Beneath the Stars: Yukimura-kun

Overall, the writing is okay. It's rare to find a tennis king fan who has a better description of the game. He finally focused on tennis, and the character design is not very OOC. However, I don't know whether the author deliberately changed the timeline or not paid attention to it. Many time details are very different from the original work. If the move that should appear at that time has not been used, Yukimura found out that he fell ill later than in the original work, a quarter of the opponents in Kanto have been replaced, and innocuous competitions such as regional qualifiers and Kanto preliminaries did not use lottery buckets to advance the entire lineup, etc., Rikkai's overall strength feels somewhat diminished.

Generally. I haven't read anime or manga, but from the fanfics I've read, Tachikai Dai is always victorious, and winning consecutive battles is his destiny. Everyone in Li Hai University is very strong and has no blind spots. I can't stand this one after seeing three consecutive victories. I can't accept that the score gap between other students in Li Hai University is so big. After all, other schools have to analyze the opponent's formation. Li Hai University mostly relies on lottery buckets to make decisions. I like their arrogance the most.

The idea is good, but the question is, are you a Lihai chef? Or Tachikai Hei? You should pay attention to combat power and some details. When writing articles, especially in the humanities, you must be familiar with them. Keep up the good work.

Another good Internet King fan novel [sending my heart][sending my heart]

The setting is good and the plot is not bad, but the protagonist's spirit is overly described. Apart from competitions, he uses his mental power at every turn in his daily life. When communicating with Seiichi, he basically uses his mental power to express his language or emotions. Now when talking trash, he has to use his mental power to protect his teammates. Doesn't the protagonist have a mouth? 🤦 Obviously speaking in some scenes is more normal. It's too abrupt to always use mental power. Yukimura Seiichi is also a mental player. This is not the case in anime.

Has the author ever watched Net King? Not to mention private generalizations, what the hell is Iron Man? It feels like Kuro Tachikai Yamato Makinofuji

The character design of the protagonist is pretty good, and I thought the early interactions were okay, until the game with Hyokui started... Is this still the King of Rise Kaidai? I've lost all my arrogance... Many of the timelines don't match up (not to mention it's a private design, that's two different things) and Yukimura didn't write much in the early stages. If he hadn't pulled it out every time he was about to forget, I wouldn't have believed it was a CP novel.

Great support from the author, it looks great. I look forward to Yukimura's recovery and the subsequent U17 and world competitions.

Very exciting, thank you to the author!

I found another new article about Yukimura Seiichi 🤭🤭🤭