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Maybe I read some fast-paced immortal cultivation articles. I think the pace of cultivation and upgrading in this article is quite slow. After more than 100 chapters, the protagonist is still building the foundation. The progress of the strategy sister is less than 40%. I don't know when the rewards given by the system will be completed. Because the Dragon Bone and the Xuan-level high-grade skill "Star Concentration Technique" are incomplete. The first chapters are quite good, but there are many long paragraphs in the later chapters, which looks very tiring. Moreover, I feel that Ji Qingge does not have a particularly big protagonist halo after Xiaobi. Before, Xiao Bi relied on her own to win against opponents who were stronger than her, but now she feels a little frustrated. She can't challenge the stronger opponent, and her senior sister even blocked the knife for her. But overall, it's pretty good. There are quite a lot of deputy CPs. There is also a crematorium for chasing wives. Although I don't know who is chasing whom, but I look forward to the follow-up [Sending Hearts]

It is a very good novel. Among the books I have read, it is considered to be a medium to high level. The plot content is vivid and interesting, but it may be boring in the early stage, but the author starts to work hard in the later stage [top post]

The writing is very detailed, but the pace is good. The plot and emotions are slowly advancing, but I want to say whether the realm of the characters in it can be accurately stated. The protagonist will be at the peak of foundation building, and then back to the middle stage of foundation building, and then become the peak again. The same is true for other characters. I don't know. When did I break through, my level improved inexplicably without mentioning it, but this is very important for the sense of immersion. After all, strength is an important part of writing the plot. It looks so big that you think you have gone crazy or skipped something, which greatly affects the viewing experience!

Cookies, slow pace, detailed scene descriptions, suitable for those who are obsessed with details [face covering] Well done to the author, I'm used to five stars. [Pause face] The writing is too detailed, the environment, the characters. For the first time, I feel that the novel doesn't have to be so detailed. It's quite good. The pace is so slow that I don't want to say it. Regardless of the large number of words, I don't actually write much in one chapter. But I have to say, apart from the too detailed description and the slow pace, it's pretty good. I persisted until chapter 190, and then quickly turned page by page to the ending. The above are all personal opinions, and I don't mean to criticize them. If you don't like them, don't criticize them.

Very nice! I love it, it's so pretty, I can't stop!

Very beautiful, I like it very much😍

The author's comments in parentheses are cute.

It's so good. I haven't read any other books in the past two days.

The relationship is well written, the plot is not sluggish, and the author is very diligent in updating. I discovered a little treasure book. The love and death between Ji Qingge and Su Wanci is very enjoyable to watch. I hope there will be more sugar.

It's good to watch, even though the main character's performance as Xiao Xixi, talkative and sweet, I don't think it's annoying [laughter]

Nice! ! ! Ahhhhh [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

Well written, step by step and emotionally delicate

It's nice to add a new book