Game of Thrones: Daenerys? Margaery? I Want Them Both!

This is a masterpiece that I highly recommend First, it is very refreshing and not frustrating. Second, the characterization is very good. A dying man relies on his own foresight step by step to reduce dimensionality and strike, without embarrassing our army of time travelers. Third, the plot is tight and there is no feeling of wanting to jump while watching it. There is a sense of anticipation in every chapter! Not boring at all. Fourth, in addition to TO level books, they have been ranked T1. Finally, enter with confidence and taste slowly. —Love you tasters.

A great Game of Thrones fanfic, the more I watch it, the more I fall in love with it I'm a bit isolated, but I'm really not picky about food.

It's very good. Although the word count is not that many yet, I can already see the author's plot design ability. I hope I can continue to work hard after going to King's Landing. I hope it is at least more exciting than the original play. After all, the plotting in the original play is too childish [Thoughts] In addition, I need to give some suggestions to the author. One needs to increase the interaction between the protagonist and the supporting characters. The protagonist can be a cold person, but it is difficult to become a magic stick with a cold person. You must either talk about the gods, or use words to assist prophecies to build the majesty of the so-called "god". You are so cold and rational, people think you may be the apostle of the cold god 🤭 And the feeling of affection between Arya and Lynn suddenly became so deep, and for each other. Of course I understand the possibility of it happening, but what I mean is that the existing description of the interaction between Linn and Arya is not enough to support readers to naturally understand the emergence of love between the two, so it is slightly abrupt and can be integrated into the plot with more description. Although the two authors are writing a fanfic, they can go beyond the characters in the original show in character creation, especially on the premise of choosing Arya and Denise as the heroines. The reason why I feel so strongly is that neither of the two women is very beautiful, one is androgynous, and the other is a glutton with a big mouth. Therefore, on the basis of maintaining the basic framework of the characters, it is possible to modify the secondary characters through description [laughter] Of the three, I think the current plot conceived by the author is already surprising, but there is still room for improvement 😳 because it seems that the updated plot is a bit bland and lacks twists and foreshadowing. Take the recent Dragon Egg plot as an example. When reading this paragraph, I was attracted by the trouble-seeking Alliser in The Great Wall, and I thought he was going to cause some trouble. The plot of the Eye Map is relatively simple, so the reader's attention that the Dragon Egg deserves is distracted from the plot. This is not just a dream. This section of obtaining the dragon egg can completely bear the climax of a desperate Great Wall episode. From the beginning, the migration of savages, the resurrection of corpses, Alliser's provocation, and various fringe plots can be completely original to point to the eyes on the map, and the protagonist draws the Peeling away the cocoon, figuring out the pursuit and motivations of all parties, and finally obtaining the dragon egg to unveil the veil, does not affect the original motivation of warning the Night Watch at all, and the sense of urgency brought by the entire suspense process can naturally feed back the surprise after the veil is unveiled. In fact, it can also add the power of the Green Seer. I believe that such a plot full of rational thinking, plot twists and fantasy elements will be more suitable for Game of Thrones fans.

I just read a little bit, but it doesn't feel like other fanfics that only care about showing off to others and want to tell the world that they are time travellers. This book is very logical. It doesn't say anything that shouldn't be said, and it doesn't deliberately show off its views on the future direction of other characters. It has a very Game of Thrones feel to it, and it is not like a drama that is seen in many other fan fiction Internet memes. The protagonist is concise and concise, and has a language system that belongs to Game of Thrones. The author's writing style in the fan fiction is pretty good, and the overall sense of immersion is good.

The character creation and plot are quite in line with the original work. It has the feel of a Western novel and is very flavorful. It makes me feel as if I am immersed in the scene. The disadvantage is that the pace is too slow, the emotional drama has almost no progress, and the nine-year-old Erya has nothing to write about. I hope it can be written for a long time and not to be too similar. It makes me eat hard when I see the male protagonist.

First of all, it is undeniable that it feels very refreshing! If it's just for the fun of it, it's worth reading! It also added some very novel settings, but the shortcomings are also obvious: (1) It's fun to have girls, but it's too much for me [laughs awkwardly], which leads to too few roles for the female characters I like; (2) The plug-ins are so unreasonable that they can sweep Westeros very early. As a result, the protagonist just plays the Game of Thrones very reluctantly, which makes it feel very awkward. But overall, the reading experience is good

It's a rare Game of Thrones fan novel on Tomato that I have the motivation and patience to follow every day. The author's writing style has released amazing control and just the right story development in this novel. The story progresses step by step. The male protagonist calmly and confidently fights wits with all parties in the world of Game of Thrones. Power, breaks out of the routine of a male protagonist who is so powerful that he has to do everything in his power, and also writes a new idea of a multi-female harem, which will not make you feel rushed. Compared with the author's other books, the quality is generally confusing. I sincerely hope that this Game of Thrones will be better and better with more snacks, come on!

Good review! No need to say more. If you fall in love with something, this is the feeling in the West. And we didn't use the titles of our seventh aunt and eighth aunt. At least not in the lines. Many American comic book fans or Western fantasy novels like to write about hybrid culture. You can even see NPCs calling the protagonist "big brother" in Marvel fan fiction. There are also things like "uncle, aunt, uncle...". Also, the descriptions of Wanda Black Widow are all written in a Chinese classical style that is shy and smelly, like arranging flowers and jade. In addition, their names are simply impossible to look at. This author's book does not have these flaws.

First of all, I have not read the original text of Game of Thrones. Based on what I have read during this period, I can say that it is very good. The writing and plot are both good. The only shortcomings are that the handling of some scenes and plots is not as good as expected, which makes it a bit jerky, and as a harem novel, it still faces some readers' dislike. Overall, it is good.

Great, this is by far the best A Song of Ice and Fire fanfic I've ever read. However, the characters in Game of Thrones, such as Arya, Susan, and Margaery, don't fit my taste. I still like the other fanart from the original work. They are really beautiful.