Matriarchy: I Won’t Forsake the Moon or Fail You

Here are some of the feedback in the comment area and some of my own thoughts: 1. This is my first novel, and it is also my first time as an author. There must be many problems when writing it for the first time [I have been revising the text myself]. If you have any suggestions or better ideas, you can say wow [I need all kinds of voices]. Because this book is almost finished, it seems like I won't be able to change it after it's finished, so tell me early so I can change it. 2. Regarding boys. The reproductive appearance of both men and women is normal. Men have 🐔. As for why men can still have children like this, I don't think it's important, so I didn't write it down. I leave it to your imagination. If you don't accept boys, please stop. 3. About the male protagonist. I read a lot of feedback from readers, and among all the men, the most controversial one is the role of the main husband, Song Nanshi. First of all, let me tell you my thoughts. The only protagonist in my book is the heroine Chang Su. All the other men are there to serve the heroine [none of them matter]. What the female protagonist needs is a blank slate husband with no identity background, so the character Song Nanshi was created. This is also the meaning of his existence. The meaning of his and other male protagonists' existence is to serve the female protagonist. Anyway, I think it doesn't matter who the main husband is, and the main husband doesn't have any privileges. The heroine basically treats all the husband's servants equally [anyone who has read the article will know this]. Emmm, this is what I want to say, and if you don't like this setting, you guys should just stop. 4. The emotional line and the Machiavellian line almost exist side by side, and the male does not involve himself in power, not at all. I personally don't like men being domineering in female-oriented novels, so I won't include them in the novel I write. Those of you who don't like this setting, please stop. 5. In this article, except for the three titles of emperor, concubine and princess, other neutral words are assigned to women by default, and women are the first gender by default, such as son, emperor, general, man and woman, husband and wife, etc. After many Baozi's suggestions, many words have been changed. Anyway, the neutral words that appear in the text belong to women, not men. 6. You Baozi feels that the villain's IQ is not high, hahaha. This is indeed a bit, because the author has spent all his efforts on the heroine's IQ. Another reason is that this article is fast-paced, there are no twists and turns, conspiracies, etc., So the villain is offline very quickly, and it feels a bit weak. Then there is also the reason why the author's writing style is a bit immature. I can only read it as a small article. If you don't like this setting, please stop. ❤️Finally, I emphasize that behind the heroine is the author, and the author cannot do anything to wrong the heroine.

The plot is very logical, the heroine has a good character, and the heroine is very strong. She is a princess who loves her people very much. It's not because of love that Li Nanshi is the king, it's really good. There's nothing wrong with it, I think it looks great. The intrigue between several men is very interesting. But he won't bother the heroine on business. Very measured.

It's very beautiful, the writing is smooth and natural, and the heroine has a great personality. I'm about to fall in love with the heroine (actually I've already)!!! There are no ridiculous plots so far, I like them all very much!

It's tied, very good-looking, I like Nan Shi very much, he is gentle, tolerant and generous, and I feel sorry for him the most. The other kings and servants either have prominent families (Guan Yue, brother of the Liu family, Yu Xi, Qing'an), or the heroine is obviously doting on her (Guan Yue). It is good to have one of the two, let alone Guan Yue who has both. Only Nan Shi has nothing, neither a prominent family nor favoritism. She only relies on the heroine's favor, which may be lost at any time. Those who have family confidence and favoritism can make a fuss and plunder unscrupulously. Those who have nothing to rely on can only watch and digest their emotions. The heroine of Nanshi gave birth to her first baby, Gong Chu, and her status was lower than that of the princess who watched the moon. It's really sad and pitiful. I only have the title of Queen, but in fact, I can't compare to other queens 😢😢 I hope Nan Shi will have more scenes and have a royal daughter by her side. I also hope that the heroine can pamper Nan Shi more. Please give me a thumbs up to the author🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺

It's beautifully written, and each person's character is well-established. The relationship between the heroine and her husband is also very sweet and gentle. I like this kind of passionate, affectionate and gentle heroine. She won't dislike a certain husband just because of a little trick to win favor. It's just a matter of petty interest. She will indulge but not live up to it. She has rules and bottom lines and principles. It's good that competition between husbands is not life-threatening. Finally, the boys are even more awesome. They are all considered women. Haha, what's wrong with the boys? I hope the author will work hard and update [laughs]

The heroine is rational, courageous, open-minded, and possesses both the ability to change the world and the gentleness of water. I haven't read a story like this in a long time. The heroine is very powerful, she treats her husband very well, and at the same time, it's really rare that she doesn't get swayed by love. The male protagonists have different personalities, but their emotions towards the female protagonist are the same. Come on, author, I really like your question.

The plot is quite compact and not too draggy. The heroine is very strong and smart. He and Song are very easy to drink. The men all have different styles and are very good-looking.

It's quite interesting to watch. The female protagonist is not romantically inclined, is decisive in killing, has strategy and strength. There are also various male protagonists, and the plot line is also very complete. The heroine's status has always been high, and the things she does are worthy of her status. This is the real female character novel, not the male pornographic novel disguised as a female character! The frequency of one update a day is too little! It's totally not enough to watch. The most important thing is not to stop updating!!!

The heroine has her own considerations when doing things, she is decisive in doing things, and the writing is very beautiful.

Your writing is so beautiful. The heroine is strategic and has absolute strength. I really like strong women [laughing][laughing][laughing]. The plot is also very exciting and interesting. I don't often use paragraph comments, but I want to say that the writing is really good and I like it very much. Finished with flowers! Unknowingly, it came to an end. Su Sheng's capital letters make people feel beautiful. In this story, there is no heart-rending suffering deliberately depicted, no fate so tragic that people cannot bear to read about it; there are no hateful villains, and no extreme malice that makes people gnash their teeth in hatred. Even if there are some small villains, they are just shallow waves in the story and never really cover the light. Avoid violent conflicts and bloody entanglements. Wen Wen slowly told a story - there is a king who stands on the top of the mountain, there are people who accompany him, and there are also ministers who stand in the court and care about the world. The feeling it gives me is Clean, warm and moist, like a handful of water, like a piece of moonlight (❁´ω`❁) ❤ (ɔˆз(ˆ⌣ˆc) Heroine Changsu Standing in the court, she can firmly hold up the weight of a country, has a heart for all people, and is a truly wise king; But when she returned to the harem, she was willing to lean down and listen gently and patiently to every word of the person beside her. She is outstanding enough to be looked up to by the world, yet gentle enough to make everyone around her feel that they are cherished. Such a heroine deserves to be loved so deeply and deserves such a happy ending. つ♡⊂ Next comes the male protagonists. It's not a mindless emotional line. They meet each other and know each other, which makes people feel beautiful. Song Nan Poetry From the shy young man who chased after the heroine and called "sister" when they first met in Xiangcheng, to the master of the middle palace who later wore a phoenix crown and stood side by side with her. Grow a lot. She is no longer the young man of the Song family who only looks up to her, but the queen who she can entrust with her back, the harem and even half of the world. Watching the Moon ☞The little fox who is so cute and pampered. The first one to come to Xiangcheng and find his wife Even in the harem, it is very interesting to quarrel with other male protagonists, and when jealous, he will sit next to the female protagonist and act coquettishly. What really impressed me was their meeting. Oops, you are really good at writing. The truth of the accidental misunderstanding is that he wants to show his best side to the person he likes, so he wears such bright colors. Those who watch it feel soft in their hearts. I really like this place (づ￣3￣)づ╭❤~ Li Muchi When Zuo Xiang's mansion collapsed, he couldn't care about anything, dragging his sick body to see her. At that moment, all the considerations and prides retreated, and my heart and eyes were filled with only the heroine (crying) In fact, I want to see the relationship between him and the heroine when he was still in the position of Queen Mother. I want to see the man who Guanyue would also think that his status is beyond the reach of his family and there is nothing he can do. He is a noble and possessive man. It's great, let's continue to be happy like this. (★≧▽^))★☆ Finally It's not a loss if you enter the trap, I'm glad you met him. Show your heart to Su Sheng.