Pirates: Beat up Ace at the Beginning

Just don't lick the Monchi family. Also, kill the deserters and Momonosuke.

This pig's foot is still good and decisive, but Garp's performance is a bit poor. Garp cares about his grandson, but he cares more about the sailors. This is his belief in staying in the navy. This belief will not be broken by Ace, just like Roger invited Garp in the Valley of the Gods.

It's pretty good among Pirates fanfics. 1. His identity as a time traveler is too prophetic but he tries to integrate into the world view. 2. The three views are normally not soft-hearted or hesitant because of the protagonist or camp issues. 3. Absolute strength to kill Ace and threaten Garp not to let Luffy fly the pirate flag! This is the beginning of another path of salvation in fan fiction. Unfortunately, it's a bit short. Come on [note]

There is no denying that this is a very good fanfic with a very special angle. Joining the Navy Hawks with Sanji, Kuina, and Zoro as allies, and the subsequent conflict with the Doves, the key is knowing that Ace is going to sea, and killing Ace directly in front of Garp, and not turning a blind eye just because Garp brought him into the navy, which is an important personal position. The writing style is also acceptable, and the IQ is online [love] [love] [love] In the end, it was a bit forced to downgrade the intelligence, and the writing of Crane, Warring States, Long and other people who are famous for their intelligence was too imbecile.

"A thief is a thief, and a dog can't change its habit of eating shit." Support

Very well written. First of all, this is an interesting perspective on pirates like Luffy, I haven't seen it before. In addition, even if the combat power is not suppressed, the combat power will not collapse. It didn't follow the original plot routine. In some important plot tasks, people are really killed when they are killed. Come on!

It's just so beautiful. All pirates must die. As long as they are pirates, they will all die. [Smile][smile][smile]

Okay, let me tell you my feelings after reading it from Chapter 1 to Chapter 451. I want to read this book. You can read my review. Take a look. Do you want to read this book? First, the protagonist of this book is native-born. Donghai people are not time travellers. None of that foresight. He ate the thunder fruit. Some aspects of things and processing. The author has also given some explanations, and some developments in the novel will not affect the follow-up. If you read this novel as a Luffy fan, don't read it. Because people like Luffy and Ace are going to die, and the protagonist is the Marine. If you understand everything, you can read the introduction. I quite like this book. So I gave it high stars. The shortcoming is that the author sometimes writes wrong words and forgets what he wrote before. If you remind him, he will reply saying that he has changed it, but he has not changed it when you look at it. It took the author so long to update, so he probably forgot to change it. I don't know why, but it has little impact and does not affect reading. The protagonist himself is also very powerful. This is a cool type of novel, but it doesn't mean that it can be done in seconds as soon as it starts. A familiar character from One Piece. Personal character and operations. There are a lot of accuracy, and there are also some mixed by some authors. If you like Luffy and you like to read the kind of novels that follow the protagonist Luffy, I don't recommend you to read this. Just like red hair. Okay, don't talk about the long part, don't talk about the short part, that's it, but I don't know why the rating is so low. It should be because many people who watch One Piece like Luffy here.

It's really good and simple. I saw a lot of people discussing combat power. The collapse of combat power is very serious now. Since it's a fan, I think I still respect the author's creation (as long as it's not outrageous). I hope the author will update more.

The protagonist acts very decisively and makes decisions when necessary. Based on the content I have seen so far, it is considered to be at the level of Xiaojin to Xiaohong in Tomato. It may be popular, but I am not sure yet. I will wait and see. This is the Great Unclean One, Shennong💩, he also let me eat today

After seeing the supplementary chapter of Chapter 236, I feel that there is no problem so far. What the author said is also correct. Don't think that Ares is not good or inferior to them just because the veteran heroes in anime or comics are strong. If you can't beat them, don't you know how to run away? When you play games, you also know how to pull the opponent in lane. Don't like it. It's annoying. If you think my comments are interesting, just read them. Don't like it. It's annoying.

After reading it, I feel that the author can write something about daily life. I personally think it is quite interesting. I hope the author can write more and support it.

It's a very good pirate novel. The protagonist hates evil and three characters who are very fond of the original work join the navy. The four brothers and sisters destroy the world government step by step. It's very interesting. The score should be 8.5-9 Points to be reasonable, 6.7 Points is a bit low.

Not bad, good story development line

The absolute strength killed Ace and he escaped without any accident. This is worth 5⭐️

Hahaha, it makes me laugh. Most of the people with low ratings in this book regard Luffy as their father. They can't bear to see their father being slandered. They are all just looking for trouble [laughs]

I'll give you 5 stars just because you killed Ace quickly.

It's good to watch, but after watching it, you won't be able to stand the One Piece fanfic anymore.

It's a rare good book to read, especially when I saw the part about Ace's adventure story. This book is really good.

This is a very good pirate novel in Tomato, no worse than the starting point. I don't know why my grades are not good

I feel very good

It's hard to tell whether the original character is the protagonist of this book, or whether the three Luffy brothers are the protagonists.

Luffy, your boy's partner belongs to me, quack, quack, quack.

Sanji's dream has not been forgotten. Now when I read the manga, I feel like I no longer care about it. I like it very much but I haven't forgotten the original intention.

There are a lot of bad reviews, but I think the writing is very good, Jie hahahahaha

It's great. In the last chapter, I almost killed Ace and was saved by Garp. In the next chapter, I killed Ace with Garp on his back.

It was so exciting to write, even Ace Sabo, Luffy, and Cap were dead [laughing]

So far everything is good, there are no big loopholes, and there is no plot that is too far-fetched.

The standard is above average, very good.

It was a pleasure to watch, and I immediately took action when I had the chance. Compared with other films, there were always surprises here and there, and I just waited until the end to kill the protagonist and his gang.