Game Design: I’ve Been God-Tier Since My Debut

A very good non-CP story, the focus is on the game. The two annoying men in the original protagonist's team basically didn't show up except for jumping around at the beginning, and the female protagonist ignored them when they came out. Moreover, the original female protagonist really developed a good life after breaking up, and there was no scene such as female competition. Don't miss it if you like forums or live streaming movies! This is one of the few novels that I have been following recently [Salute]

I've just read Chapter 12, but I can't help but give it a thumbs up. The author is really a good woman. If anyone has questions, she will answer them in the comment area, and she guarantees that there is really no cp. Nowadays, the villains are finally no longer female, most of them are male. And when someone pointed out that games and anchors also needed female characters, the author responded quickly and quickly added them. I love you author, you are truly the kindest person in the world, the best person to me today, and the cutest author. It looks great until now. I highly recommend it.

Alas, after some hesitation, I still want to encourage the author. Some of the comments will make the author aware of the shortcomings. The first is the plot of the original female partner and the original heroine. No one will favor one person without any bottom line, and the same is true for girls. What's more, it is a novel character with zero emotional basis, and the heroine obviously does not like it. There is actually no need for such a person to harm the original owner in principle. It will make the reader very, very upset in the stomach and hurt the eyes, and feel sad for the original owner. Everything has its own ranking. Before you feel sorry for the original heroine, shouldn't you feel more sorry for the original owner, the victim? Those who feel sorry for the original heroine can use w [Nao] to evaluate it. There is no bottom line and no distinction between right and wrong. Don't argue with me about whether you love someone or not. We never love this kind of person no matter what the person is. Secondly, the author of the game worked very seriously and hard on the creation, which felt very hard, but personally I felt that it looked very bland, maybe because the plot at the beginning was too exciting. The game is ok. The world view and reality feel very hazy. There are too many descriptions of the appearance of the male supporting character. In fact, no one cares about the male supporting character in the story without cp career. Even writing it too prominently can make readers have negative emotions. I hope the author's writing will get better and better. The first question raised is actually either revenge on these three people, or it is best to disappear and then occasionally appear and behave miserably. You also read the comments. Most of them want revenge. I actually wonder what it means for some people to love such a negative character. If they really love it, will they not feel sorry for the original owner? If they feel sorry for the original owner, they still love such a supporting character?

A very good work, at least in the context of this platform, it has good writing skills. The gameplay of the game is very detailed, the description of the environment in the game is also very immersive, and the depiction of the game characters is also very delicate and vivid. It is not the kind of work written by a novice. I was really touched by the depiction of righteousness when I saw the battle between immortals and ghosts in the game about cultivating immortals. I really like this orthodox story about cultivating immortals. The flaw is that the portrayal of the original heroine is too fragmented, and the independent growth that the author wants to express is not well written, which makes her transformation appear to be hypocritical. Also, the description of the vassal male supporting character in the early stage is too flattering. In the non-CP, there is no need to describe how charming and handsome the man is in a large space. In the female channel without CP, the higher the male's presence and the better the description of his personality... It will only be more annoying. However, the author also listened carefully to the readers' suggestions. After many suggestions were raised, the author also admitted that his subconscious was still following the male-dominated social concept, so the female characters in the article were less and thin compared to the male characters. I am also improving my writing ideas later on, and I think it is still acceptable. Overall, it is a book worth reading, at least for the average level of this platform, it is a very good product.

The writing on the game is very good. The daily life is a bit abstract at the beginning, and the original heroine's speech is also a bit abstract at the beginning, but later on it is good and the problem is not big. Anyway, the game is very good and has a sense of immersion. It's getting more and more exciting [crying] The author listened and now writes specifically about games! The plot of the male and female protagonists at the beginning somewhat overshadows the author's writing style. The game is so well written that it's not enough to read.

I almost missed another good book because of the low score, almost as ridiculous as seeing in Xiaohongshu that the lightning protection game was invaded because there were books that disrespected women in the Mao Bu Tu bookshelf. . Although the pretending man who appeared in the previous scene often flashed some very faint emotion, often seeming to be flirting for some reason (), but after that there was no more scenes for him! Our heroine's journey is to the stars and the sea! In terms of the game, the plot tension and rhythm are very good. Our polite author Baobao listened to the advice and made progress (ง •̀_•́)งEveryone should know that we are not living in a vacuum. Those who love their daughters must also see women in reality. Blindly denying certain aspects of the author is really like a professional black man. There are shortcomings and improvements, which is the purpose of our calling for loving daughters₍• ʚ•₎•ʚ•₎•ʚ•₎There are also things like why the original heroine has a growth line. In fact, it is because there is not enough foreshadowing and the transition is too blunt. It should be to show that the original one was filled by an environment and consciousness. After all, it is a good thing to have one more girl awakening.

It's a very good novel. I usually pay more attention to ratings when reading novels, but it's normal for new books to have low ratings. After reading the reviews, I found that Lightning Protection was very good at writing about a man. However, I don't think that a lot of highlights were given to that character. It is not a very charismatic character. It is not as attractive as the grandma I see now. Because I usually play games and think that grandma will pinch a young face. Unexpectedly, she pinched a 40-year-old face. I feel that the character is well created and it also brings me reflection. , And there are many good female characters, and most importantly, the plot writing is very good. At the beginning, the default male character author for the game characters was changed later. I think the author is making progress and can be more tolerant when reflecting on it. I don't want to squeeze the living environment of female authors. After all, I won't go out of my way to read male-channeled novels and give low scores. If a female author who is constantly improving is given a low score because she didn't do a good job at the beginning, it would be a pity. However, if there is an excessive plot of charming men and women later, I will change the rating.

Tying update This book is pretty good on Tomato. The ideas for the following games are very good. The descriptions are very detailed and immersive. They are not dry. I really feel the charm of these games. I like it very much. After traveling back in time, I didn't have much interaction with the original male and female protagonists, and my separation was very simple and smooth. Although there will be intersections in the follow-up, it does not affect it. The original heroine seems to be taking the path of slowly getting wise and getting rid of her constraints. In the early stage, there was a relatively big poisonous point, which was that there was too much description of the male supporting character of the game company, Leon, which seemed to be praising the male supporting character, which was very inexplicable. Maybe the author wanted to write that the female protagonist was favored by the industry bosses because of her outstanding performance, and then used the opportunity to grow, but she went astray... There is no need to describe the outstanding image of the male partner in too much detail in a non-CP movie. It can be briefly mentioned in one stroke, and the focus should be more on business development. It was changed later and some female characters were added to make adjustments, which I can accept. Occasionally, there will be some very romantic descriptions, but the further you read, the less likely it will be. You can see that the author is trying his best to avoid them. The author's writing skills are slowly improving, keep up the good work

It's very good-looking, and the beginning will make people think it's a traditional slap-in-the-face counterattack. It may feel cliche, but there are basically no scenes that slap the original male lead in the face, they are all content related to game production. Then there are the descriptions related to various games, which are really attractive. When I read them, I almost wanted to experience them through the interstellar world. All in all, it's a super nice sentence. I think it deserves a five star rating.

Beautiful! I still hope that in addition to games that focus on love, I can also write character CPs, because I have a very popular CP who loves Ky very much when I push. When I write content about CPs that are popular on the Internet, I can always be substituted into the single-recommended content in 1 second... Of course, this is just my wish. There is no need to listen to it. Just write what you like (*￣3￣)╭♡