Zhutian: Starting from Huashan Laoliu

Overall, this book is pretty good. There is one heroine in each world, and she loves her deeply in each world. As a result, when she goes to another world, she immediately forgets all about the previous one.

This is one of the best stories about time travel to Swordsman. The protagonist does not have any evil intentions. Although he is decisive in killing, traditional Chinese loyalty, filial piety and benevolence are extremely rare. I hope the author will make more exciting follow-ups.

So far, the writing is quite good, and it is fully worthy of five-star praise. As long as it doesn't collapse later, this book will be a rare masterpiece in the time-travel martial arts style.

The novel is very good, and the characters are quite distinct. In the early stage, he acted cautiously and was high-profile. Later, he became low-key and acted earth-shatteringly. He is kind-hearted and always leaves room for things to happen. But as long as you've read Volume 1, it's basically the same routine after that. The protagonist has an astonishing understanding, studies martial arts carefully, and finally summarizes it into his own technique. And then stay with the heroine for life. When it comes to heroines, the protagonists tend to be pampering, pampering, and almost like dog lickers. For the original plots of various worlds, the protagonist does not take the initiative to change. It is often due to his own influence that the plot has undergone great changes, which is considered natural.

I have read four volumes, and the writing is pretty good. It is not the kind of eunuch who only pursues realm. There is a female protagonist, although there are not many emotional scenes, but I feel that the writing is very good. The world of Zhetian and the world of prehistoric times are reversed, right? The world of Zhetian should be in front and the prehistoric world behind.

I finished reading it. I originally thought it would end in the prehistoric era, but I didn't expect it to be offline [laughing]. I have an excellent talent. Except for the first few times of ascension, I simply wrote it to death and then left the soul to travel. Finally, it ended perfectly. It was okay. In fact, I could have continued writing, but the ending was also okay.

Promise to me to update every day from today on, and to be a ruthless coding machine [smile][smile][smile]

It's very well written. It's written by Lu Dayou.

The writing is very good and the writing ideas are good, but don't read it completely as the original work, otherwise it will feel awkward. Zhe Tian also created a clone, three independent people, and the good guy became schizophrenic.

The plot is smooth. The author's cultural background is very high, higher than three floors [like][like][like][like]

A good book, excellent product, in line with the original characters and martial arts settings

He studied internal skills hard, went to Qingcheng and defeated Yu Canghai, killed the Taibao and injured Zuo Lengchan, and defeated Fang Zheng in Shaolin with a sword.

It feels okay, but some scene transitions are a bit stiff.

It's okay, better than most Xiaoao fanfics.

We need to dig out the roots of Shaolin and spread the secrets of Shaolin so that everyone can have Shaolin martial arts. The reason why Shaolin is so famous is because there are so many martial arts secrets. If Shaolin's secrets become too common, haha...

Good, good, hard work

Good writing, traditional martial arts novels

Not bad, very good-looking, excellent

Wuxia still sounds pretty good.

Although I don't know why this time traveler has experienced such harm, but if you can hear this, I'll give you five stars!

I found a problem and read the comments. Most of them were complaining about this or that, but I felt that it was okay after reading it.

Well written, come on, come on, come on

It's very good so far and I hope it will continue to develop.

The rest of the settings are pretty good, except for the fact that the protagonist is afraid of Xu Weixiong. The protagonist is hundreds of years old. Has he ever been afraid of a little girl?

Interesting. Well written. Keep up the good work.

He has a peaceful mind and does not express his animal nature by writing books. He is polite, restrains himself and returns to etiquette. A good job should be rewarded.

The writing in the fanfic is pretty good, keep up the good work!

Very nice, I like it

When you see benefit, you can give it up, when you see function, you can retreat, and when you have desires, you will not be distracted. Only with this kind of mind can we go further on the path of spiritual practice and live longer. The author has an upright mind and knows how to practice!

Clear and organized, very good!