Requiem of Nine Swords: from Orphan to God Chaser

I'm here. The author is very powerful. He has almost written half a million words in one go since November last year. This is his strongest ability, especially in Tomato. As a Western fantasy novel about reincarnation in another world, the fact that you can write so many words shows that you have a very good imagination. The main plot is very clear and well connected. Being aware of the framework can help you go further. The above proves that he is talented in writing novels. However, what more people often value and can see intuitively is the writing style. From the beginning of the prologue, many details will make people feel uncomfortable. For example, the main character in a paragraph is addressed by his or her name; the use of adjectives is inaccurate; the logic of the paragraph is not read smoothly, etc. There are many small problems at the beginning of the book, which add up to a big problem, making it very difficult for readers to digest. Naturally, they will give up after only three chapters. Of course, everyone has come from a novice, writing skills can be cultivated and accumulated, just improve, come on [pay attention]. There's a bit of a contrast between the author's plot and writing style [Thinking]. Writing style is not everything, but it can determine the lower limit of most books. The author obviously writes more smoothly later on. The above person feels that the future is promising and I will have the opportunity to practice writing again, but Western fantasy is still a bit difficult to write. For the next theme, you can try a short story first, a complete story of about 200 chapters. If you polish and practice it step by step, you will definitely be able to write a work that you are satisfied with [Grief]. The author reads the message↓

No one reads this book? Support it. There seems to be no problem so far. Why does the transformation look similar to Lucia? Could it be that the protagonist is the hero? Then at the end, I killed Lucia who was pretending to be a hero, and she was also a reborn person (just a wild guess). Or have some kind of relationship. Do those swords have bodies that can transform into other forms?