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Yes, a normal person can give five stars to a single female protagonist. Tomato City has too many unbelievable female protagonists. Why should Bai Yueguang be used as a substitute? What are you doing, brother? It makes me feel sick to my stomach. This sweet little article looks good.

First of all, this subject matter is still very new. It is not the kind of plot where Bai Yueguang goes abroad to find a substitute and throws the male protagonist away after returning. The female protagonist is also awake in the world. The plot is sweet from the beginning, and every couple in it is there from beginning to end. There is no third party in the relationship. Overall, it is good to watch.

It must be five stars. It is a sweet story that is constantly refreshing. It expresses the sweet life of a pair of lovers in a recall-like way, but it is a bit short. The recall-like method can be used several times. For example, the extra chapters of the male and female protagonists can be put into the main text in stages. If it is more detailed, the number of words will be more. Another point is that the heroine's sister should live next door and eat together, but sleep under the same roof, especially when they enter the master bedroom in the morning. It is a little bit like that, and it is easy to arouse the comments of social scoundrels, but overall it is good and recommended.

Look at the ratings first, and then read the relevant chapters. Maybe it's because Tomatoes were poisoned too much, or maybe the author changed the book. The part where the heroine is drunk is pretty good. Maybe most readers are deeply poisoned by substitute literature, and suddenly there is a book that does the opposite. The writing is pretty good, so expectations are raised. Regarding "drinking", my country's wine culture has a long history. From the older generation to the new generation, there are many people who like to drink wine for joy, but they all have one thing in common, that is "purpose", from business to relationship, and even some indescribable behaviors. It can be realized or even beautified with the help of "wine", but with the improvement of living standards and the increasing number of new entertainment methods, the "wine game" that can make people indulge or even lose their mind has gradually become a criticized existence. It is no wonder that there are more objections in the comment areas of those chapters There is also the author talking about the plot content. My personal understanding is that stand-in literature is a gimmick. It actually revolves around the relationship between the male and female protagonists, which radiates to the life experiences of the two people. The main protagonist is just the thread of the narrative logic of the whole book. He can exit after the male and female protagonists are established. It is not suitable too early and cannot be continued throughout the whole book. Of course, many readers like to watch plots where the main protagonist is constantly frustrated, but they are all the same, and it is boring to read too much. Come on~

Compared with many books of the same type, this book is already very good. To be honest, this is the chaff that suddenly appeared after there were too many Akaishi (I was driven crazy by the short articles at Station B). It has a refreshing feeling (especially the change of Gu, this kind of arrangement is rare), and there is a human touch. I didn't read the variety show (I took advice), but I read the Fu family. This part takes up a lot of space and feels a bit abrupt. Moreover, this part of the plot is a bit simple and has no sense of twists and turns. Generally speaking, if you want to read a lot of short stories, you can read it. If there are parts in the middle that you don't like, you can skip directly. It will not have much impact on the overall plot. The author's first book, to be honest, is already a good one in this genre, and the author often appears in the comment section, which is good. Come on, author

Read, available for viewing. Let's talk about the advantages first. The emotional handling in many casual places is quite delicate, which I didn't expect before I came in. Just like "Lin Chongyue and Su Hongyuan touched their noses at the same time. Their faces belonged to men, with a hint of embarrassed pride." These places are quite surprising. The story arc is not as complex as reality, nor is it childish. It can only be said that the focus is on development rather than the specific details of the career line. Probably because the author doesn't understand. But thanks to this, the whole book will not seem cumbersome, and it will be light to read. The author said that the character design of Fu Yuran was not good. But in fact, the arrangement and look and feel of the characters are quite good when I read it. Maybe the author's words are a little more intimate? The author is probably a very good person too. Then the disadvantages. It feels like the author made a lot of adjustments to the direction while writing. Or maybe I didn't get the feeling right at first. As I read it, I felt that the purpose of the writing before and after was different. Fortunately, the character design and behavioral logic were not affected. The biggest shortcoming is actually not in the book itself. Personally, I think it's "marketing". In the first chapter, Shi Laozuo also said that those who have been read by Ni Tian Nu can come and wash their eyes. It means that part of the audience you attract is poisoned by shit. These people, including me, have "PTSD" and simply don't want to see the male villain still jumping around after 20 chapters. In the first half of the book, Gu Du was acting as a plot machine to push forward the plot. It is not a wise choice to put this kind of audience together with this kind of plot. If you eat too much feces, you not only need to be clean, clean, and have normal outlook on life, but you also don't want to smell the "poisonous smell" that can trigger bad memories. (Not criticizing the author, but evaluating the observed phenomenon) To sum up, it is a good book for people who can accept the dance of bamboo horses and clowns. The volume of about 500,000 words is very comfortable to read. For those who don't accept the clown being embarrassing at all, you don't have to watch it. But this book is not green, the male and female protagonists are both pure, and Brother Moonlight is still a fake Moonlight.

The male and female protagonists have pure love and are super sweet. They both protect and understand each other. I'm so envious of this kind of love!

Yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, yes.

The writing of this book is okay, but I feel that if Gu Yanshen's line is finished, the plot will easily become dull. Of course, it still depends on how the author writes it. Let's talk about the point with the most negative reviews. Youdao means no party is complete without alcohol. Alcohol is a common drink at parties. Drinking in moderation can add to the atmosphere. But after all, this is outside, not at home. No one knows whether there will be an accident, and there is no protection from her boyfriend. Even if there are no boys at your place and it is all girls' party, no one knows whether there will be any problems. Therefore, if you are aware of precautions, you will definitely not get drunk. I think the stand-in literature of female channels is an emotional tragedy in itself, but I think the author's setting is reasonable. And the author's writing is really sweet, so come on, author. How to control the subsequent plot depends on how the author writes it, right? Anyway, cheers, author Why is it so short? Is it about to be finished before the million words are reached? I also want to fatten up some, it looks cool.

Chapter 15 alone feels like it's worthy of a five for me🌟, especially the ending of chapter 15, which I feel is well written, and the villain's parents are also normal people with correct views, and the villain is not particularly unnatural, which makes people watch it.

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If you want a car, you want a car, if you want scum, you want scum, if you want sugar, you will have sweetness! Comedy, picture fun! But it's a bit long~ Come on! Looking forward to better works!

Very interesting. If you watch a lot of female videos and male videos, you will like this kind of content.

6. The anti-routine ones are actually pretty good. I'm really tired of watching the routines, but it's fun to watch the anti-routine ones.

Currently, it is a novel with a relatively positive outlook on Tomato and is worth reading.

Very good, but I personally like to fight and kill, which is a bit strange to me. I feel that the male and female protagonists treat Gu Yansheng like a dog. I still like Gao Wu and can kill him directly, but Gao Wu is not as sweet as this book.

In fact, the overall story is pretty good. Although it is sometimes a bit toxic, maybe because I have a high resistance to poison, the overall story is not bad. It is not a pure female channel. At least I saw normal people, which is quite normal for me. The main reason is the speed. Is it worthy of being a female author? This car speed is awesome. I will give it full stars if I can. At least it is fun for me to watch, hahahaha.

Must give 5 points of praise, it is easy to drive. The plot is interesting. This is the first time I read a novel that slaps Bai Yueguang in the face. [Laughing and crying]

The author can not rush to finish the book, but can start a new book. This one is about the daily life after giving birth. When I think of it, I can write a few chapters if I have an idea. I like this kind of sweet daily writing. [Laughing]

Come on, big brother who writes sweet Liu Beiwen

Interesting, so interesting. Author, you are such a genius.

Needless to say, this is a book by the author. It has toxic points and shortcomings, but it also has advantages. The emotional description is delicate, but the description of the villain is unsatisfactory except for Gu. However, it is really amazing that the first book can be written like this. Call me the author when it comes out as a physical book.

Not bad😊, this is treating the vicious Bai Yueguang as a kid [cover face][cover face][cover face]

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It's really sweet, there's nothing wrong with that.

It's been a long time since I've read such a good article on Tomato

Come on, big brother who writes royal texts

In my eyes, you are a masterpiece. The protagonist is so normal, but the villain is so rare that everyone recognizes it.

I really like this kind of writing and look forward to the author's next masterpiece.

It's beautiful. It's the most amazing work I've ever seen. [Like]