· Every major fight should have its own distinctive character, reflecting the characters, setting, and mood. Avoid repetition.
· Emotional development: Handle the relationships between Xu Fengnian and Jiang Ni, as well as Nangong Pushe, with care and subtlety. The bonds between brothers (Xu Longxiang and Chen Zhibao), between ruler and subjects, and among comrades in arms (such as Chu Lushan) are also key.
· Pacing: With a thousand-episode story, balance moments of tension and relief. Alternate between large-scale battles, everyday scenes, and adventures in the martial world.
· Character endings: As the plot and character arcs require, some important characters may have tragic, heroic exits (such as Chu Lushan holding the rear) to heighten the emotional impact.
· Thematic culmination: Ultimately, return to the themes of “protection,” “peace,” “responsibility,” and “freedom.”
The fellow Taoists all hope that the big brother who asked the prince to support the wall can come out and show off. The fellow Taoists miss him very much 🤭 🤭 🤭 [crying with laughter] [covering face] 🤭 🤭 🤭 [crying with laughter] [covering face]
The author has profound knowledge, the plot has ups and downs, and the description is concise and orderly, making people feel bright after reading it.
The characters are vivid, the scenes are blended together, the plot is tense and fast, and it's great to watch!
I like it very much, very beautiful.
Interesting and very enjoyable
It's okay, it's better than other people's writing
Good book, gripping