The Evil Adopted Son in the Book, the Doting Sister Who Is Destined to Cry!

Looks good! It suits my taste very well ˃ 𖥦 ˂ The younger sister is very cute and the older brother is decisive in killing. Although the plot is old-fashioned, the writing style and content make up for it. There is nothing poisonous and there are some laughs. I give it full marks as a refreshing novel! . ₍˄ ₗ ̫ ₗ ˄₎◞ ̑̑ I finished reading it in one go and still want to read it ⸝⸝⸝ ╸▵╺⸝⸝⸝ I hope the author will give it a boost! If you continue to maintain this quality, you will surely become popular! I will chase it to the end! ⌯'▾'⌯ (Of course, if it's not popular, please ignore my words ૮´••`ა) Author author! Look at me, look at me! Can you give the little readers a small thumbs up~՞˶･֊･˶՞

I found out that he was the author of "Eavesdropping on the Heart". I really didn't expect that the emotional drama of this one was much better than that one. Whether it is the writing style or the plot, it is obvious that the author has made a breakthrough, but the author likes to use emojis as always. Let's give the overall evaluation to the individual master.

This level is really high and there are a lot of tricks. To be honest, my abs are almost bursting with laughter [crying with laughter] [crying with laughter] [crying with laughter] [crying with laughter] [crying with laughter]. The author gave me more funny elements. I really like to watch [face covering] [face covering] [face covering] [face covering] To be honest, the content is really good. It's hard to say what happened to this child of luck later. You can experience it for yourself 😂😂😂

It is a very popular subject, and the author's strategy in the opposite direction makes the plot interesting and exciting. Therefore, as long as you don't follow the crowd and follow the popular route, innovation is the only way to achieve good results and development!

The interaction between the protagonist brother and sister is interesting, but even after reading 100 chapters, there are no meat dishes and no fighting scenes. I think it is good to write a sweet story with a single female protagonist. I have never seen one of the multiple female protagonists [face covering]

Ok, ok, I caught up with the latest updates. It's a very good novel. I felt happy reading it. The most important thing is that the author's facial expressions are really the finishing touch. My sister's facial expressions are great and super cute. I give all five stars to my sister's facial expressions. Lao Mei is really the ultimate in invincible cuteness. The plot of the whole book is also offbeat. It's a light-hearted genre, nothing too dark or bitter, but the plot becomes sweet later on. All in all, it's a very good and interesting novel. If you are interested in this genre, you can read it. The facial expressions are really cute. By the way, this is a multi-heroine harem novel, and the single heroine is only here for the younger sister, so I can only say sorry.

Review Love harem novels with the guise of fantasy cultivating immortals seldom mention cultivating immortals in their content, and there are very few adventure upgrades in mainstream immortal cultivating novels, so those who want to read immortal cultivating novels can take a detour. It's mainly about love and having a harem, and the author's writing style is very average and there are some dramas, but the character of the heroine (sister) is pretty good, not too toxic, you can give it a try In summary, the writing is a bit rough, but my sister's setting is pretty good.

The use of emojis is very good and unique. Even the progress of the younger sister is too slow. Although it is not as good as the classic plot of the master, but the prison girl has been running for so long, I still kissed her now. In addition, the pressure is very serious, which is a common problem in many books. . I looked back. The plot you wrote is too crude. I suggest that you don't write about the plot in the future. You just believe it after finding the clues without testing whether it is true. It is difficult to imagine that this is a court official who wants to kill the opposite party. As for cultivating immortality, the writing is not good either. If you suppress the combat power too hard, the protagonist will be able to bully his sister. Your top priority is to immediately increase the combat power of the protagonist, his sister, and Miss Liu. Otherwise, you will have to write about being bullied this and that everywhere, which is too boring. And there is an old man who wants to kidnap his sister. Is it really true that he doesn't even care about his identity? No matter how angry you are, you can't kidnap a big shot who casually pinches you to death. After reading this, I suggest you skip those chapters, otherwise it will be a bit uncomfortable to read (although the protagonist has been written about the countermeasures, but my sister doesn't know, so you can imagine if you take the perspective of your sister). The advantage is that the daily life is very good. The daily life with my sister, the daily life with Miss Liu, and the daily life with Luo are all very good. But it is not so good when it comes to the witch. According to this plot, the second person to eat may be the witch (special factors cannot be ruled out, the sister takes the initiative), but the witch. . Personally, I don't think it's particularly good, and the witch's combat power has also been reduced to the Nascent Soul stage. It's even worse with the little princess. In my mind, this little princess looks like a loli and sometimes a girl, and she's too easily bullied.

It's so good that it doesn't even score an 8. It's hard to understand. Personally, there's nothing sinister about it. It's lighthearted and funny and can be read with a little bit of brain. It's mainly about daily life, but it's rare to find someone who can write interesting things about daily life.

From the introduction, it is an old-fashioned setting, but after actually reading the book, I found that the plot development routine of this book is very novel, the characters are not brainless, their IQs are online, and their actions are relatively reasonable and smooth, not abrupt. Nothing mindless. (Except for the protagonist's parents, the setting is stuck in the original female video) It is tentatively non-toxic and can be tasted.

Good luck, the development of prison girls is very interesting, and the emotional transformation is very good. Step by step, events gradually change the view of the big pot. It's not the kind of feeling that changes all at once. A very good quick update of a book [laughs]

The author's writing style is very good, and there is nothing poisonous about it so far. Well, it is quite humorous and funny. It makes my stomach hurt every time I watch it. The only shortcoming is that there is too little written, which is not enough to read. I hope this book will be longer, for example, in the lower world, fairy world, god world, etc., And write at least 1,000 chapters, which will be enough to read. I hope that the subsequent authors will not write so fast or so slowly when writing about concubines. The current pace is quite good (some books only contain one after a few chapters, and some books are like turtles and only contain hundreds of chapters, which is ugly anyway). Finally, I hope everyone will give the author a 5-star review and add power to his love and give him motivation [laughter]

The writing is quite good. It is an anti-conventional story about a single female protagonist. I took a look at the author's other books and it has more than three million words, so I am not afraid of running away halfway. Come on! Keep following updates [laughing]

It's good to read. Some people think the first few chapters are a bit toxic, but it can actually be explained, and it's fun all the way. However, the author still hasn't made it clear about the setting of the sister. If the readers just guess, it will easily affect the sense of this character.

The best bonus is that the heroine is both mentally and physically pure. I really like this book. The male protagonists of these two novels by the author are really appealing to me in terms of character. They are both conspicuous, with clear grudges and no cowards. They are serious when they should be, and conspicuous when they should be. When picking up the heroine, he has a perfect sense of proportion. If there is too much, he will appear too busy, if there is too little, he will appear emotionally insensitive. He really brings the character to life. Unlike other authors who write some intellectually depressing things in order to show off the protagonist's emotional insensitivity, it should have been because the protagonist is already a bit insensitive to emotions, so that's why... In this way, there is no putting the cart before the horse (just comparing it with other books)

Readers who come in for romance and fun will definitely get a certain amount of fun. People who read tags such as Cultivation of Immortals and Stratagems will definitely be disappointed. The reason why the ratings fluctuate is because some people have too high moral standards, and the various methods are not in line with the wishes of some gentlemen... Try to describe it as plainly as possible. I gave it 4 stars because my moral standards fluctuated, the description and character creation were satisfactory and I had fun, and I deducted stars because I didn't agree with some of the over-the-top and unsophisticated methods... But it was still very interesting.

The plot is not brainless, you can feel the thinking of the characters, it is systematic and there is no brainless pretense. The battle of wits and courage in it is really interesting to watch. It is worthy of being eye-catching in the universe. If nothing else, I really like this [full] [full] [full]

It's very beautiful, the setting is very fresh, making luck materialize, and everyone can be a cultivator of immortality: The expressions mixed in the sentences are very vivid, and you can immediately imagine the rich heart of the protagonist at that time, instead of the cold words: One more thing, I want to complain, didn't I say that I need to add character pictures, the characters I saw from the first chapter to the latest chapter, except for the sister in the first chapter, are gone, and there is no table of contents.

After reading this novel, I am still unsatisfied. The characters are particularly vivid and three-dimensional. Each character has his own personality and growth trajectory, and is not just a tool to serve the protagonist. The rhythm of the plot is controlled just right, the tension is relaxed, and the foreshadowing echoes very cleverly. The clues laid out in the early stage are revealed one by one in the follow-up, making the reading experience hearty. The writing is smooth and natural, the writing style is delicate, the world view setting is complete and rigorous, and the logic has almost no loopholes. Both the plot conflicts and the emotional portrayal are very good, making it easy for people to immerse themselves in the story. The overall content is substantial and full, and there is no procrastinating and watery plot. It is a masterpiece worth reading again and again. It is highly recommended to readers who like this kind of subject matter.

This work is actually written with the idea of ​​​​a sweet love story written by a female porn star. Once it comes to the parts of cultivating immortals and machinations, it becomes a little bit irritating. Emotional experience is the author's comfort zone. I think it's better to change the label and stop tricking friends who like fantasy themes into it, so that the rating can go up a bit😑

It is a very interesting story about a spoiled girl. It is a different kind of spoiled girl. The one who can see the back is the true emperor. I have read Chapter 92 so far and can understand a lot of the previous ones. Moreover, the old girl is focused on cultivation and cannot outsmart the big brother.

See Chapter 304. There is far more intrigue and scheming than combat training, but the level is so shallow that it feels like drinking boiled water. The girls are obviously in the harem, but they get along like friends. As a result, when they are on base, there is no sweetness of lovers, but instead they are like friends. The character of the protagonist is a bit crooked, which is fine in normal times, but when it comes to solving the love poison and taking the heart, he is a bit mentally unwell, which makes people think that what's the difference between you and the villains like the Fourth Prince? But this is in tomatoes, so it looks really good [laughs]

I've finished reading it, and it's pretty good so far. At least I don't see any poisonous points, and there's nothing depressing about it. It's just that the improvement in strength is a bit slow. My sister always wanted to join the fourth prince in the front, but she probably didn't in the back because the fourth prince wanted to kill the prison girl. Apart from these, the writing is really good. Good luck to the author.

At least it fits the title and the introduction. It's not trying to sell you something. It looks like it has multiple female protagonists, but it's very slow. If you want something sweet, you can just leave. If you don't want to eat it, there is no such plot so far. The emotional foreshadowing is long and the main focus is comedy.

Generally speaking, it's okay. I can accept a little bit of poison. For example, I can accept that cultivation is not everything (there is no title in this book, and cultivation is of no use, just remember who is better than whom). Sometimes there are a few logical errors, not many. This book is mainly funny. If you see more than 50 pictures and you still don't find it funny, then this book may not be suitable for you. The progress of cultivation is also relatively slow. It is almost 200 chapters. At present, it is more of a daily grooming sister, so you have to eat one. If you can accept it, then this book is actually quite good.

The writing style is quite good, and I have found a fixed writing style that suits my taste. Keep up the good work. Lessons have been learned to avoid the mistakes made in the early stages of the previous book. One suggestion is to explain the story of my sister in the previous life, especially that aspect. After all, it is a rebirth article, which is quite important. Finally, it's still the same sentence: "In a time-travel story that replaces the original protagonist with an important plot and a close relationship with important characters, it is important to clarify the protagonist's role in the development of interpersonal relationships. In short, it is the identity in which the protagonist should get along with the heroines when the original protagonist has already negotiated with the heroine.

Very good, the multi-girl emotional drama is better than most books. It is rare to find a multi-girl novel that is not mindless and flat. It is so hard to find.

Overall, the emotions are delicate, the protagonist and the supporting characters are successfully portrayed, and the images are vivid. Gu Heng, the emotional master, is the kind of strategist and decisive victory thousands of miles away. The plots are interlocking and there is a brain in every step. It is very good to watch. It is so exciting and addictive. You can't stop after watching it. It is absolutely beautiful (-^^-)

To be honest, it's much better than those 9. Points. The main focus of this book is the harem, and the main reason is that the relationship is pretty good. It's not that you can't run away when you see a girl, but each heroine has a slowly developing emotional line. Moreover, the plot of the book is also well written, and it's not slow to discover. I don't know the quality of those who give low scores to others after just a few minutes of reading [awkward laugh]

I really like the fact that the harem is not taken in casually. Most of the harem characters in other harem novels have no souls and are simply written according to templates and casually posted twice before being forgotten by everyone. So far, this book has no such problem, which is great.