Xingyao************

It's hard to imagine the author's mood when he wrote this book. I only saw depression, sadness, and collapse. The protagonist keeps giving, but what about her reward? Why does she keep abusing the protagonist? I was filled with unknown fire after reading this. The writing is very good 👍 The character descriptions are very detailed (but I feel that Xiangzi should not be so cold in the early stage, especially after the protagonist joins the C group) All in all, please continue writing. You must write a lifetime book😭🆘🉑🉑🉑👍👍

If it is a new author, the first writing is actually pretty good. The plot is not particularly draggy. The description of the birth process of personality split is relatively realistic, and then the plot is sweeter, but you still have to complain when you need to complain. This split is still quite embarrassing. When the protagonist starts talking to Xiangzi and the others, I think the writing is quite embarrassing. Hajime's Shoko's character seems to be a bit broken, and the plot seems to be a bit separated later, and the emotional line with Shoko, I think it is still a bit too fast. Wait, I originally wanted to give four stars, but I recalled the plot of the hen card, and then compared the update speed of other writing bands, five stars [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking]

Summary: It's okay for a newcomer to write a book. After all, fellow readers don't really pursue writing style, so they just need to keep the rhythm. In the first few chapters, there are some paragraphs with confusing perspectives and few typos, which is probably within the acceptable range. Heavy, gravity unfolds, and there seems to be daffodils. The ingredients are complex, and the protagonist is even more divine than human. There is no doubt that he is a sadist in the early stage, and his stomach hurts when he looks at it. It wasn't until the second personality "Xiao Xingyao" took over that it entered into sweetness (suspected...?). It is predicted that there may be a lot of plots about abusing the main character with stomachache in the future! ↓ After reading the above, if you think it suits your appetite, just jump in.

It's really in line with mygo's work. The protagonist is as good as a god. It makes me feel sick to my stomach.

I read it all in one afternoon. The first dozen or so chapters were uncomfortable to read, and I felt like the protagonist was not accepted like an outsider. But a few chapters later will be fine. In the first dozen chapters, Xiangzi is still in the Baixiang period, but the portrayal is a bit indifferent. Overall, it is good. The writing is also okay. Among the few girl band Yuraku manga or asexual pure Hyakumon, it is really worth reading. The author needs to update his teeth!

It's too humble and too real. The protagonist is just like me in junior high school who tried hard to blend in with others but didn't make too big a splash (even though I'm someone else). The description is very real, with a few minor points. For example, why the hell did the protagonist know Mizuho but married a man in China? It may be because of the plot of the grandmother, but it doesn't have much impact. It's very exciting. Some people may say lick Xiangzi, but you have to lick a Baixiang standing in front of you [laughter]

Can the author still play a rematch? It's really interesting.

It's okay. I have high poison resistance. It feels good to hold on until later.

I want both lilies and daffodils, Sirin Sirinxi! !

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A very good chicken and dog fanfic. Although it has some shortcomings, it is still considered a great novel among chicken and dog fanfics [Read carefully]

Get rid of the low pressure and be positive. ?

Very nice hen card fanfic [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss]

It's beautiful. I'm curious which personality is the main consciousness in the end.