He Traveled into the Novel He Wrote and Was Imprisoned by the Heroine

The plot is compact and beautiful, with strong continuity. The plot is very attractive and makes people want to watch it. Moreover, the author has done a good job in character creation. Each character has his own personality. While perfecting some characters, he can also perfect the protagonist. But there are too many characters, and sometimes some characters appear with new characters before I remember them. I admire the author for being able to come up with so many names. Moreover, the author will confuse some names with similar names when writing, and it will be a little confusing when people read it. If you pay attention to these small problems, it will be perfect. ٩( 'ω' )و

It's a good watch. I didn't know there were so many foreshadowings until I saw the end. The story is wonderful and the writing is excellent. Both the villains and the protagonists have distinct personalities. The only drawback is that the ending is a bit rushed. I think the heroine's IQ should be able to detect the boss's abnormality.

It looks good, I like the setting very much [laughs]

Hi, author, when will my extra chapter arrive? [Shy][shy][shy]

It looked good, but the ending was a bit sudden.

Good looking! ! ! The world view and setting are really good, and the crazy feeling is quite good. I feel that if we continue to develop with this world view and setting and it is not so hasty, we should be able to write about 200 more chapters. It is really good to watch, so uncomfortable, and the good intentions are not over yet ꒦ິ^꒦ິ

It's been a long time since I've seen such a satisfying book.

Ahhhh, it's so pretty [shy]

It's been a while, how come it's over?

To be honest, I haven't seen enough, I still quite like this kind of thing

The writing is very beautiful. I don't know why there are so few people [laughs]

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking [shy]

Finished reading, good, good, good

The story is too fast and a bit short

It looks good, but the ending is a bit like OC, sad

Damn, it's really beautiful. I watched it from beginning to end very seriously.

It was pretty good, but the ending felt a bit rushed.

It's super beautiful and the setting is also very awesome. It's just a bit short, but it's pretty good. I recommend it. I hope there will be a side story