This Fantasy-Reality Variety Show Is Too Much, So I Choose to Turn It Over to the State

The writing is okay, it's a standard cool article, but there is one point that I think is particularly bad, that is, when the sparrow comes out, you demonstrate to the audience that it is a special effect, and at the same time you demonstrate AR to the actors and other people involved, and a real bird pops out of your AR. Isn't that weird? I felt no sense of surprise and was almost poisoned

I'll go, tell me what's going on with Sparrow. It's obviously VR. How did it become a reality? They still don't think it's strange. Give me a reason.

I'm putting the cart before the horse. I personally think that the main attractions of this novel are the fantasy copy and the star's experience and the audience's words. As for the protagonist, there is no need to spend too much pen and ink. It is no problem to just write it as a transparent person or a tool man. The protagonist type of this novel itself is relatively behind the scenes. The protagonist makes a dungeon, the star experiences the dungeon, and then the system distributes rewards, so there is no need for the protagonist to waste pen and ink, and there is no need for you to deliberately depict the plot of the protagonist pretending to be awesome. It's completely putting the cart before the horse. If I have the time, I might as well write two more copies of the fantasy world.

The imagination is okay, the plot is okay, but the variety show system plot is a bit lacking, many of which are the daily life of the protagonist.

The imagination is indeed good. The first variety show is really good, but I don't want to watch the second variety show, and there are too many daily routines, and variety shows don't account for much. This kind of novel mainly uses variety shows to attract reading, why do so many daily routines?

One thing I don't understand is that the first person said that the people for this variety show are designated by the system, and the second person later said that only two people who have been on the variety show before will be sent. What does it mean? Another point is that there are too many boring plots for the protagonist, and there are too few plots for the main variety show, which I can no longer watch...

It has nothing to do with entertainment. The fate of the national team in the novel cannot save the novel. There is not a single laugh in a novel about a variety show.

There are not many plot stories in Fantasyland. There are many plots interspersed between each Fantasyland variety show. It is super boring. I can write several chapters about the dispute over honoring the protagonist. I feel that the plot is superficial. Is this kind of honorary plot necessary? There are too many things like that. I think fantasy is the core of this book, and we should focus on making good use of fantasy to write more program plots.

There is a bug. After reading more than a dozen pictures, I see that many people can enter the illusion, and they don't need the consent of the opponent to pull them in directly. There is no limit to the number of characters in the location. The illusion directly covers the world, and then whoever you want can be directly brought out of the illusion. It's perfect.

The author's thoughts represent the protagonist's thoughts, fantasy, fantasy, what is fantasy? Everything can be created based on ideas, but you still want to take it from reality. In addition, there is a lack of entertainment variety shows in this world, and there are too many things that you can manipulate. The overall evaluation is that the subject matter is very good, but the content still has a lot of room for improvement. So I can't give a high rating.