游戏设计从出道开始超神

A very good non-CP story, the focus is on the game. The two annoying men in the original protagonist's team basically didn't show up except for jumping around at the beginning, and the female protagonist ignored them when they came out. Moreover, the original female protagonist really developed a good life after breaking up, and there was no scene such as female competition. Don't miss it if you like forums or live streaming movies! This is one of the few novels that I have been following recently [Salute]

I've just read Chapter 12, but I can't help but give it a thumbs up. The author is really a good woman. If anyone has questions, she will answer them in the comment area, and she guarantees that there is really no cp. Nowadays, the villains are finally no longer female, most of them are male. And when someone pointed out that games and anchors also needed female characters, the author responded quickly and quickly added them. I love you author, you are truly the kindest person in the world, the best person to me today, and the cutest author. It looks great until now. I highly recommend it.

Alas, after some hesitation, I still want to encourage the author. Some of the comments will make the author aware of the shortcomings. The first is the plot of the original female partner and the original heroine. No one will favor one person without any bottom line, and the same is true for girls. What's more, it is a novel character with zero emotional basis, and the heroine obviously does not like it. There is actually no need for such a person to harm the original owner in principle. It will make the reader very, very upset in the stomach and hurt the eyes, and feel sad for the original owner. Everything has its own ranking. Before you feel sorry for the original heroine, shouldn't you feel more sorry for the original owner, the victim? Those who feel sorry for the original heroine can use w [Nao] to evaluate it. There is no bottom line and no distinction between right and wrong. Don't argue with me about whether you love someone or not. We never love this kind of person no matter what the person is. Secondly, the author of the game worked very seriously and hard on the creation, which felt very hard, but personally I felt that it looked very bland, maybe because the plot at the beginning was too exciting. The game is ok. The world view and reality feel very hazy. There are too many descriptions of the appearance of the male supporting character. In fact, no one cares about the male supporting character in the story without cp career. Even writing it too prominently can make readers have negative emotions. I hope the author's writing will get better and better. The first question raised is actually either revenge on these three people, or it is best to disappear and then occasionally appear and behave miserably. You also read the comments. Most of them want revenge. I actually wonder what it means for some people to love such a negative character. If they really love it, will they not feel sorry for the original owner? If they feel sorry for the original owner, they still love such a supporting character?

A very good work, at least in the context of this platform, it has good writing skills. The gameplay of the game is very detailed, the description of the environment in the game is also very immersive, and the depiction of the game characters is also very delicate and vivid. It is not the kind of work written by a novice. I was really touched by the depiction of righteousness when I saw the battle between immortals and ghosts in the game about cultivating immortals. I really like this orthodox story about cultivating immortals. The flaw is that the portrayal of the original heroine is too fragmented, and the independent growth that the author wants to express is not well written, which makes her transformation appear to be hypocritical. Also, the description of the vassal male supporting character in the early stage is too flattering. In the non-CP, there is no need to describe how charming and handsome the man is in a large space. In the female channel without CP, the higher the male's presence and the better the description of his personality... It will only be more annoying. However, the author also listened carefully to the readers' suggestions. After many suggestions were raised, the author also admitted that his subconscious was still following the male-dominated social concept, so the female characters in the article were less and thin compared to the male characters. I am also improving my writing ideas later on, and I think it is still acceptable. Overall, it is a book worth reading, at least for the average level of this platform, it is a very good product.

The writing on the game is very good. The daily life is a bit abstract at the beginning, and the original heroine's speech is also a bit abstract at the beginning, but later on it is good and the problem is not big. Anyway, the game is very good and has a sense of immersion. It's getting more and more exciting [crying] The author listened and now writes specifically about games! The plot of the male and female protagonists at the beginning somewhat overshadows the author's writing style. The game is so well written that it's not enough to read.

I almost missed another good book because of the low score, almost as ridiculous as seeing in Xiaohongshu that the lightning protection game was invaded because there were books that disrespected women in the Mao Bu Tu bookshelf. . Although the pretending man who appeared in the previous scene often flashed some very faint emotion, often seeming to be flirting for some reason (), but after that there was no more scenes for him! Our heroine's journey is to the stars and the sea! In terms of the game, the plot tension and rhythm are very good. Our polite author Baobao listened to the advice and made progress (ง •̀_•́)งEveryone should know that we are not living in a vacuum. Those who love their daughters must also see women in reality. Blindly denying certain aspects of the author is really like a professional black man. There are shortcomings and improvements, which is the purpose of our calling for loving daughters₍• ʚ•₎•ʚ•₎•ʚ•₎There are also things like why the original heroine has a growth line. In fact, it is because there is not enough foreshadowing and the transition is too blunt. It should be to show that the original one was filled by an environment and consciousness. After all, it is a good thing to have one more girl awakening.

Tying update This book is pretty good on Tomato. The ideas for the following games are very good. The descriptions are very detailed and immersive. They are not dry. I really feel the charm of these games. I like it very much. After traveling back in time, I didn't have much interaction with the original male and female protagonists, and my separation was very simple and smooth. Although there will be intersections in the follow-up, it does not affect it. The original heroine seems to be taking the path of slowly getting wise and getting rid of her constraints. In the early stage, there was a relatively big poisonous point, which was that there was too much description of the male supporting character of the game company, Leon, which seemed to be praising the male supporting character, which was very inexplicable. Maybe the author wanted to write that the female protagonist was favored by the industry bosses because of her outstanding performance, and then used the opportunity to grow, but she went astray... There is no need to describe the outstanding image of the male partner in too much detail in a non-CP movie. It can be briefly mentioned in one stroke, and the focus should be more on business development. It was changed later and some female characters were added to make adjustments, which I can accept. Occasionally, there will be some very romantic descriptions, but the further you read, the less likely it will be. You can see that the author is trying his best to avoid them. The author's writing skills are slowly improving, keep up the good work

It's a very good novel. I usually pay more attention to ratings when reading novels, but it's normal for new books to have low ratings. After reading the reviews, I found that Lightning Protection was very good at writing about a man. However, I don't think that a lot of highlights were given to that character. It is not a very charismatic character. It is not as attractive as the grandma I see now. Because I usually play games and think that grandma will pinch a young face. Unexpectedly, she pinched a 40-year-old face. I feel that the character is well created and it also brings me reflection. , And there are many good female characters, and most importantly, the plot writing is very good. At the beginning, the default male character author for the game characters was changed later. I think the author is making progress and can be more tolerant when reflecting on it. I don't want to squeeze the living environment of female authors. After all, I won't go out of my way to read male-channeled novels and give low scores. If a female author who is constantly improving is given a low score because she didn't do a good job at the beginning, it would be a pity. However, if there is an excessive plot of charming men and women later, I will change the rating.

It's very good-looking, and the beginning will make people think it's a traditional slap-in-the-face counterattack. It may feel cliche, but there are basically no scenes that slap the original male lead in the face, they are all content related to game production. Then there are the descriptions related to various games, which are really attractive. When I read them, I almost wanted to experience them through the interstellar world. All in all, it's a super nice sentence. I think it deserves a five star rating.

Beautiful! I still hope that in addition to games that focus on love, I can also write character CPs, because I have a very popular CP who loves Ky very much when I push. When I write content about CPs that are popular on the Internet, I can always be substituted into the single-recommended content in 1 second... Of course, this is just my wish. There is no need to listen to it. Just write what you like (*￣3￣)╭♡

It looks good, and the heroine is beautiful. Can the author consider investigating or horror games in the future? It will be very interesting. And I feel that the sense of the interstellar era is not very obvious. Except for the hologram, the rest is no different from now. I can write some unique features of the interstellar era, otherwise it will be a bit weird.

Who knows how hard it is to finish each chapter, and Su Dai really loves her every game, and it is her treasure. I think the games in it can be made if there are conditions in reality. I am so excited to watch it, I wonder if there will be more updates, it is not enough! ! ! ! Moreover, Su Dai has been pursuing her ideals and moving towards her goals. There are no miscellaneous emotions involved. If she had a relationship or fell in love, I would definitely skip the chapter and not be able to read it at all. Fortunately, she didn't. Moreover, the progress was well controlled, and no one game took up a huge space, nor did she forget the previous games. The distribution was very good, and I can feel Su Dai's love for her babies. [Blowing kiss]

Overall, it's good. Because the author is also a newcomer, it's normal for the first game to be rough. The author may not have realized that seducers can be women when he wrote it, but it's normal for people's thoughts to change over time. The author is now able to realize this and make corrections. It's really worthy of praise, especially for having the courage to write this in the first chapter. Come on, there is no need to be harsh, just like many girls used to say that they were men. As everyone's thoughts continue to develop, they realize this mistake and correct it, which means they are making progress, and there is no need to criticize their past selves. We ordinary people live in a big environment, and most of them follow the trend. Only one in 10,000 people can be at the forefront of mainstream thinking. Nowadays, the female pornographic novels in Tomato are slowly changing, which is great👍🏻

It's very beautiful. They are all original plot games by the author. One or two of them are borrowed from current games, but the plot is super good. It is a group experience game. The heroine is also focused on the game. There is basically no other plot. I especially like the inner activities of the interstellar people playing the fairy road and the rivers and lakes.

It's very interesting. I don't know why the rating is so low. Generally speaking, there are no embarrassing language descriptions in the writing online; the rhythm of the article is also very good, relaxed and relaxed, and there is no annoying old-fashioned "cool article" plot; several games designed and described in the article are very interesting, especially the holographic game. When I read the novel, I wish I could play it myself. Regarding the protagonist Su Dai, she is a person who is full of creativity and has her own ideas, and is determined to follow her own path. However, because the author is not good at writing daily content, this part is less, but the game-related content makes up for this very well. I hope the author can make progress in shaping the protagonist's character in the future.

It's a very novel subject matter, I've never seen it before, but overall it's very good. But for me, the plot of the game is a bit incomprehensible. Maybe it's because I don't play games very much, so it looks a bit complicated, especially the Miss Lucifer game, and the protagonist's name is foreign, which makes it even more confusing. Moreover, I personally feel that there is a bit of a lack of connection when talking about the plot of the game, that is, sometimes people don't understand why they suddenly go from here to there. This scale needs to be carefully controlled. If you talk about it in too much detail, it may make people feel bored. If you talk about it in a rough way, it will make people feel a little confused. But it's still very interesting, and I'm looking forward to the new story [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart] The author of this book is really the most receptive person I have ever seen, and he often reads readers' opinions. [Sending Hearts]

I like it very much. The plot of the game is very interesting. I wish it could be more. I can't get enough of it. The author is very good at writing group portraits. The heroine's career is really cool. There is no cp in the whole text. I just appreciate the talent!

Five stars without explanation. Don't be dissuaded by the low reviews, everyone, come and see Half a Bag of Black to see Su Dai! At the beginning, I did feel that inserting the growth line of the former heroine was a bit stiff, but the author was specially advised to only bring it up occasionally, so the more I read, the more I read, and the writing skills are quite good. After entering the state, the plot is almost crazy. The plots of the three games of Orais, Xiantu and Miss Lucifer are fascinating and excellent. It is super enjoyable to watch. I really want to play if the goddess Su Dai can be transplanted to the PC... Congratulations to you guys from the Stars for playing my goddess's game like this! *^_^* It's not finished yet, but I'm looking forward to the new games in the future. I keep up with the updates every day and I can't bear to stock up on them. In the end, I couldn't find a meal replacement. As expected, Nvwu is so good-looking [KISS]

Really super pretty. There are all kinds of games, which is great for an omnivore like me. The pace of the story is also very comfortable, but I would have preferred the game to be longer, as it was a bit unfinished. And there is no annoying villain (if there is, it will be offline soon). The conflicts that appear in the story also play the role of seasoning in the novel and do not take up much space. The pace of the heroine's growth path is also very comfortable. From the beginning, she needs to cooperate with large companies to support the game expenses (it is still completely independent for the heroine to produce). After accumulating money, she can support advanced technology on her own. And expand to other planets. It's really amazing. I hope the author can update it soon. [Adoration] Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh I can't get enough of it, I can't find a meal replacement. I declare your [admiration] ah ah I just read the introduction, and the game, la~la~la~la~la lala [admiration]٩(๛ ˘ ³˘)۶❤Dada is a genius for the game part, so many ideas ヾ(✿ﾟ▽ﾟ)ノ

The content of the game can be written in detail, but don't make it too lengthy. This will make it difficult to read. In the later stages of the game, I would skip the next chapter and only stop to take a look when I encountered forums and slaps in the face. . I am just an ordinary reader who loves fast food, and there must be many people like me. . =ᗜωᗜ=

It's a good-looking story. It's purely about games. The game writing is very interesting. It's not bloody, and it doesn't mindlessly smear the original heroine. It doesn't have much interaction with the characters in the original novel. It focuses on career. The owner of the game company is also a businessman. There is no ambiguous man.

It's very interesting. There was an original heroine at the beginning who was more dependent on the original hero. Then the original hero and the original heroine's brother were very vicious. However, the original heroine changed her mind later and became hard-working and motivated. Later, the heroine gave her guidance, but after a few words, it was gone. The latter part is still very interesting. She creates her own world view of the game, and then destroys that world. Some casual games have been moved to that world, and there are female video games with very detailed descriptions that make people blush. There is also a story about strangling the bad guys in the city in their cradle. The heroine is also making progress. It is a very cool article. The heroine of the article is cool. She leaves the team as soon as she wakes up, and then follows her own imagination, and does not accept the criticism of others. It is very beautiful.

I like [Blowing Kiss] very much. The plot of the game is very good. Now I have seen the part of "The Path to Immortality". To be honest, the writing is also very good. It will be suitable for those who like the career line, hehe. It feels like it deserves 9 points, and I hope I can watch it climb up to its own segment. Let's talk about the world view. It belongs to the era that has just entered the holographic game. It does not count interstellar. Personally, it can be viewed as the background of a period of rapid technological development.

A well-written game article with creative, clever and funny elements. The writing is very good! (Emphasis added) It is rare for game-related articles to be well-written. I also want to play the Cultivation of Immortality holographic game... And this Cultivation of Immortality book is very well written. I always felt uncomfortable reading those Cultivation of Immortality books in the past. Either I liked writing about complex human nature and cold-blooded flesh-eating strength and weakness, or it was too simple, with one map and several secret realms of supreme inheritance. And this book gave me the feeling of accidentally reading an article about cultivating immortality. If there is such a thing as cultivating immortality, I think it should be this kind of journey where various sects and characters show their magical powers, and there are laughter and tears.

It's a different story about making a game. I thought it was a slap-in-the-face story at the beginning, but in the end, the protagonist was cut off from the original owner. There was no plot to take revenge on the original heroine. In the later stage, it was still a relationship of acquaintances who can eat together. The games are written one by one. The writing is more detailed and the corresponding chapters are relatively long. See Chapter 62

Nice looking, more to come. Even people who don't play games will have no problem reading it. The plot is good and the writing is good, but it's a bit lacking. Another thing is that I hope my daughter will be a big hit. I don't know about the interstellar culture part. I want the author to design a poetry and spiritual game [Adoration] The writing about the game is very interesting, but when separated from the game, there are so many details that are stuck in your throat. It will give me the charm to write about the gracefulness of each character, such as getting close, touching with fingers, etc. This aspect is very strange, and I personally don't like it. In addition, the overall interstellar feeling is not too heavy, and the online feeling (forum style) is relatively heavy. I watched it intermittently for a long time, and I will not read it for the time being to follow up.

So far it's okay. Since I started watching it directly from Orles and I don't know how to deal with the original male and female protagonists, I feel that it's okay. The game is quite new and the female protagonist is also very independent. After being shady by the awards organizer, I directly used her power to abuse the fans. I would like to say that in another game novel I have seen, the proportion of male and female characters is unbalanced, 8 males and 2 females. The male characters are more outstanding, while the female characters are very boring, but this novel has no balance at all 🙂‍↔️

It's very beautiful. I like the content of the game and it's very rich. After watching Half Bag of Black Paradise, I really want to play it. It's very immersive. Except for the first part, which is related to the plot of the original book, it doesn't appeal to me that much. But the later parts where I started to make my own games are very beautiful. I like every game. Big boost for the author~\(≧▽≦)/~

Beautiful, very beautiful! God's game is really fun and interesting, and it's very exciting. It brings me to tears every time, and I find that I'm really good at writing forums! How come their speeches are so funny [laughs].

It's very nice and beautiful. The author's baby's facial expressions are very cute. Every game is written very carefully. He really cares about this baby. And in the later period, I felt that my writing skills were getting better and better, and every chapter was very fascinating. Although I knew it was impossible, I dreamed of publishing it. Come on, baby, keep writing, you will definitely go further and further ʢ˶ᵒ ᵕ ˂˶ʡᶻ