A 21-Day Speedrun from the Start: Becoming the Sword Calamity's Proxy

I like the setting very much. Come on, don't be a pig. The villain is a little poisonous but not too much and does not affect the viewing. Upgrade the monsters and push the dungeon to advance the plot. Don't arrange a bloody plot that is not there. Come on, the author will not give up. I'll take back the good reviews and give you seven stars [awkward laughter]

Very good article, The writing is average, but the setting is outstanding and very interesting. The shortcoming is that the plot has some problems. The plot of a normal novel is to meet villain A, villain A, and then meet villain B, and deal with villain B. Even if he offends the big family, the big family will send them away one by one. Even if he offends many enemies, they will not attack the protagonist easily. But this novel is about meeting villain A, provoking villain B, blocking the path of villain C, and at the same time flaunting his talents. He knows that many enemies have left the protector's side and is being hunted by many people. He can only hide under the wings of the principal, but the bad guys can let the dead men kill at will, and the good guys need evidence to judge the bad guys. It is depressing, but this can also be seen as the feature of this article. At the same time, the combat power system is very confusing. The protagonist has obtained a lot of things, but how much has the combat power been improved? What is everyone's average combat power? This is the most important point, because without contrast, without pulling and stepping, there will be no feeling of pleasure.

Overall it looks good. But as an antique that has existed for hundreds of years. He didn't show much strength in terms of force, and he didn't have much IQ either. Although the protagonist is cheating, he crushes those who have lived longer, have more experience, and have higher levels in all aspects, making people wonder how they have been able to compete with each other in wits and courage over the past 300 years. There is also a concept that the protagonist knows, and the next step is to use this concept. This kind of coincidence is too direct. Moreover, the overall plot and skill writing are particularly complicated, so of course skipping them will not affect it. So overall it's a good article

The subject matter is good and the world view is also great. The protagonist understands that if you are poor, you can be good for yourself, and if you are prosperous, you can help the world. The plot (contains some spoilers) is a very classic type. At the beginning, both parents died and were swallowed up for compensation, then misunderstood and looked down upon, and then counterattacked and slapped in the face at the beginning, and later became the mainstay of the protagonist's force. Talking about shortcomings, there are too many ratings. For example, levels 0-10 are level zero, 10-20 are level one, levels 20-60 are level three, and levels 60-100 are level 4. This level is what the realm of aura (blue quantity) is for, from Yuling to bronze, silver, and gold. Then there is the level of learning spell knowledge, which is also related to the upper limit of spell level. Spell levels are obtained by killing monsters. There are also spell properties (more like granting entries) ranging from common to rare, etc., There are so many. Then there is the division of the protagonist's power level into swordsman-sword user-half-step sword master-sword master. After that, there are talents (body-gifted ones) that can be used wirelessly but with Ferran. High-level talents will suppress the power of lower-level players and the protagonist. The plot is also not that exciting. The protagonist has awakened a lot of tricks, but they are only useful later. The protagonist encounters unexpected copies too frequently. It felt like I was involved in the incident before I could settle down and improve much. Just write this much first

There are a lot of poison points, but I am still willing to give you five stars, not because of how well written the plot is, but because the settings are really good. If the settings of the small world magic school can be written solidly later, it can be regarded as a good book. It's hard to imagine how much fun it would be if these settings could be used to make a treasure-grabbing MMOrpg similar to Destiny 2 and Warframe.

There are so many things, I feel dizzy, but they are so beautiful. Click in and read a few chapters before leaving. If you come here, you will come in vain.

I didn't understand the rules in the Sword Disaster dungeon. The setting is quite novel, but a little complicated. In fact, it looks good. The main reason is that the expressions in some paragraphs are problematic, that is, others say they are poisonous. As I was reading, I mainly felt that it might be better to change the way of saying it. In fact, it was not bad. I happened to be short of books and had nothing to read.

To be honest, it's very good-looking, the kind I like. I hope the author will work harder to update it and write a better plot. [Adoration][Adoration][Admiration][Blowing kiss][Flowing kiss][Flowing kiss]

So far, I have seen 168 pictures, which are generally good. Well, there are just some parts that are more classic routines, but to be honest, it doesn't hurt, because to be honest, the routines have been washed away. As for this routine, as long as some subsequent characters have no problem with their behavior on this matter, it is still acceptable. You can see this from the many foreshadowings in the front. At least he is filling in holes, and its design is good, because it is set to add It has special abilities, but it also has this effect, so some people may not be able to understand it. People who want to read pure and refreshing writing are more culturally sophisticated, because this is generally a refreshing writing, but it is not purely refreshing writing, so some people may not be able to understand it.

The story is wonderful, the layout is grand, the events are compact, the descriptions are reasonable, and the characterization is good. However, the early writing is a bit foggy, and the introduction of the background story is a bit unclear. It is not smooth enough. I suggest you sort out the previous chapters.