Variety Comic: What Does It Mean That Asuna Is Jealous of Mikoto?

It's a good-looking sword fanfic. So far, the author's writing style and detail processing are also very good. The male protagonist's character is very palatable. He is not a joke, nor is he a template that dominates the lower body. He has his own goals. I hope the author will work hard and persevere. Many anime are memories of the past. I hope I can become more complete with the help of the fanfic.

Pretty good, come on I'm quite disgusted with this identity assigned by the system. Does it have to be smooth sailing after a bad start?

I think this sword novel is quite good. Although I didn't delve into the various settings of the original work, it was still very enjoyable to watch. The author should establish a personality for the protagonist at the beginning. Many negative reviews are that he is too pretentious, does not understand human feelings, and has a broken combat power. We should add a Chapter 0 to introduce the system and the protagonist's experience [Thinking]

The protagonist of the novel, Shen Shen, is not as smooth sailing as everyone imagines, and he will also be frustrated. But no matter what, the final winner is still our hero. The plot doesn't look exaggerated. Very true. Like. Like. Five-star rating

It's very good. Some of the author's yy are very popular with me. It's good to leave Liz with Kirito. I don't like Liz too much. Where is Liz in the movie version? Said something interesting about Klein.

"In the system's memory bank, the original owner of this body is a standard moonlight clan. He rents the cheapest apartment and lives a life of food and worry. Not to mention a mobile phone, he doesn't even have a decent home appliance." The co-author said that every time he traveled through time, he was soul-transported, and the description was that he wore it for a while and then soul-transported it for a while. [Smile]

To be honest, writing this work as a level 2 author is already good enough for this level. Although the total time of the novel is only 800, I think this level is really good. Although there are two chapters where the data is forced to be changed, which is really uncomfortable, but overall it is good. Although in my opinion, the score should be 8.6 Points. I don't know what the score will be in the future.

There are not many authors who write about swords. This one seems to be okay so far. There is no obvious poisonous point, and the protagonist is not overly powerful. (I still like to read Shuang Wenha, after all, the protagonist is very frustrated when it is written.) Anyway, it is good so far. Okay, there is a little bit of poison in the back. The author wrote the combat power too high in the early stage, which caused it to feel a little unharmonious when the combat power was reduced in the later stage.

After seeing Sword Art Online in Chapter 98, it's almost over. Chapter 148 of Magic Forbidden is also worth watching. The game life and FATE that follow can be challenged by King Akaashi. There is no plot at all in Re0. The early stage is good, but the collapse in the later stage is incomprehensible. It is probably the author's first time writing a comprehensive manga, so give it a five-star review to support it.

Brothers are very good-looking. Watching this, you have the fun of panning for gold in shit. I can only say that I highly recommend it. I can clearly feel that a large part of it was modified by AI, and there are many meaningless descriptions and wrong descriptions.

I'm an old bookworm, so I watched the latest one in one go, and it felt different from other comics I've read. The Sword Chapter is coming to an end soon. It's really good to watch. Although the characters are not exactly the same as the original work, it has a different flavor. If you like reading with a little imagination, you can try it.

Generally speaking, it's not as good as the girl's great summons. But it's really not easy to write a comprehensive comic novel in this Eastern and Western style nowadays. Hope you can stick to it.

This magical transformation is out of shape [face covering]

Good. It's not easy for the author to give five stars for his writing. How many pictures are there in the previous chapters? Go rescue the mice. In the smiling coffin nagazi. I felt particularly bad about that paragraph. Originally, it was because I wanted to deduct two stars from him. The writing on the back is okay. The author also worked hard. Give it five stars and help recommend it.

There was Mitte before, who was stronger than Asuna. As a result, Chapter 28 is gone? What's this? There are many female protagonists, but currently there is only Argo. . .

(ง ´͈౪`͈)วCome, come, you ask me why I gave it four stars? Because my heart has been given to you a long time ago [Stare] It looks good [laughs], but you can't forget the daily tasks The author's soul returns. 𓀃𓀅𓀇𓀋𓀌 The soul has returned, driving the long whip and setting up the six bridles. 𓀌𓀎𓀠𓀤𓀫 The soul comes back. Comes over the mountain and sings. Comes back. The soul comes back. 𓀋𓀌𓀎𓀙𓀠 The soul comes back. It sings loudly and triumphs. It is the same robe and glory. 𓀋𓀠𓀤𓀥𓀫 The soul is back. The soul is back. Tao: Rebirth Mantra The Supreme Lord's decree transcends your lonely soul, all ghosts and ghosts, and is blessed by you in all your lives. Those with heads will surpass, those without heads will rise, kill with spears and knives, dive and hang on ropes. Die openly and secretly, die unjustly, creditor and enemy, beg for life. Kneel down in front of my stage, the Eight Diagrams will shine, stand out from the threshold, and transcend other places. As a man or a woman, you are responsible for your own responsibility. Whether you are rich or poor is your own responsibility. The order is given to save the people, and the people who are waiting for it are saved. The people who are waiting for the order are saved, and the people are saved. (Heart of the curse: The Supreme Order, transcend your lonely soul. Escape from the sea of ​​suffering and reincarnate as a human being.)

Because the plot of the story is not well connected, the protagonists in the first half and the second half of the story are like two people at this stage, but the author's imagination is not bad, let's take a look.

The author would like to work hard and update it, it looks good, I want to read it, I love it [adoration][adoration][adoration]

It turns out that this is a book about rebirth.

So far, it's okay, and it's basically a good read. [Eat melon]

A very nice Sword Art Online fanfic, worth recommending

The author carefully creates every plot, without adding water, and it looks clear and coherent. Worth likes

I like this book very much, the content is super exciting and makes people feel like they are there. Many plots are still very exciting. It can touch people's hearts, and there are some parts that make me couldn't help but be excited.

The combat part is well written, and the emotional part feels like a female channel writing a male channel. If you like to eat more, Shennong must give good reviews to Bronchus

In the beginning, the protagonist Shen Shen entered Sword Art Online alone. Later, he got a lot of helpers around him. They worked together and fought side by side around a goal. This kind of scene is much better than a one-man show.

The protagonist of the novel conquers the rules of the game in Sword Art Online. No matter which field he is in, his goal is very clear and he never repeats routines. He looks very attractive and is more interesting than chopping melons and vegetables all the way.

Can anyone think of that? When Chen Mo first entered Sword Art Online, he didn't take the novice route. Watching the counter-killing boss and his positioning made me say, "It's so cool!"

It's okay. I just feel like the male protagonist in the ngnf chapter seems to be a different person. He suddenly became gay with Rick and was so angry that he almost didn't look forward to the female protagonist in the two worlds [face covering]

Personally, it's a taste of Qiandai! The small drawback lies in the female protagonists!

Not bad, good, author, come on