After Handing It over to the System, the Country Praised Me as a Famous Director

The writing is okay, it's a standard cool article, but there is one point that I think is particularly bad, that is, when the sparrow comes out, you demonstrate to the audience that it is a special effect, and at the same time you demonstrate AR to the actors and other people involved, and a real bird pops out of your AR. Isn't that weird? I felt no sense of surprise and was almost poisoned

I'll go, tell me what's going on with Sparrow. It's obviously VR. How did it become a reality? They still don't think it's strange. Give me a reason.

I'm putting the cart before the horse. I personally think that the main attractions of this novel are the fantasy copy and the star's experience and the audience's words. As for the protagonist, there is no need to spend too much pen and ink. It is no problem to just write it as a transparent person or a tool man. The protagonist type of this novel itself is relatively behind the scenes. The protagonist makes a dungeon, the star experiences the dungeon, and then the system distributes rewards, so there is no need for the protagonist to waste pen and ink, and there is no need for you to deliberately depict the plot of the protagonist pretending to be awesome. It's completely putting the cart before the horse. If I have the time, I might as well write two more copies of the fantasy world.

The imagination is okay, the plot is okay, but the variety show system plot is a bit lacking, many of which are the daily life of the protagonist.

It has nothing to do with entertainment. The fate of the national team in the novel cannot save the novel. There is not a single laugh in a novel about a variety show.

There are not many plot stories in Fantasyland. There are many plots interspersed between each Fantasyland variety show. It is super boring. I can write several chapters about the dispute over honoring the protagonist. I feel that the plot is superficial. Is this kind of honorary plot necessary? There are too many things like that. I think fantasy is the core of this book, and we should focus on making good use of fantasy to write more program plots.

One thing I don't understand is that the first person said that the people for this variety show are designated by the system, and the second person later said that only two people who have been on the variety show before will be sent. What does it mean? Another point is that there are too many boring plots for the protagonist, and there are too few plots for the main variety show, which I can no longer watch...

The imagination is indeed good. The first variety show is really good, but I don't want to watch the second variety show, and there are too many daily routines, and variety shows don't account for much. This kind of novel mainly uses variety shows to attract reading, why do so many daily routines?

There is a bug. After reading more than a dozen pictures, I see that many people can enter the illusion, and they don't need the consent of the opponent to pull them in directly. There is no limit to the number of characters in the location. The illusion directly covers the world, and then whoever you want can be directly brought out of the illusion. It's perfect.

I felt bad about the first variety show, and I felt bad starting from the sixth chapter. Some people should have quit by the seventh chapter. The focus on these two chapters made me start to pick on the rest.

Chapter 24 starts to get toxic. There are some minor deviations in the previous words, but the problem is not big. It is still based on the variety show and the response. Chapter 24 is a lot of scolding, and I'm disgusted with it. Well... If you can beat Chapter 24, then this book won't be a hindrance to you.

There is a problem with the setting of this book. The fantasy requires detailed parameters to set, or is it set by the protagonist himself. The protagonist cannot realize the fuzzy concept without setting it. So what is the use of the fantasy that a group of scientists need? They are all set up. It is nothing more than bringing the book to reality, and it does not essentially help scientific research.

I saw Chapter 84 and it felt weird. The content in the fantasy world is okay, but I feel that the author is quite sympathetic to the stars in the entertainment industry, and feels that they are not even as good as ordinary people. Besides, they are all good people, not a single bad person.

The author's thoughts represent the protagonist's thoughts, fantasy, fantasy, what is fantasy? Everything can be created based on ideas, but you still want to take it from reality. In addition, there is a lack of entertainment variety shows in this world, and there are too many things that you can manipulate. The overall evaluation is that the subject matter is very good, but the content still has a lot of room for improvement. So I can't give a high rating.

There are many unreasonable places

How can I put it, it's pretty bland, whether it's using a secret realm to shoot a variety show or a science and technology powerhouse, the writing is pretty average.

So-so, I felt bored after reading the latest chapter. Also, dark games are not suitable for adaptation into variety shows. I have worked hard all day and watch variety shows just to have fun. Give me this show and most people won't like it.

There is no sense of empathy at all. If you want to write about a star, but you don't know anyone, how can you embody it? Do you want to write your name? When introducing the list, you can add the characteristics or masterpieces of real-life celebrities, and then replace the celebrity names with others. What you write now is like a cheap online drama made by amateurs. No matter how exciting your game design is, no one will watch it.

It's okay. I saw Chapter 46 and didn't want to watch it. The content of the variety show is relatively average. It mainly focuses on the shock brought by fantasy. The parts that benefit the country are well written. Also, there should be no exceptions. The little sparrow is inexplicable. Why write it if it is something that arouses suspicion?

The imagination is very good, and the ideas are bold and novel, but the daily life of shooting variety shows is too ordinary. If you say those cat-and-mouse games are fine once, then you will always get bored if you play them many times. No matter how realistic, beautiful and interesting the scenes are, you will get bored after playing for a long time. Isn't there nothing novel?

I think it's pretty cool [staring] when it's handed over to a country with a country as a back-up, it's fun to do whatever you do.

It looks good, I recommend it. I have such a great idea, 👍

How should I put it, not bad

Return of the Dragon King

I don't want to find fault, but give me 4 points of encouragement first.

After reading it, I think it's okay, but I don't know if I can keep it later. You can save it first and then read it when there are more words. It's too few and it's not enough to type.

It's very good. The character descriptions are wonderful and penetrating. The storyline is touching. I hope you will update it more!

The plot is described in detail, the characters are well drawn, and it is highly readable. I recommend it.

It's very interesting. I'll keep reading. Come on!

This is my first time reading a book like this, and it's quite interesting. The only dissatisfaction is that there are too few variety shows, most of which focus on the protagonist's personal life.