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The writing is so good, and everyone's character is very personal. I never criticized Deha, because Draco is proud at heart, and he will not fall in love with such a savior. This book shows the proud and awkward character of the original Draco very well, and the protagonist, as a Slytherin, will not have deep feelings with the lions, which is very logical. Draco's character is not shown much in the original work, but he has a more complex heart than many people. I have read the original work three times. This is the most restored character I have ever seen on Tomato. The author is really great. It is not a heartthrob and cool article that many impatient people like to read, but it rarely makes me feel the logic online. Every time I watch it, I have to sigh that their characters are a perfect match. The author who came up with this couple is a genius. Please keep up the good work. By the way, I hope Li is in the right position. As part of Draco's guide, he tolerates and understands everything about De. It would be great [Adoration]

It's a very good article. The characterization is very delicate. You can completely see the author's care. Compared with the current fans of the same period, the writing style is really much better. I prefer delicate characterization, but most of today's novels pursue the refreshing feeling of character setting. Instead, they don't pay much attention to the details of characterization. The emotional changes between characters also seem to be very stereotyped. They are done for the sake of sweetness and plot. It is rare to see an author who describes the characters in such a delicate way. Also, I feel that it is more in line with the original work. I have read almost all the hp fandoms on Tomato without cp and with two male protagonists, but most of them are really attractive in setting, but the respect for the original work is not good. There are many who are black for the sake of black and white for the sake of whitewashing. But I feel that this article is okay, and for the plot in the original work, the author actually I didn't describe it very deliberately. The focus was actually on the confrontation between the protagonist and Draco. I felt very comfortable reading it. It didn't describe other messy things. The plot was very concentrated. The only accurate goal was to describe the various changes between the protagonist and Draco. I felt so comfortable reading it. There are really too few articles with such clear and focused goals. Please keep it up, the author. I really love it. Then I digress, the protagonist should be suffering, I will feel uncomfortable if I stand on the opposite side, and then I read it and now feel that the cp image of the protagonist and Draco is probably Calm, restrained and knowledgeable, the tsundere is attacked by a tsundere with a hairy mouth and a bad mouth God, I must not stand in the wrong place [crying]

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I think it's great to see that both the main characters have great personalities! I think this starting atmosphere is the most authentic! No successor will fall in love with someone for no reason so! This kind of awkwardness is really great! I think the author grasped it very well!

It's really good-looking. If there is a CP, I hope Li is on the right [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] [I'm almost crying] Come on, author

I haven't read too much, but first I'd like to make a lightning protection statement It's about the conflict between the Lion Court and the Snake Court and the discrimination. The first is that the protagonist once walked through the main line of monsters, and Sri Lankan teacher questioned the protagonist. 1. Professor Si is a professor. Although he may be partial to his own college and dislike the recklessness of the people in the Lion College, he will not engage in direct confrontation. Not to mention that he was friends with Lily when he was a boy. If he really did this, why would he have anything to do with Deng Duoduo and Professor Maomao? You can't just hate the word "Gryffindor" and start a confrontation, right? I personally think that the Sect will definitely spray venom, but mainly because the protagonist does not care about his own safety, not because he went to help Potter, so he must say that he does not stand for the Snake Yard. 2. I don't know whether the author wants to do the book version or the movie version of Xiaolong first. Judging from his character, it is the movie version. The movie version of Xiaolong feels like he just hates the fact that Potter is more famous than him. The same goes for Xiaoduo and others. It doesn't feel like the protagonist was questioned like this just for doing a favor. Besides, when the protagonist and Xiaoduo are not that familiar, I don't think they care about what the protagonist does. That's all for the time being, just my personal opinions, to provide reference for other readers [Sending my heart]

Very good article, the internal atmosphere of Slytherin is so internal.

I'm a little curious about the subsequent change. Will people really have a good impression of someone who always belittles or mocks them at the beginning? Although it is wrapped in a layer of tsundere 🤔 It is rare to write about the main scene of Snake Yard without beautifying it. The bullying style of targeting makes people really angry [face covering] makes people feel helpless that they can't be slapped.

Help, I'm so frustrated watching this. . . I don't mean to say that the capitalization is bad, it's just because the writing is so good, the descriptions of Slytherin and Draco are so close to the original that it makes people feel annoyed, and the protagonist's character is well described! ! In fact, I want to know whether the protagonist knows the plot. It feels like sometimes he knows, and sometimes he likes to be nosy.

The plot is quite interesting. The characters in it are similar to the original work. The content of the novel mainly revolves around the male protagonist and Draco. It does not describe too many superfluous things in the original work. The male protagonist was a bit nosy in the first grade, but he grew up and became more and more interesting. The chemistry between Draco and the male protagonist was a bit over the top in the later period. I am very curious about the direction of the plot. The author's writing is good. I hope he will stick to writing it. The two of them will lock up in the ending.

It's so beautiful. I want to read it again. It's a potential stock worth investing in. For the left and right positions, I prefer Eros Malfoy

I've finished reading it. The protagonist Zai is very intelligent and exploratory in his studies. The author's description of this aspect is also very good. I think the flaw is that the protagonist's impulsiveness in the first grade and his sometimes psychological description make me feel that it is inconsistent with his role as a time traveler who understands the plot and wants to live a stable life. But overall, it is a very novel and good HP novel. Come on, author, it's still good to see the end.

The author writes very well, the emotional line is very delicate, there is nothing very embarrassing, the flow is smooth, the protagonist's character is well shaped, the protagonist will accompany Draco when he faces the choice, their emotional line is well shaped, not sudden at all, the relationship was determined after a series of things, the author's writing style is getting better and better, it is very comfortable to read

The first-person narrative in the first few chapters put me off a bit, but the author's writing style was very good, and there were some comments in the book review section that made me keep reading. After about a dozen pictures, it will be switched to third person.

I give this book four stars for his writing style, which is very consistent with the character of the original work. The protagonist himself is like a contradictory person [like] Some people say that he does not meet the character he said he wants to be a bystander and wants to get involved in everything, but in fact we are reading the world in the book, and the protagonist is watching real people (but if you really like to read cool stories, please skip it and don't click in)

What exquisite writing. Show me how high you are, hey hey hey, it feels so good (ºº )

So pretty my mom

I'll jump right in. There's nothing OOC about the protagonist's character, and the plot doesn't deviate. However, it feels a little vague in a few places. It's not vague, and I can't tell. But this is completely negligible. It's so difficult to find someone with good HP nowadays.

The writing is very good. It doesn't write too much about the contact between the male protagonist and the three little ones. A lot of the writing is about taking adventures with them or helping them. The protagonist insists on what he believes in. What surprised me the most is Draco. When he no longer pays attention to Harry Potter and the others, he is really outstanding. This is a Malfoy, isn't he? It just feels like the line is really slow. This is why it's scary to like straight men, hahahaha😂

Oh my gosh, the description is so delicate and the plot is so touching. I cried 6 times in one day. Maybe it's because I have a low sense of tears, but this score is really low. The author writes so well, so of course he deserves a better score [Adoration][Adoration][Adoration][Adoration]

It's super good-looking. The characters are a bit OOC in the early stage, but the writing gets better and better later on. You can see the growth of the male protagonist and Draco, and the most important thing is that Draco is not beautified in this book, but fits the original work. The bad part of Master Malfoy's temperament is also a part of him and has not been beautified. Draco is on the left

Very well written. ! It fully expresses his awkwardness... Very good! It accurately describes the complexity and entanglement of their feelings... All in all, I think this book is really good! You can see, you can see! Ahhhh! Good looking! Watching this in the middle of the night made me sleepy and woke me up! ! Cool!

It looks good. The protagonist is on the right. Don't stand on the wrong side, my dears.

The characters are more vivid. . But there is a bug. . One moment the protagonist knows the plot, and the other moment he doesn't [face covering]

It's great. I stayed up all night and finally read the last chapter. I'm looking forward to the follow-up.

Beautiful, highest rating

I always think it's AI... But it still looks good

Ahhhh, the pull between the two people is so exciting! [Adoration][Adoration]

The character of the protagonist is very attractive to me, and the plot is also very reasonable and very interesting [like]

So pretty! ! ! What a delicious novel. This arrogant relationship is mixed with concern and a hint of secret expectation. This novel is great! ! !