
Master, Why Is the Long Aotian System on You?
师尊,龙傲天系统怎么在你身上!
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- Ongoing
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- 482k Words
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- Ancient Romance
- Subgenre
- Fantasy Romance
- Audience
- Female
- Updated
- 3mo ago
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- Fanqie
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546Reads
6.7Score
228Chapters
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It's very beautiful, and the female protagonist is very happy. This book is not suitable for male protagonists, nor is it suitable for those who like to read without CP. The heroine is currently the strongest, and she is also protected by relatives and friends. In the early stage, the heroine is aloof, but she also has her own little temper. She doesn't like food, likes stuffed animals, has a bit of social fear, and is too straightforward and has a poisonous tongue. She is very cute. And he stuck to the right path and endured so much pain alone. Especially charming! Then the male protagonist is a pure and loyal dog, and he is so devoted to the female protagonist. Although there are negative reviews, I don't understand that the male protagonist likes the female protagonist, but it's not human nature to like the female protagonist! What's more, there are a lot of sad stories on female channels where the female protagonist is tortured to death and still loves the male protagonist deeply. Why don't I see you making negative comments and asking questions? What attracted me at the beginning was that the male protagonist's method of revenge was not to increase his strength, but to make the female protagonist fall in love with him. He was tired of the female protagonist's videos and wanted to please the male protagonist. If you're not an audience, just quit. It's not promoting any bad values. There is a feeling that the male protagonist is like the goddess's younger brother who pursues the female protagonist. Your life is so good!
The writing is delicate and interesting, the pace is fast, and it is very addictive to watch. The characters have distinct personalities, and the interaction between the male and female protagonists is cute and warm. The interaction between the male and female protagonists in the previous dozens of chapters is simply too graphic. And the characters in it are all good, and there are no particularly annoying villains. As for the male protagonist's design issues mentioned by some readers, saying that the male protagonist is not worthy of the female protagonist, and that the male protagonist's psychological activities are dark, I don't understand it at all. Isn't this just a sex-respecting version of the ordinary female apprentice guide Iceberg Master? The female protagonists in those stories are mediocre, but they are only interesting in their psychological activities. They usually complain about the target of the strategy, saying that the master is too iceberg, and even scolding him. He often gets into trouble, and usually makes a lot of obscene jokes about the male protagonist. Then the male master is strong, cold, handsome and powerful. Why do you change the gender? So many people say that the male protagonist is unattractive. You usually read that kind of literature. Aren't there a lot of female protagonists who like that kind of literature? I think the character of the male protagonist is much better than the female protagonist in those guides. The male protagonist is sunny and handsome. He has many cute ideas, but he is also a bit arrogant and stinky. He is still a little green tea in acting coquettishly and cutely. I really like this kind of character. If you hate her, you just hate her for not remembering you, and you hate that the bright moon hangs high in the sky and doesn't shine on you. This article focuses less on the male protagonist. The reason is that it is definitely written from the perspective of the male protagonist. This is the first time I have seen it written like this. It is so novel! Therefore, he will unfold his understanding of the Master from his perspective. In his eyes, the Master is so powerful and charming. The reason why there are usually many female protagonists in female videos is that the male protagonist shown from the female protagonist's perspective is so powerful and good that the focus is on the male protagonist. The heroine is powerful, beautiful and ignorant of the world's myriad things. The cold-faced master who loves doting and power is also a sickly beauty. She is a very good cold-faced cuteness. Normally aloof, in reality, he may seem dull in society. She suffered from the curse of the demon king's breath, which caused her great pain, and she often stayed in seclusion for several years to suppress the pain. She is very sick and weak, but she has a very strong desire to get better. The heroine is bound to the Long Aotian system and does a lot of tasks to exchange for points, which makes me so cute. Some negative reviews say that the heroine is arrogant and treats dogs better than people. She treats people according to the logic of her own life. The heroine is golden and has never suffered any hardships. She is also very socially afraid. Why should she treat people casually? People are very complicated. She treats dogs well, it's just human nature. The female protagonist is irresponsible for the male protagonist. It is just a misunderstanding. The female protagonist is usually afraid of being aloof in society. The male protagonist in the first life did not know how to pursue, so naturally they did not have a lot of time to get along with each other. However, they still spent a peaceful time while the female protagonist was in seclusion. The female protagonist cursed her and she had no energy to teach her disciples. Moreover, the female protagonist believed that the male protagonist was her disciple, so no one would dare to bully him. Your kaomoji are also very cute, especially when you use them to express the mood of the male protagonist, I only see a wry smile, a man who is crying in his heart because his little idea has not succeeded. I hope the author will write more scenes where the male and female protagonists get along, because I am a cp Author, please don't worry about those malicious negative reviews. The book you wrote is really, really, really good-looking. I've been shopping for it on Tomato for a long time. Those people are the ones who abuse the heroines. They have read too many videos about the cam heroines. Don't spoil them. This is a female channel!
If you like it more, please like it more. When I read the article today, I saw that there were a lot of bad reviews from Dada. I will rate it immediately after reading it. Come on Dada. [Love] [Love] [Love] What's wrong with the baby girl? Female videos are all about big heroines. If some people can't stand it, don't watch it [laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing]
I will comment first, please give me a gentle blow, I will read every comment [blowing kiss]
The heroine is portrayed as super cute. Although she looks cold and frosty on the outside, she is kind and affectionate on the inside. I haven't seen the latest part yet, but the writing really impressed me enough to comment. The male protagonist doesn't have any special highlights, but I think that for the female protagonist, it's enough to provide emotional value and bring a different experience to the female protagonist, and to love the female protagonist wholeheartedly. Our heroine baby is upright and capable of anything (ꈍ ʚ ꈍ) I won't talk about you Yan Xu, the male protagonist is also a good baby. The suffering he suffered in his previous life is real. All he wants is to be loved, trusted and have a family🥺
It's pretty cool, the early interactions are cute, the events of the previous life are explained clearly, and the master is finally connected to the system, it's not easy.
The wooden female protagonist really poked me, and the puppy-shaped male protagonist😆😆😆The system is also very cute. Looking at it, I feel that the system cares about the previous owner too much. Later, I felt that the system is set up to focus on love and justice.
My sister is so cold-faced and cute🥰🥰🥰Falling in love with our sister is as easy as breathing. Some people say that the male protagonist is not fleshed out. I think the writing is very good. Even if I hate the master in the early stage, I didn't scold him too much. He is a very well-behaved little boy. I wish he were a donkey if he eats noodle soup or not.😭😭😭 Lan Jin: Just breathing Yan Xu: What would be a good name for someone whose surname is Lan?
Okk, it's also a day to speed through chapter 230, okay! First of all, let me make a joke. The female protagonist's perspective of this book is called "Tai Shang Wang Qing: After accepting a disciple and binding the system, I turned to the common people!" It's just pure imagination, don't take it seriously. Yanlan 99 Wuqingdao not only has a high divorce rate, but also a high transfer rate. First of all, I actually don't quite believe that this book is the author's debut. Of course, Chapter 227 also explains that there is no outline and the logic will not be very clear (the unclear logic may also be my problem) The author's words are very cute, especially the author can draw, my God... Let me first state that this is only my personal opinion and the article is long and contains spoilers. Please read it patiently after demining: Ahem, I've finished reading the first one now, and I plan to catch up on the second one tomorrow. Summary: First of all, the male is stronger and the female is stronger. The introduction also mentions that the male protagonist said that soft rice tastes really good. The early plot where the male protagonist is still a child may be awkward, but it is also cute in my eyes. Character image: Please note that character image refers to the relative relationship between the male and female protagonists in each other's eyes. The male protagonist is a crying dog, a sunny, innocent and loyal dog type. If the female protagonist slaps him, he will put the other cheek against your palm and secretly lick your hand. After being discovered, he will cry with the female protagonist's indulgence. The heroine is a tsundere type who is cold on the outside and hot on the inside. She practiced the ruthless path in the early stage, and later transferred to another school and applied for her first choice. The heroine is actually a little girl who has not grown up. She has no worries about food and clothing, has parents, best friends, and good friends. She is also at the peak of her life. What I particularly want to say is that the male protagonist's emotion towards the female protagonist in his previous life was that he hated the bright moon hanging high but not shining on me alone, and he hated the bright moon hanging high not shining alone on me (this may not be true). As well as the plot of the female protagonist in the past life who became too passionate and killed the male protagonist. I am a micro-male protagonist. I feel that in the early stage, I looked at the female protagonist from the perspective of the male protagonist and felt that the female protagonist was too cold-blooded. However, I also thought that there is a certain normal logic to this. And Lan Huan's mother: The first one to bear the brunt of the two disasters caused by the male protagonist in the early stage. If I had to beat him half to death, the female protagonist did nothing, and the mother was also in a state of love. And the last two chapters complete a little bit of the past for Mom, making the character better. Everyone around the heroine loves the heroine. Occasionally using emoticons can easily lighten the atmosphere of the article. Anyway, every time I see it, I feel that the author is very cute. Ahem, I wrote this at two in the morning. Maybe it's bullshit. Sorry, I'm sleepy and went to bed first.
I like it. It's the first time I've seen a story about a male protagonist conquering a female protagonist. It's quite novel. The female protagonist is also very cute.
It's nice to read, and the writing style is relatively relaxed and humorous. It's not a very pure and serious ancient saying, but has a lot of modern elements of buzzwords. I like the part where the heroine pretends to be a pig and eats the tiger, the max-level boss pretends to be a newbie, the missions on both sides are crazy about collecting points, and the fairy sect competes in the secret realm to experience the scene. I enjoyed watching it. The male and female protagonists are both pretty good. I like the heroine's cool and powerful character, Feng Aotian, who has all the attributes perfected. She is as high as a god on the altar. In the last life, the male protagonist had a love-hate relationship with the female protagonist, and he hated her again and again for not caring about him. In this life, his destiny has changed, the misunderstanding has been resolved, the clingy and loyal dog will act coquettishly, and the young man will be high-spirited. Recommended I finally kissed you, so cute, keep up the good work!
The writing is really super good. It feels completely different from the previous fairy tales. It has its own characteristics. The plot is super attractive and has an addictive feeling. Anyway, the author has written it really super well, whether it is the plot or the writing style, everything is good! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
I didn't expect that I had just finished the latest chapter. QAQ is still very beautiful. The young couple is really sweet [blowing kisses]. However, it can still be seen that the writing is very immature, but this immaturity is where its aura lies. I hope the author can retain this aura while polishing it. I really want to praise a plot here. When the Long Aotian system issued a mission to prove the innocence of the male protagonist by detecting demonic energy, I thought it was about to be exposed. But to my surprise, the heroine did not use the simplest and most direct method to prove it, but asked those who falsely accused the male protagonist to prove it. Myself, later I thought about why the victims are always asked to prove themselves. What should be proved is obviously the perpetrator, let them prove the credibility of what he said, and then ask the victim. Thinking about it, Zhuomeng is really a very gentle person. No wonder the author, readers, and her relatives, friends, and lovers all like it.
It's quite good-looking. The heroine is super strong and the emotional line is super easy to talk about. Moreover, the male and female protagonists both have their mouths, and the misunderstandings don't last long. All in all, it's a treasure trove of books. [Sending my heart to you]
It's finished. I just finished it. In fact, I only read this book about three or four days ago, but it was so good that I finished it immediately. I really like the character of the heroine. I also really like this kind of warm and funny style. The ending is not bad, but I still feel a little reluctant to let it go [heartfelt]
I love it so much. It's so rare to see such a novel that doesn't abuse the heroine and allows the heroine to have a healthy and complete family!
The author's skills are so solid! Both the narrative rhythm and emotional expression are just right, and I can't stop looking at your work.
This book is really good. Why isn't it popular? [Crying] It's very high-quality and describes the fairies and demons in great detail. I feel like the author has a great writing style. The psychological description of the male and female protagonists is also really super good! Come on update! !
So cute, the male and female protagonists, please don't stab me in the back [crying]
It's quite good-looking. The closer you get to the back, the better it looks. It's different from the master-disciple stories I've seen before. It's quite novel. The heroine is very powerful and the interaction between master and disciple is cute. Also, when will the angst in the heroine's body be removed? It's so painful to watch.
It's quite interesting to watch, and the early interaction between the male and female protagonists is quite interesting.
Why is the author so good at writing emotional dramas? Haha, so sweet, so sweet [Adoration] I was really reluctant to let it go when it was finished. ꒦ິ^꒦ິ Is the first book I've read about a female master and a male disciple and I didn't skip a chapter. The heroine Baobao is a very good person, and so is the hero. The heroine is powerful and beautiful. She is the kind of goddess who cares about the world. She is willing to sacrifice herself for the world. She has extremely upright views (ᵒ̴̶̷̤໐ᵒ̴̶̷̤). She is also a bit arrogant and sometimes feels shy because of some of the words of the hero (⑅˃◡˂⑅). The male protagonist originally wanted to conquer the female protagonist, but later he gradually fell in love with the female protagonist and was probably moved by her gentleness (◔◡◔). He sometimes has a little temper, but he thinks about the heroine in everything and doesn't want the heroine to face difficulties alone ꈨຶꎁꈨຶ. Both of them have some shortcomings, but people are not perfect. Imperfection becomes perfection. Their daily interactions are very sweet, but sometimes I want to say to Yan Xu, do you deserve the heroine's baby? She is mine! (눈‸눈)
It's good to watch, I like the interaction between master and apprentice
It's beautiful. I look forward to the day when the heroine is reborn.
I like this kind of lighthearted and funny article, I feel very happy when reading it, and I really like this kind of master-student setting.
It's very interesting to watch. The interaction between the male and female protagonists is so interesting. The author is very good at writing.
The author's writing style is very good, the characters of the male and female protagonists are very three-dimensional, and the interaction between the two is so sweet!
The setting is novel, the content is good, and the author's writing is also very good.
I really like it so far, the characters are very vivid
It is a very light and funny story about cultivating immortals. Every character is very loving, and the protagonists are very sweet to each other. There is love, friendship, and family affection. The early stage is more daily life, and the plot starts later. I am looking forward to the subsequent plot.