌𓀎𓀙𓀠𓀤𓀥𓀫𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌𓀀𓀁𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋

The writing is okay, but the opening martial arts simulator is [what]

The protagonist has a good personality, he is not a womanizer but has a chivalrous demeanor [Thoughts] [Like]

It's still okay. After reading it, there's nothing particularly bad about it, and there are no obvious shortcomings. It can be said to be a good book [Like]

Five-star anti-sink, Chapter 90: Poisonous, the protagonist was beaten by the adventure team for no apparent reason. Not only was he not killed by them, he was beaten away, and the man with the sword also gained the protagonist's power.

Liangcao is a little surprising and readable. However, I feel that the author's game has an average reality balance and has dug too many pits in the main world background, which can easily cause reading difficulties. If the author likes it, I will make suggestions. In the current situation, the dungeon can be focused on being short-lived and fun, and the main world can be used to explore and experience novel and imaginative flow, so as to balance the two. It is estimated to be a hit

The game is very, very good-looking, but the reality is a little flat.

The progress of the martial arts world is a bit slow. Doesn't the author want to go through all the plots of Yijian?

It was pretty good, but it ended too quickly

The plot of this game. . . . The hero is determined to pass on! !

I can only say that some movies with high ratings are not necessarily good-looking. You can only find what you like to watch. This one is my favorite, five stars out of five [Chigua]

Just read it as a martial arts novel, it's quite interesting.

Very nice Chives and eggs will arrive at home. I feel like seeing you. I sent you the Christian Grace Basic Course on Jiandemen's phone number.

Weird, but okay.

Well written, I recommend it to everyone

The first martial arts game can be given five stars Reality gives it three and a half stars. Second game for Samsung

The game world is beautifully written, and the various tasks of defeating monsters and upgrading are really like a game, but there has never been much content in reality.

The content is rich, not watery, good-looking, and the plot is okay

Is this martial arts or fantasy?

Well, it's really amazing.

A very interesting book with great potential. I look forward to its follow-up development.

It's okay, just a little bit less

Very nice, keep up the good work!